Ashni OS: Kuchh to log kahenge; Epilogue on page 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I'm thinking ki story ka sequel likh hi daalu...what say 😉
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Pls do write ❤️ 🤗


Ok Bhabhi i'll try to write and post tday😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sequel Part 1

Seven years passed by since Nidhi published her first book on their love story and she had received great applauds for her work. Their daughter Pari too came to know about the struggles her parents went through in their efforts to be together in love. She was proud of them for facing so much for their love and now she had grown to be just like her mother with qualities of her father too. She is a very beautiful girl with a noble heart as well. She is now in final year of her graduation and had made many new friends in college and many of her school mates too were in contact with her still. Many guys tried hard to woo her with their charm and many expressed their love for her as well...but she didn't accept anyone's love as she believed that true love is to be felt...and till now there was no one with whom she felt that kind of attachment and bond.

She always believed that she would want a partner for herself who would share a similar level of understanding as her parents do till date. But till now there was no one and therefore she didn't pay any heed to anyone who proposed her so far. Her friends too teased her for her attitude as she never liked anyone while other girls kept drooling upon those guys. But things changed after a new Professor joined the college...she instantly felt some kind of an attraction towards him the day she accidently bumped into him. That was his first day in college and he was searching for Principal's office when she met him. Later she came to know that he was their new professor and she slowly lost herself to him.

She kept on following him without him knowing and tried to know all about him...her friends knew all about her new found feelings and they tried to tell her that he wasn't the right person for her and that there was a lot of age gap between them. But love knows no boundaries and same thing happened with Pari... She was slowly getting deeper and deeper into love with him...I would call it infatuation still...but as happens with everyone who experiences this kind of a feeling for the first time...for her it was her first love... rather love at first sight. She couldn't think of anything else and she kept on following him for almost 3 months. Gradually he ...see now she has been following him for 3 months and you all don't even know his name till now... He is Professor Siddhant Mehra... 36 year old Professor in Economics. So now that I have introduced him, the story would move ahead.

But how come Pari is into Economics? You all must be thinking the same...isnt it? Actually Ashu wanted Pari to become a doc just like him and Nidhi...but she didn't want the same and instead wanted to take up Commerce. So he didn't force his thoughts on her and she took up the subjects of her choice. So with this background I tell you that Professor Siddhant gradually realized that she had been following him. So one day he called her in the staff room when no one else was there and asked her the reason why has she been following him since so many months?

Pari was shocked at this revelation and she had to immediately search for answer to this. She decided not to beat around the bush and be straight forward in her approach. She confessed to him that she had been following him secretly and that she loved him. He became furious to know this and he believed that this was her immaturity which had led to her falling in love with him.

Siddhant: do you even know what you are doing? You are my student and its just an act of immaturity from your side. You should rather concentrate on your studies and career at this point and here you are following me like this. Do you know the consequences of all this? What if I inform your parents about this?

Pari: Sir, I know what you think about me but believe me I'm not like others...I really love you...but I don't demand anything in return...because my parents have taught me love is not about give and take...its only about giving... giving happiness to the people you love...

Siddhant (interrupting her): how much do you know me? Kitna time hua hai mujhe is college mein aaye huye? (he tried to ease the situation a bit now realizing the gravity of situation).

Pari: Sir bahut zyada nahi but itna to jaan gayi hu ki aap ki wife ab nahi hai...2 saal pehle unki death ho gayi thi ek accident mein...and aap uske baad bilkul akele hain...main aapka akelapan door karna chahti hu Sir...

Siddhant: shut up...just shut up... aaj ke baad is tarah ki baat mujhse mat karna... samjhi tum... now go back to your class...if you repeat such a thing again...i'll leave this college and theis city forever... Because I don't want you to spoil your life for me... You get me... Now leave...

Pari had tears in her eyes and she left from there... After this she stopped following him as she feared losing him forever...now atleast she could see him in front of his eyes. What if he left the college and the city? ...this thought scared her and she became very quiet from now onwards... not that usual Pari that she was earlier. Her friends were worried for her and Ashu and Nidhi too noticed the change in her. They tried asking her many times but she never revealed anything...just said that she was stressed because of her studies and upcoming exams. But her parents heart knew her very well...she was not someone who would be scared or worried of exams...there was something else which was breaking her inside.

