Ashni TS: The other side of you; Epilogue Pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Anger, frustration or what, Ashu burst out on Nidhi, and tried every bit to make her feel degrade. But what can be a polite talk, he cud not gave her. His this behaviour has pushed the seniors to make Nidhi a puppet in their hands to take the revenge for their own follies! Even in the whole show, i felt bad to this nature of his!
Things will get change from now, cos he will feel his mistake he already is thinking!
I loved Nidhi's attitude and maturity towards the seniors, who is all set to set them, later. But i felt bad for her mind and soul. She don't have the proof to tell the Dean, that it was all planned.
I loved how she felt cool in the lovely nature at the poolside, and forgot all those things that ere hurting her! AM now waiting for Ashu to come forward and save her, if anything bad happens to her. Ashu is feeling responsible for her safety right now, so this is going to be a scene to watch from your perfect pen to write it down and present! 👏
Thanks a lot Manisha for this beautiful update ⭐️ It really made me feel the tug that Ashu is feeling towards Nidhi. And his saving her, or whatever you have planned will surely make Nidhi pulling towards him automatically, cos enclose to each other in their minds, they won't be able to go away! 😉
Thanks Sweetie, for the overwhelming episode, that gave different natures of one's mind!
Luv ya ❤️ 🤗
Am awe inspired with your works dear!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very late today, will be back tomorrow...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice update Manisha... ⭐️👏


Thanks a lot Bhaiya😃🤗

Hardsone is very strict n the delicate Nidhi cud not bear the anger,, n at the other hand she is all dropped in the pit that she is fearing from the seniors... !
Ridiculous deed of the seniors... the bad can never be good..is it,, ?.. :(
It was sad to see Nidhi in tears,,, but is determined to take her revenge later,,, but i feel the Dean will took the charge beforehand,,, n that will be a grace for Nidhi as well as for her friends,,, n they all will see the other side of him as per the Title.. !
Wud love to see the next part,, cos Ashu is after her n can be a perfect help to her,, as she is surrounded with the bad boy.. !
Will wait for that.. !

Yeah the title is itself suggestive😃
I hope you like the last part as well😃
Nidhi would surely get to see his other side soon😃

Nice conceptualisation,,, of the whole chappy n very thoughtfully you have placed the base to show Ashu's other side.,, of a kind heart n helpful to the needy.. !
Lovely., nice n stupendous... !
Thanks dear n God bless..
I'm glad to know this Bhaiya😃
Your appreciation has always been motivating to me and i owe a lot to you🤗



Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Anger, frustration or what, Ashu burst out on Nidhi, and tried every bit to make her feel degrade. But what can be a polite talk, he cud not gave her. His this behaviour has pushed the seniors to make Nidhi a puppet in their hands to take the revenge for their own follies! Even in the whole show, i felt bad to this nature of his!

Such people do exist Bhabhi who use someone's aura to their benefit and thats what happened with Nidhi😳. But soon she'll get to see what he actually is😃

Things will get change from now, cos he will feel his mistake he already is thinking!
I loved Nidhi's attitude and maturity towards the seniors, who is all set to set them, later. But i felt bad for her mind and soul. She don't have the proof to tell the Dean, that it was all planned.
Soon everything would be sorted out and he would himself take charge of things😃

I loved how she felt cool in the lovely nature at the poolside, and forgot all those things that ere hurting her! AM now waiting for Ashu to come forward and save her, if anything bad happens to her. Ashu is feeling responsible for her safety right now, so this is going to be a scene to watch from your perfect pen to write it down and present! 👏
Hope you like it...am a bit nervous this time😳
Ashu helping her and she getting to see his better side😃
Thanks a lot Manisha for this beautiful update ⭐️ It really made me feel the tug that Ashu is feeling towards Nidhi. And his saving her, or whatever you have planned will surely make Nidhi pulling towards him automatically, cos enclose to each other in their minds, they won't be able to go away! 😉
Thanks Sweetie, for the overwhelming episode, that gave different natures of one's mind!
Luv ya ❤️ 🤗
Am awe inspired with your works dear!!!

