The most precious moments... ! Ashni OS

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nidhi was so happy today.. it was Ashu's Birthday n she wanted to give him some best gift.,, She made all the arrangements and was waiting for him to return home...!

She thought they will celebrate his birthday in the evening.,, so she took the leave for the same,,, so that when her Doc,, her hubby comes back she will be there to greet him,,,🥳

It was almost a year they were married.,, n rarely had they any time to go out or celebrate or else.. Baba was away to some town where he had established a new Old age home,, n was looking after it n trying his time there.. !

Ashu used to be awaiting for him,,, but Baba was not coming back,, n was giving his good time there.. ! Nidhi was always with him thru every moment in life..happiness, sadness, n all. She was not only his good wife but also was a very good friend knew each other since ages...knew what he likes & dislikes...N this is what their life was making the most of it.. !

It was his first Birthday after marriage n she wanted to make it beautiful..!!!. She had asked him to come around 7.,, She waited.. n waited for long.. but he did not turn up. She was continuously checking her cell phone..

Finally the phone rang n it was him... He said that he will be coming late,, so she should not wait for him for dinner...as a crucial case of a little girl is there to hold him...

As usual he managed to convince her... She kept the phone down...she felt bad. She had planned for something ...all got wasted. Her eyes filled with tears... But one thing she knew that her Dr. Ashu is a man of principles.. their good times can be awaited.. may be the next day or so.. !

Nidhi cud not have her dinner.,, instead her eyes were continuously looking at the door. Finally at 11.00 pm bell rang.. She ran to the door.. just like a marathon race... She opened the door.,, With a half opened door gave a beautiful smile to her lovely husband. Looking at her face he forgot how much tired he was,,, He gave the smile in return. He entered into the house. He looked at the corner dining table, which was arranged with the all his favourite food items made especially for him by his loving wife.,, Nidhi not only made things good.. but they were arranged so well ..! There was a cake in between. He was disappointed as he cud not make his promise to come early. "I am sorry. Its too late . said Nidhi..

"Hey no probs, still we have one more hour to celebrate. Right?

"Yeah "Okay, you go n fresh. Let's have dinner. He went into the bedroom...switched on the light.,, He noticed that something was kept on the bed... He went n saw... there were two beautifully wrapped gifts n a lovely red rose has been kept over there, with a note "I LOVE U To my Dearest Husband, from his wife

He slowly opened the small box. There was a photo album in it with "SWEET Memories... written on the front page. Inside,,, on the first page it was his childhood snaps...snaps with his Baba...his school,, O he was missing everything ..

Then next.. on the next page there was his snap with his best friend Armaan...with a B'day wishes messages from him written below. He was totally surprised to see all these things...how she managed to do them all.. !!!

Next was his snap with a Violin which he used to play in his college days.n for Baba n once for her as well.. ! There was a key embedded along with snap, with a message: "I know you love music...I would like you to continue with your hobby...here is the key for the same to open the second box .. . He looked at the second box containing Violin,,

Now his eyes were completely filled with tears. ,,,He returned in into the last section of that album,.. where there was his marriage snaps...n then last snap which was including his family photograph with "My Family "written on the top...!

His tears rolled down on his cheeks... He looked back his wife was standing over there. He ran towards her. He kissed on her forehead & hugged her tightly. " I love you dear...I love you too ,,, n before he could say anything she wanted him to give the last surprise of the day that she had planned..

She took him out of the bedroom where everyone was waiting for them... He could not believe that his Baba were standing in front of him.,, along with Armaan n Kaka... And it was the best surprise she knew how much he loves Baba n was missing him... He thanked her for everything and for being there always with him...

It was only one hour but it was the best one in his entire life..and the Best Birthday too... Much more than he could imagined. He was happy n by looking at him she got happy too. He took out his Violin and start playing...for Baba,, for her n for himself as today is the best day of his life.. ! Baba is back,,, she has made everything so delightful... n he pledged to do sumthing that can retain all these smiles.. forever.. !

Those moments were so precious. Entire atmosphere was filled with melodious music, happiness, love. ,, !