They decided to find out the reason for their daughter's anxiety and troubles and for this they had to enquire from her friends...but before that they need to take her best friend into confidence so that Pari doesn't come to know about this. Nidhi told Ashu that she would talk to Kirti...Pari's best friend in college and try and find out everything. Ashu gave her the responsibility and asked her to be careful while talking to her and Nidhi assured him that she would manage everything.


End of this part😊

Hope you enjoyed reading this😊


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome..,, as its narration is of such a high level... ⭐️👏
Loved the fab sequel start.. ! Liked the situations one can fall into n then there is no looking back.. !
So.. like parents like daughter.. 😳
She similarly falls for a senior n that her teacher ,, ! Nice choice of stream... kahin toh you got relieved from the subject of Meds.. 😛
Like the way Prof. Sid confront her.. cos that was the only way to let the girl go away from him.,,!
But will that be ever possible... ??/
Nidhi is after Kirti now... lets see how far she goes to find out their Pari's life n trauma,, !
Fine start... looking forward to know what Ashni gets n how they react... as they will face the same situation they had while falling in love.. !
Will wait for the next... God bless... 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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How about them as Pari n Sid... 😳



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Quite an impressive part Manisha 👏
I loved how you have shown the grown up Pari, just like her mother, and in search of the love she feels has to be like her parents. And why not? The love that is true, can always be felt!
History has repeated itself and Pari, leaving all the young and impressive boys wooing, has fallen for the Professor, similarly old in age with a sad life in the past.
I loved the way you have made Sid finding the words to make her ways apart from him. he needs not her to spoil her life all cos of him and must be his past was lovable and he can not go away from it!
Whatever be it, his action is applauding cos he has told her to concentrate on studies and not on him.
Pari, is quite, same as Nidhi became when her family rejected Ashu and they made parts. I do wish to see how AshNi wud react to the same situation they will see themselves.
Once Cv eloped with Nidhi's mother, but cud not gave nod to Nidhi's love. Today, when AshNi will see their world in love with age gap Prof. what will happen?
It will be interesting to seek out!
Thanks for the sequel started dear ⭐️ loved reading the emotional touch and beautifully penned down!
Luv ya for all your efforts, stay blessed! ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Awesome..,, as its narration is of such a high level... ⭐️👏

Loved the fab sequel start.. ! Liked the situations one can fall into n then there is no looking back.. !
So.. like parents like daughter.. 😳
She similarly falls for a senior n that her teacher ,, ! Nice choice of stream... kahin toh you got relieved from the subject of Meds.. 😛
Like the way Prof. Sid confront her.. cos that was the only way to let the girl go away from him.,,!
But will that be ever possible... ??/
Nidhi is after Kirti now... lets see how far she goes to find out their Pari's life n trauma,, !
Fine start... looking forward to know what Ashni gets n how they react... as they will face the same situation they had while falling in love.. !
Will wait for the next... God bless... 😊


@red...😆🤣...I deliberately did so😆
Thanks for the brilliant review as always😃👏
I had planned this sequel on these lines only but wasnt able to think of an appropriate start...thats why took so much time😳
When someone faces similar situations as they faced...then only they realise others perspective... this sequel is meant to portray this only😛
Hope you would like the way the story progresses😃
Bless you too Bhaiya🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

How about them as Pari n Sid... 😳




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I couldn't have thought of someone better than these two...thanks Bhaiya😃🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Quite an impressive part Manisha 👏

I loved how you have shown the grown up Pari, just like her mother, and in search of the love she feels has to be like her parents. And why not? The love that is true, can always be felt!
History has repeated itself and Pari, leaving all the young and impressive boys wooing, has fallen for the Professor, similarly old in age with a sad life in the past.
I loved the way you have made Sid finding the words to make her ways apart from him. he needs not her to spoil her life all cos of him and must be his past was lovable and he can not go away from it!
Whatever be it, his action is applauding cos he has told her to concentrate on studies and not on him.
Pari, is quite, same as Nidhi became when her family rejected Ashu and they made parts. I do wish to see how AshNi wud react to the same situation they will see themselves.
Once Cv eloped with Nidhi's mother, but cud not gave nod to Nidhi's love. Today, when AshNi will see their world in love with age gap Prof. what will happen?
It will be interesting to seek out!
Thanks for the sequel started dear ⭐️ loved reading the emotional touch and beautifully penned down!
Luv ya for all your efforts, stay blessed! ❤️ 🤗


