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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Bin tumhare hote hue tumse baatein karoon.. agar tum saath ho.. !

Beautiful shot Manisha... loved it too good.. ⭐️👏

The way Nidhi expressed her relief n love to get wet in the rains,,, the impact upon Ashu is felt here.. !

He imagined her with himself.. n talked to her when he himself got wet in the same way she was doing ,,! What a beautiful way to express how he got attracted to her n in the same time felt her presence.. !

Awesomely thought n written dear.. keep the good job going,,, !

God bless...

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

When one gets attracted to someone, it's the eyes, kind words, smile and the fact that they can make you smile whenever they can!

Very beautiful shot Manisha, as usual once again👏

In awe of your works, as i have always been! Loved to see how Ashu's attitude changed as Nidhi's words and action were echoing into hi heart! Winsome for him, cos he cud not go away what he saw, ans heard!

He, who hated the mud out of the rains, is enjoying the very drops pouring on to his face and body, same way they were doing to Nidhi! This attraction is far away from the worries, hatred and frustrations he hides within himself! Purely a divine feeling, and leading to himself talking to her, in his own way to express gratitude to Nidhi, to let her know how her one act has made him to live the beginning of the beauty of life, as it comes!

Awesome and a romantic touch to the narrative! Loved it, thanks a lot, luv ya more and more ❤️ 🤗

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You are not what you show

Dr Ashutosh was going through the corridor when he saw an old man in his housekeeping department cleaning the corridor. His hands were trembling and his eyes were reddish...he could make out from his looks that the man was sick. He went upto him and asked " aap ki tabiyat theek nahi hai to aap kaam kyun kar rahe hain...kya naam hai aapka? The man was startled to hear his voice and with his trembling voice he told him that he was having fever but his supervisor didn't grant him leave threatening that he would have to lose his job if he went on a leave as the Dean of this hospital doesn't like people taking unplanned leaves. Dr Ashutosh immediately called the supervisor and scolded him for doing this in his name. He sent that man on leave and told him to come back only when he is perfectly fine. He thanked Ashutosh and went home and the housekeeping supervisor was asked to give an explanation in writing regarding this kind of a behavior with his subordinates. Nidhi who was observing everything from a distance was impressed with his generosity. She always knew that there is a kind hearted person behind this hardstone face but today she got a proof of the same. She smiled to herself and left from there feeling thankful to Dr Ashutosh for helping someone in need.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Yes his generosity is always wondered by many n applauded by some,,, !

Lovely n very fine shot Manisha... ⭐️👏

Too good to see Nidhi watching him n confirming the generous heart behind the heartstone.. !

Marve it is.. !

Keep going... God bless.. !

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very nice compilation of such a brilliant scene 👏

Nidhi, who had a strong feeling of Ashu as a good heart behind the heartstone, gets the proof that he really is! I liked how you have thoughtfully created such a little scene, with the adorable side of Ashu is shown as the best! His pure and gentle heart can be angry, but can never see anyone in dismay and someone taking the advantage of his name and defaming him!

Loved how he took the initiative to let the old keeper getting leave and did the needful rest! Lovely, and modest side of Ashu has come out! Loved to see Nidhi watching him and slowly and gradually a nice feeling is embellished!

Thanks and luvz ❤️ 🤗