Thanks a lot Bhabhi...both of them came close to each other as they found what they both were searching for...in their life partners😃
He would soon be there for her help and would take charge of everything...hope you like the last part as well😃



Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you sooo much Anjani...hope to read you some day😛
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Last part

Rocky was coming close to Nidhi with an evil smile on his face..."achha to tum Dean ko bataogi...lekin kya wo tumhari baat sunenge?" he started laughing after saying this. Nidhi was getting more and more anxious as he was constantly getting closer to her..."tum aage mat bado...warna main..". She tried to stop him but he didn't..."warna kya?" he questioned her. She realized his intentions and tried to escape from there...but he held her hand tightly and pushed her into the swimming pool. Nidhi was shocked at this sudden turn of events and she tried to stabilize herself in the pool...Rocky stood there teasing her as he was very happy to see her so helpless today in front of him. " Bhaagna chahti thi na...jaao...bhaag jaao yahan se... and he kept on mocking her...she stood there with her arms folded onto her chest with tears in her eyes...she tried to come out of the pool but found him standing there everytime she reached the edge of the pool... she prayed that someone comes there and helps her out of this situation but everyone was busy in the party. "Tumhe kya lagta hai koi aayega yahan tumhari madad ke liye... Bhool jaao...koi nahi aane wala... He knew what she was waiting for at this moment. She shouldn't have come to the party...she thought and tears rolled down from her eyes.

Jo maine aaj tumhare saath kiya wo mujhe bahut pehle kar dena chahiye tha... lekin koi baat nahi...pehle nahi to aaj hi sahi..." he felt as if his revenge was finally over today. She closed her eyes in embarrassment and she didn't respond to anything he said...when suddenly Rocky felt a jerk and someone turned him around forcefully...before he could realize what happened ...he received a tight slap on his face followed by a thump on his tummy. By the time he recovered from this shock...he realized that Dr Ashutosh was standing right in front of him with his eyes red due to rage... "Tum kya kar rahe the yahan pe... Maine sab dekh liya hai...tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui? aise behave karte hain apne colleagues ke saath?" he asked him loudly. Rocky fumbled with words as he knew there couldn't be any reason to justify his acts in front of him. Dr Ashutosh continued..."agar tumhe ladki ki izzat karni nahi aati to kam se kam unki beizzati to mat karo...tumhe iski saza zaroor milegi...kal aakar apna suspension letter le jaana...lekin abhi ke liye just go from here...just leave at once I said..". He ordered him and Rocky instantly went away from there as he knew Dean wont spare him easily.

Nidhi was so thankful to him that he came there on time...she had tears in her eyes but she composed herself. She was about to move out of the pool when she realized that her clothes were all wet and she couldn't come out like this in her short dress. Dr Ashutosh realized her anxiety and he asked everyone who had gathered there because of the chaos to leave...only Deepa was asked to be there for Nidhi. He took off his blazer and kept it on the table nearby...he turned around and asked her to come out of the pool and wear his blazer. He asked Deepa to help her out and she did as she was told. When she was comfortable she said...Thank you so much Sir...aap nahi aate to... He heard this and turned around... he saw her standing with her eyes facing downwards and she was still feeling ashamed of what Rocky did with her. " Dr Nidhi aapko embarrassed feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...sharm to use aani chahiye jo aisi harkat karta hai...use iski saza zaroor milegi..." he assured her.

He asked both of them whether they had their dinner to which they denied...he asked the waiters to bring their dinner and coffee for both of them there only and that he would drop them home after that. He wont let her go alone in wet clothes like this at this time of night. He went to the party hall while both of them had their dinner. Nidhi told Deepa how Rocky had planned everything so that she could be punished by the Dean. Deepa was shocked that he was holding grudges against her since such a long time...but she was happy that now atleast he would be punished for what he did with her. Nidhi was so thankful to him for coming for her help on time but Deepa wondered how did he know that she was here when even she herself didn't know.

Nidhi realized that whatever she was saying was right...that means he was keeping an eye on everything and everyone in the hall. There was no other way that someone would know that she was here...she was really impressed with the way he did everything for her...he is a gentleman for sure...he thought. After they finished their dinner...Dr Ashutosh offered to drop her home...but she told him that she has to go to Deepa's home and stay there tonight. He asked both of them to get inside the car and he drove to the place told by them. He saw Nidhi through the rear view mirror...she was sitting there quietly...her silence and her eyes spoke so much...he knew she was a bubbly girl who was chatting everytime...but today she was quiet...to some extent he too was responsible for her agony...only if he wasn't so strict with her...but he has been like this always...then why is he feeling guilty today...he didn't understand what was making him uncomfortable today? He asked her what revenge was Rocky talking about and she told her the incident that happened in her college days.