Thanks a lot Bhabhi... I am just trying to present a hypothetical situation where they both face a similar situation with their kid which they faced so many years back...hopefully you would like this😳
I loved to read your comment as always and hope to recieve similar love and affection from you always😃🤗
Love you too❤️🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Last part

Nidhi and Ashu decided to send Pari to her Nanu's place for some days so that she can have some change in her environment and also he can cheer her up. They knew how close she was to CV...so this way they can find out about her problems easily without her knowing. Although Pari didn't want to go but she agreed when both of insisted saying that her Nanu is really missing her as its been long since she went alone to stay with him. Nidhi had told CV everything about Pari's behavior these days and he only suggested that she should come and stay with him for some days.

After Pari left for her Nanu's home in Dehradun...Nidhi called up Kirti and expressed her desire to meet her. They decided to meet at a restaurant in the evening and there after a lot of questioning, she revealed everything about Siddhant and what happened between both of them. Nidhi was shocked to know about all this...her Pari in love...and that too with her Professor. She was unable to come to terms with this truth and also that she didn't share anything with them and kept on suffering everything alone. She composed herself and left from there after convincing Kirti not to tell anything to Pari.

She went home and kept on thinking about the days when she too fell in love with Ashu and how CV had opposed her decision... Destiny would make them face such a situation once again their life...but this time they would be on the other side of the table...she didn't know how will Ashu react when he comes to know about this. She was lost in her thoughts when Ashu came back home...he saw her like this and realized that there is something that is disturbing her. He came and sat close to her and placed his hand on hers...kya baat hai? Kya soch rahi ho? he asked. She was brought out of her thoughts and saw him so close to her. She tried avoiding his questions about her meeting with Kirti but as expected Ashu won't relent easily... she had to tell him everything that Kirti told her.

Ashu was disturbed to know the truth and similar thought came to his mind as the ones crowding her mind some time back. He quietly got up and went to the bed room and recollected the times when he and Nidhi were going through everything in love. But what to do now?...this question pierced his heart and he didn't know how to react. He kept on thinking about Siddhant all through the night...how is he as a person?...whether he deserves their Pari?...is he the right person for her?... and their age gap? Can he see their daughter go through all what they had to... but what if they accepted this relationship? How would the society react... if they opposed ...is it right on their part? He was in a dilemma and he had no way out of this.

Nidhi came inside and he shared his heart with her and both of them had tears in their eyes. Nidhi decided that she would call her father to Lucknow ... Now only he could help them out of this... but before that they need to find out everything about Siddhant. Next morning she called up CV and asked him to come to Lucknow with Pari...also Ashu decided to find about Siddhant...he went to her college and enquired about him... Everyone gave a positive response about him and he now wanted to see who this person is? He went towards the staff room as told by someone that he would be there this time. He went to the staff room and was about to enter when something made him stop. He couldn't gather courage to go inside and he kept on standing at the door itself.

He saw Siddhant sitting inside the staff room and working on some assignments... The way he was engrossed in his work...reminded him of his days when he was so passionate about his work. His gestures...his mannersims gave him a feeling that he is a decent person but at present it wont be right to meet him...as kirti had told that he had scolded Pari when she expressed her feelings in front of him. So it is very important to handle this situation delicately as any wrong step could spoil their daughter's life and reputation. He went back home where CV was supposed to come in the evening with Pari. He told Nidhi what happened in the college and why he didn't talk to Siddhant...she appreciated his thoughtfulness and both of them waited for CV now.

