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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

Hello Wonderful Ashnians..

Here i am presenting a short try from myself again.,,, !

I have written this few years ago,, n today after a few edits me going to post this for all of you..

The start of Nidhi's profession,, n her leaving from there ... ! Actually this is what happened in the story.. i penned down thru my words.. 😳
Hope you all will like it..
plzz if possible do comment n like.. for the activity of the Forum...
😃

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Nidhi came visiting KGh,,, not knowing what lies for her there.. !

She met other interns.. n thought of a friendly group.. but hardly she knew that the dean.. or the doc who is going to take their first ever class .. is none other that the one she had swallowed money for her car getting damaged.. when no one was on fault actually..

Right now.. he is there.. saying few words to his new interns he is going to lead.. n there she is hiding behind her files.. n not able to do so cos he a good n sharp eyed man himself..

He saw her.. not able to recognise her behind her files,, he asked her to stand up.. n there stood the girl.. who he cud not see properly.. again..😳

Now came the OT scene... she had to land herself in helping The Dr. Ashutosh Mathur.. !!!

Trembling,, shivering,, she called Anji told her her misery n braved herself to the man n stood there with her face masked with the medical kit...

He asked her to give the instruments... she failed to recognise any of them..

he asked her to pay attention... she failed to continued to look at him in the dangerous form ever now.. 🤢

The angry doc looked at Dr. mallika... she told her to pay attention... then was angrily told to do so.. n all in vain... this was the time for The Ashutosh to start himself..

He finished his duty first.. all with good n patience of mind.. told Mallika to do the rest n came out.. but before informing her to send Dr. Nidhi to his cabin...

No,, never,, why,,, why me,,, thought the " innocent " 😉

Nidhi was not,,, not prepared,,, but she had to do it today.. she removed the medical gown.,, but not the mask..

He asked her to " come in "

Tried to calm himself n told Dr. Nidhi to remove her mask..

Nidhi tried all her best today..

Nidhi told him.." Sir i dont belong to this profession at all.. plzz fire me.. or tell in the papers that i failed.. "

He asked her continuously to remove her mask.. she did.. n he with a little but a grand smile on his cheeks only.. came to know everything that was happenning with Nidhi the whole day..

He saw her resume... Ranked 14th all over India.. good job.. !

Told her to continue as this has to be her best profession n she can do miracles with her qualification..

She had the least to say..

Came back... not ever determined to job there...

Now her stupidities made Mallika n Ashu feeling awkward.. cos her habits were to laugh with the kids lying there in the bed.,, her habits included saying NO to the dean,,, included many things that were not in the good books for a dean...

She finally made the decision,,, saying bye to the noble deeds.. she is there to tell them she doesnt belong to the place..

N today is the day Dr. Ashutosh has signed the papers for her to leave.. she is happy.. really.. she is.. ??/

he is astound to see her.. so chirpy,,, so good nature,, so good at her job,,, n not eager to take off.. why.. 😕

N here... they are shaking their hands together... bidding a bye forver..

but none of them is ready to do so.. But they did..

She turned to move on,,, he took his seat,,

She came out of KGH,, looked at the back of her few days of laughs,, scolds,, caring,, n enjoying,,

He saw her from his window,,, hiding himself behind the curtain,, saw her so gloomy,, but going..

One thing that they both realized,, Nidhi shud have continued,,, Ashu is not only a heartstone..

One thing they hardly knew..

both had the same feeling for each other,, Respect,, Appreciation.. praise,, regard,, courtesy,, n ...

words failed them,,, their attraction made them under some unknown pressure.. their eyes met n called it a day..

The one thing that they cud not tell their hearts that they were falling for each other,,, were in the first step of

love..!❤️

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Thanks for the read... !

God bless..

Edited by bawaswift - 6 years ago

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 6 years ago

Do log jo ek doosre ke liye bane hote hain...wo kaise bhi kar ke mil jaate hain...aur door jaana bhi chahein tab bhi kareeb aa hi jaate hain😃

The two people who met in awkward circumstances...not sharing the best of rapport amongst them...so different from each other..but their differences are what attracts them towards each other 😳

nicely you have relived the Ashni moments once again...it was disheartenening to see him watching her go away with a sad look on her face...somehow her unique traits managed to make a place in his heart...which he didn't realise at that time😊

But they were meant to be together and they did...against all odds😃👏

Thanks once again for giving us something from your pen Bhaiya...It was marvellous...😃👏

Keep writing more...would love to read more from you😃🤗

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

Words failed them, they certainly had few things in their hearts, that they were not able to express or explore!

It was the time when Nidhi never knew she will fall for him, when she actually had. The right example was she saw Ashu and Mallika together 😳

It was the time Ashu knew he is watching a well qualified doc leaving the profession all cos she never wants to be into it.