Soon they reached Deepa's home and he dropped both of them there...when Nidhi thanked him and was about to go inside...he called her name and she turned around... "Aaj jo kuchh bhi hua use yaad rakhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...aap use bhool jayen wohi aapke liye achha hai...kal aap chhutti le lo...aapko rest ki zaroorat hai ..." he told her. Nidhi told him that she was fine and that she could come for her duty but he insisted that she should take a leave as he needs to handle Rocky in his way and that he doesn't want her to be present there. Nidhi thanked him inside her heart for being so considerate and she went inside the house. He drove to his home while Nidhi today felt that there is another side to him which he hides from the entire world. He has a soft heart which cares for people and is ready to help everyone but he projects himself as a strict Dean in front of others who wont take any nonsense from anyone.

She was thinking about him when Deepa came with milk and saw her lost in her thoughts... Kya soch rahi hai...kiske khayalon mein khoyi hui hai? " she asked. Nidhi told her that she was trying to figure out who is the real Dr Ashutosh...one that they see in the hospital or the one who helped her today...both the personalities are so contrasting...she is unable to figure out. Deepa told her that may be there is some reason for him to be like this... which no one had any clue and why should they bother...they are just interns there and they would be leaving the hospital in some time. Nidhi agreed to this but somewhere her heart told her that he has something in his past which has made him like this...she wanted to know what it was...but how...she had no idea...she decided to try and find out more about him gradually during her stay in that hospital.


End of the story😊
So this story ends here... hope you enjoyed reading this... i know it has been a short one but this was planned this way only😊
Love you all for your support and appreciation for my works😃
Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome n a very thoughtful ending Manisha... ⭐️👏
I do feel this TS can have a sequel ... as the end seems to be unfinished., with some revelations yet to be found.. !
The TS.,, !
What to say.. ! The narrative easily understood with every minute details... !!!👏
As was projected,, Ashu came in time to save Nidhi.,, n did all the needful with his gentle behaviour ..!
Already a gem of a person.,. he has shown his other side to the World,, where he is a soft heart person who cant see the cruelty towards anyone.. !
Her thanks were few,, but were totally grabbed by him.. ! Her hitches were many.. but he did not even mentioned a single one.. n made the way for her to come out of the incidental pool.. !

Loved to see all going well,, n he gave Nidhi a leave as he saw thru the rear view what she cud not spoke up.. !
Beautiful to see him as a gentle man in front of Nidhi.. n she is determined to seek out what's lying behind his hardness..
Thanks for showing the lovely side of Ashutosh,,, n a feeling of more likeliness towards him..
God bless..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Never judge someone from the words of others!
Today Ashu has proved it! I wish his true side comes to every one the day they meet him, but he never let anyone to know him precisely ever!
Lovely update, rather ending Manisha dear 👏
But i too see some more chapters or one, to see the conclusion, as this seems a sketchy end. Though everything is clear, but one more detail is needed 😳 Wud die to have it from your pen dear 🤗
What lies for worst, Ashu gave him and saved his intern, without even given a second to waste!
Loved his eyes went away from the wet and fearing Nidhi, and he ordered every one to leave except Deepa! And more loved was his coat lying there for her to cover herself. ❤️
What a sweet gesture of a gentle man, when it comes to the respect for a lady!!! ⭐️
His caring nature took Nidhi's heart away, the dinner, the coffee are normal things, But the way he let them reach her, it was awe struck!
He knew what she was going through, and he did not let her come out with it. Instead, he let her have good rest back home and promised her to do the needful to the bad guy at Kgh!
What lovely man! This is what Nidhi is left with ❤️
She has the inclination that some hard feelings lies behind his rude behaviour, and is firm to know it.
Very fine description of the several incidents taking place : the pool, the save, the car, the bye, the recalling and the sweetness lying in her heart for him. The unknown, but a known feeling of the first love!
Thanks Sweetie, for the beneficial, am floored by your pen by now, luv ya ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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👏 Thank you...
No continuation for this story.???...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

👏 Thank you...

No continuation for this story.???...


I'll be writing an epilogue as requested by Bro and Bhabhi 😊🤗
Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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