CV came with Pari in the evening and both Ashu and Nidhi were very happy to meet him after so long. Pari also was feeling better now...they could see this from her face...they were sure she couldn't remain melancholy when she was with CV. They all had a nice time in the evening and later all of them had dinner together. After Pari went off to sleep, they all sat down to talk...Nidhi told him about her love for Siddhant and how he had sent her away strictly and didn't accept her proposal. CV was surprised to know this...how things came back to all of them this way. But he could feel that Siddhant is a gentleman as he wanted Pari to concentrate on her career rather than fall for him. But seeing Ashu and Nidhi's anxiety, he could make out what they were going through as he too experienced the same thing many years back.

CV: tum dono kya chahte ho?

Ashu: hum to apni Pari ki khushi chahte hain...lekin kya Siddhant uske liye theek hai? Wo ek Professor aur Pari abhi bahut chhoti hai... Use abhi itni samajh nahi hai ki uske is faisle ka kya nateeja ho sakta hai?

CV: to tumhe bhi aisa hi laga na jaisa mujhe us waqt laga tha... Maa Baap ke liye apni Beti ki khushi hi sab se important hoti hai... Main bhi wohi chahta tha aur aaj tum bhi... Ab samajh mein aaya ki main us waqt tumhare pyar ke khilaaf kyun tha? Jab hum samaaj mein rehte hai to uske niyam kanoon manne hi padte hain...

Ashu: samaj ne humare liye kya kiya hai? Jab hum dono alag the to yeh samaj hume dilaasa dene nahi aaya tha aur aaj jab hum saath hain to wo humare saath khush hai... to iska matlab to yehi hua na ki hume wo karna chahiye jisme hume khushi mile...

Nidhi: Baba aisi baat nahi hai...hume apni Pari pe poora vishwas hai...wo koi galat kadam nahi uthayegi...

Ashu: hume is baat se aitraz nahi hai ki usne apne se badi umar ke insaan se pyaar kiya...hume bas is baat ki fikr hai ki kya Siddhant use wohi pyaar de payega jiski wo hakdaar hai? Uska ek past hai... Kya wo apne past se bahar nikal kar Pari ko apna payega? Hum dono bas Pari ko khush dekhna chahte hain?

CV: mujhe khushi hai ki tum wo galti nahi karoge jo maine ki thi? Main samaj ke darr se apni beti ko kho hi baitha tha...lekin mujhe khushi hai ki baad mein mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas hua aur maine uske pyaar ko accept kiya...lekin ab tum kya karoge?

Nidhi: mujhe lagta hai ki hume wait karna chahiye... Agar Siddhant hi humari Pari ke liye bana hai to ek din wo uske pyaar ko ek din zaroor accept karega... Hume bas itna dhyan rakhna hi ki Pari khush rahe... jab tak use uska pyaar nahi milta...hume uska sahara banna hai...

Ashu: hmm... Use uske hisse ki koshish karni hi hogi... Pyaar ke liye har kisi ko ladna hi padta hai...

Nidhi: haan Baba yeh theek keh rahe hain... Hume apne parivaar ka support nahi tha lekin humari Pari ko wo nahi sehna padega...par use hi Siddhant ko uske pyaar ka ehsaas karana hoga...

CV was proud of their decision and satisfied with their stand and maturity on this complex situation... he left for Dehradun the next day. Ashu and Nidhi without telling anything directly... tried to instill the confidence to fight for your love in their daughter. She gradually came out of her depression and with a new life of self belief instilled by her parents in her... decided to make him realize that she truly loved him. Gradually with her efforts Siddhant accepted that he too loves her and that he wanted to marry her. Pari told her parents about him and they happily accepted him for her and both of them got married on a suitable day.

Ashu never told his daughter that he played a significant role in Siddhant accepting her in his life. When Siddhant started to develop feelings for her... He was scared of the reaction they both would have to face because of their age difference. It was then that he came to know about Ashu and Nidhi's past from Pari...he met Ashu and he advised him to follow his heart and not think about the society as he and Nidhi did in the past. He assured him of his daughter's love and that following rules of the society is important...but never is it more important than ones own happiness and love. Love knows no bounds and age difference between the two is never a hurdle in developing a compatibility and understanding between each other. Siddhant understood everything and finally with his support...he was able to come out of his dilemma and accept Pari's love.


The end to this story😃
Hope you enjoyed reading the sequel😃
Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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