It was the time - both of them failed to know that KGH has been the place they had to meet and then live a long lovely life within the peaks of it and dwelling there for the good cause, along with the never mentioned and named word - Love!

This was the time that they did not realise their love and attachment to each other - though somewhere in their hearts, each of them were dwelling soundly.

Ashu never had this feeling of being in love ever, but when she left Kgh on her own, he thought of her, her smiles, naughtiness, mistakes and they seemed to be amusing him!

What made them close was this very separation. They were meant to be each other's. And the few days of her leaving from the hospital, it made them clicking!

What a beauty!!

The two birds who wanted to get a change in their lives. it happened but before realising it, they decided to part!

It was the loveliest part when Ashu peeped through his window and hid himself behind the curtain. The only grace for him was that he was watching her, leaving with a sad smile. The only sad thing was he was again all alone in this very crowded world. He had no idea why he was pulling towards her, but it happened and his times started going in the memories of the chirpy bubbly Nidhi, who tried to make him smile, though he was only shouting over the little things!

I do see them truly in love at their first convos, cos one's words echoed to the other's and they were accusing each other for their behaviours. Behaviours that were liked and loved by them.

Love don't ask you to express, Love happens with the miracles happening!!!

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nishi05

@nishi05

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing Bro...👏👏

Relived the Ashni moments again..😳

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

How did I miss this OS yesterday???

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9
How did I miss this OS yesterday???

Its ok Anjani... i can understand the way it is written... 😛

Its so simply written to be ignored.. its okay... 😃

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

See you have not written even a word about it... 😆

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks for the few nice fellows for coming n reading n replying to my little effort ... 😳

I owe a lot to all of you... ⭐️👏

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Do log jo ek doosre ke liye bane hote hain...wo kaise bhi kar ke mil jaate hain...aur door jaana bhi chahein tab bhi kareeb aa hi jaate hain😃
The two people who met in awkward circumstances...not sharing the best of rapport amongst them...so different from each other..but their differences are what attracts them towards each other 😳

nicely you have relived the Ashni moments once again...it was disheartenening to see him watching her go away with a sad look on her face...somehow her unique traits managed to make a place in his heart...which he didn't realise at that time😊

But they were meant to be together and they did...against all odds😃👏

Thanks once again for giving us something from your pen Bhaiya...It was marvellous...😃👏

Keep writing more...would love to read more from you😃🤗

@ red... Well said Manisha... ⭐️👏

Thanks once again for the beautiful comment dear... !!!

They realised every bit after long times taken every time,,, n it was their memories that made them more closer to each other.. !

Once Ashu told Armaan.,, that he is happy with her memories.. cos this way she is happy in her life.. This i will pen down in my next few posts.. cos i do wanna write something that includes Armaan... for the valid reason... I feel n am sure that without Armaan n his faith in his love,, Ashu wud have never got Nidhi in his life... 😳

N you have rightly said.. they were meant for each other... n against all the odds... cos who ever came responsible for their separation.. had to bow down to their undying love.. !!!

Sure will be writing more.. n why not when you few are there ready with your sweetness around,, !

Thanks once again for the thoughtful comment... God bless.. !!!

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Swatishubh
Words failed them, they certainly had few things in their hearts, that they were not able to express or explore!
It was the time when Nidhi never knew she will fall for him, when she actually had. The right example was she saw Ashu and Mallika together 😳
It was the time Ashu knew he is watching a well qualified doc leaving the profession all cos she never wants to be into it.
It was the time - both of them failed to know that KGH has been the place they had to meet and then live a long lovely life within the peaks of it and dwelling there for the good cause, along with the never mentioned and named word - Love!
This was the time that they did not realise their love and attachment to each other - though somewhere in their hearts, each of them were dwelling soundly.
Ashu never had this feeling of being in love ever, but when she left Kgh on her own, he thought of her, her smiles, naughtiness, mistakes and they seemed to be amusing him!
What made them close was this very separation. They were meant to be each other's. And the few days of her leaving from the hospital, it made them clicking!

What a beauty!!
The two birds who wanted to get a change in their lives. it happened but before realising it, they decided to part!
It was the loveliest part when Ashu peeped through his window and hid himself behind the curtain. The only grace for him was that he was watching her, leaving with a sad smile. The only sad thing was he was again all alone in this very crowded world. He had no idea why he was pulling towards her, but it happened and his times started going in the memories of the chirpy bubbly Nidhi, who tried to make him smile, though he was only shouting over the little things!

I do see them truly in love at their first convos, cos one's words echoed to the other's and they were accusing each other for their behaviours. Behaviours that were liked and loved by them.
Love don't ask you to express, Love happens with the miracles happening!!!

😳 ⭐️👏

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