Hello Ashnians,,, ,this is a very small try from myself.. to give you all sum time to spend with our beloved Ashni,,, ! I hope you all will like this very simple shot.. tried to make them come along with us.. ! Thanks for the read.. if possible do reply comments.. i will feel goody goody you know.. 😳


God bless you all... 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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So Happy to read you after a long time Bhaiya 😃👏
And what a superb way to be back with your write up 👏😃

From the start to the end... it had what all Ashni lovers love them as a couple... love affection and understanding between them... she trying to make his bday special and he knowing her feelings when he wasnt able to make it 😊

But still they were happy in whatever time they had... and that's the beauty of any relationship 😃

The birthday gifts... I was spellbound to read about them... and the most precious gift for him... his Baba and his friend Armaan... he was overwhelmed to see them and was full of more and more love for her... for making this the best bday for him 😃👏

Thanks a lot for the beautiful story from your pen... loved it... really... thanks a lot😃

God bless you Bhaiya 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Bhaiya 👏👏
And caps Bhabhi ⭐️⭐️

Will read and review.

but dunno when, Loves to both of U ❤️
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So very true!
The real moments of our life are those spend together, with family and close ones!

Lovely scenario of AshNi so understanding and warm towards each other. This is the beauty of their relationship, they never fail to make each other feel loved, and cared of 👏
I loved the way Nidhi gifted him the surprise gifts, and one by one he unfold them and felt proud of her and her ways of giving smiles to every face.
He got his Baba, and he wished to retain this happiness forever - this is the facet of the story! he has realised how to make smiles over the faces and is ready to maintain this happiness!
AshNi always rule and shall be!

Loved the Violin part, it made the heavenly scenes back to my mind!
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Wow Bro..it's lovely...⭐️ 👏 👏
Awesome caps Swati...⭐️ 👏 👏
Thanks a lot...🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was awesome and great , enjoyed reading it . Thank you so much bawa .
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Awesome caps Bhabhi...too good😃👏
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I want more from you Bhaiya 😊
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Bhaiya, it's such a beautiful short story that i could not stay away from writing !! You know, i read it on Thursday but had to wait to get my lappy back 😉
The way story started : Nidhi making all arrangements for Ashu, and he is only the busiest, as always ! Very well brought out the sadness on Nidhi's face, yet she is all ready to celebrate, what if the next day. Lovely portrayal of a wife, who knows that he has little of time to give, but her intentions make the day full of enjoyments, though came so late, in the last hour ! So thoughtful and matching the Title 👏👏

I loved to see even Ashu feeling too bad over her good arrangements and not able to come in time. A man of Principles of course, yet has to come back to his Nidhi after the end of the day !
And what arrangements ⭐️⭐️
Nidhi made it all happen under one roof and gave everything she could give him and what he was missing. The most understanding and a caring wife he has ! One can see the passion and excitement in her eyes, and Ashu tried to grab everything she planned !❤️
The memories he watch, the memories of his childhood with Baba, his friend Armaan, meri jaan 🤗 and their marriage accommodating all their love and possess their family all together !
The meeting of Baba has to be like this, bcos he was not intend to come back and only Nidhi could have brought him back, as Ashu would have never ask him to ! His coming back is a blessing to all of them. And this is how the gift completes ! Very well thought and told Bro 👏
The Violin of their love ! The violin that Baba loves ! The violin that he himself love !
The Violin is the symbol that gives him pleasure, bcos he has always played it when he was happy ! And what can be the best moment to play it. He is happy bocs he has got eternal love from Nidhi, unconditional and ever owned ! Love from Baba, never can be measured and hold by heart. Lovefrom Kaka, caring and raising him all alone when Baba left. And Armaan, his jaan Ashu is. He can be away from his sight, but never can from his heart and life !
Today is the best day of his life, and the playing of Violin is giving him the ecstatic joy of togetherness of his family yet again !

Bhaiya you need a very big applause for this beauteous 👏⭐️👏
Not being a writer yourself, you have made the AshNi moments happening and gave us whatever your heart wished for AshNi and all of us ! Thanks a lot for the written fabulous 🤗
May God bless you with more from your pen !!!

regards 😃
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