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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: babita..

Part 2 a :

First of all, many thanks for the b'day gift Manisha di πŸ€—

Again a superb update πŸ‘πŸ‘
The story is standing at the interesting twist here ! Ashu is there, treating Cv and Db is unknown to the fact that Ashu operated him. Nidhi is away but she is there to reach any moment and he will have to give himself the corner to hide, yet make it clear that all is well with CV !
The critical situation Ashu is landing himself today. He knows that this family is his life, he knows his presence can make things messy and awkward to both Nidhi and Dadibua, but he has to stay there and face the very fact that though he had to be away from this family, but he is there and saved them !
Nidhi on the other hand is totally must be in a shocking state that her Baba is not well and met with an.. and there now she will have to look upon Ashu to know her Baba's condition. I am feeling for him so much !
Love makes one more stronger, and this is what Ashu is praying for Nidhi ! Doesn't he need the same ?? 😳
Separation is not the end of love, it creates love, more love !
I wish i could turn back the clock and ask Baba what was wrong in him ?? Why his love was more valuable than Ashu and Nidhi's ?? Why he thought of Ashu as an older man, but not as a good human being ?? Why ??
Today, the destiny has made so many ways for every one here, but the lost way of Ashu is meeting once again with Nidhi, not knowing what lies for them in the coming time !
Shoni di, i am in a state of landing myself in the time when Ashu is waiting for Nidhi, with his beats are increasing and Nidhi will come to know about him and..

Will be waiting for the next, eagerly, impatiently !
Thanks di, for the stupendous story, in love with it ❀️
In love with you ever, huggies tightest πŸ€—


Thanks a lot Shona once again for all the love you have given to me and to this storyπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
Its going to be a difficult time for both and surely they would come out of this and i know just one thing...those who are meant to be together...they surely end up togetherπŸ˜ƒ

Will be updating soonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Part 3


Here Dadi Bua was waiting desperately for Nidhi to come and was constantly praying for his safety... it was afternoon when a ward came up to her and asked her to meet the doctor ...she soon went with him and she met the doc. He told her that the condition of the patient was showing a deterioration and that he needs to be operated urgently...she became very tensed and tried calling Nidhi but her phone was constantly out of reach. Considering the gravity of the situation at present, she decided to go ahead and take a decision for the sake of Colonel Verma. She asked them to go ahead with the surgery but she would like to meet the surgeon before signing the consent forms. She was escorted to a cabin where she was to meet the neurosurgeon. She went inside and greeted the doc who had his back towards her.

He asked her to be seated and slowly he turned around once she was seated. She was surprised...rather shocked to see him...and instantly she spoke up...

DB: Tum...yahan...

Dr Ashutosh: jee haan main...inhone mujhe bulaya tha bcoz koi aur neurosurgeon available nahi tha...koi conference chal rahi hai to isliye... Aap ghabraiye nahi... Colonel Verma would be fine... unhe surgery ki zaroorat hai... jo immediately karni hogi...

DB: lekin tum...

Dr Ashutosh: main jaanta hu aapke mann mein is waqt kya sawaal hain... Aap ko darr hai ki main... ghabraiye nahi... Mera aur aapka jo bhi personal problems ho...but sabse pehle I'm a doctor and mere liye mere patients ki safety sabse important hai... jab hum apne profession mein aate hain...to hum apne aap se yeh promise karte hain ki kuchh bhi ho...hum sab se pehle apne patients ki safety ke baare mein sochenge... aur yahan main sirf apna farz poora karne ki koshish kar raha hu...

DB: par Nidhi...wo yeh sab kaise ...

Dr Ashutosh: wo sab hum baad mein soch sakte hain... Filhaal hume patient ke baare mein sochna chahiye...aap chinta mat kijiye... main uske liye bhi koi raasta nikall lunga... abhi ke liye aap mujhpe bharosa rakhiye... Main apna farz nibhaunga...

DB felt slightly relieved to hear his words and with no other option available and considering the deteriorating condition of Colonel Verma...she signed the consent forms and he was taken up to the OT for urgent surgery. DB was waiting outside the OT and was really anxious...one for Colonel Verma and more so for Nidhi... She would again be going through an emotional tumoil if she comes to know that he is the one who operated on her father. She was constantly pleading to the Almighty to save her from that and wishing that Colonel Verma is fine soon. Around 2 hours later, the surgery ended and Dr Ashutosh came out and informed DB that the surgery had been successful and that Colonel Verma has been shifted back to the ICU. He soon would be regaining his consciousness but he still needs to stay in the hospital for few more days till he recovers completely. DB was extremely thankful to her for saving him but was worried for Nidhi who would be there any time.

He told her not to worry and that he would be leaving the hospital then only and the doctors there would be in constant touch with him regarding his progress. He would try his best not to meet her as he too didn't want her to go through that emotional trauma. He soon left the hospital and while he was leaving Nidhi entered the hospital but couldn't see him...but she felt some unknown sensation which made her stop and look around...but as he had already left...she found no one... She was unable to decipher this feeling of hers and she moved towards the ICU. DB was waiting outside the ICU and she immediately ran upto her and embraced her. she had tears in her eyes out of worry for her father and she asked her about his condition. DB told her about the deterioration in his condition and that he had to be urgently operated...so she gave the consent and he had been operated... He was in ICU and his situation was keeping stable as of now. She wanted to see her father once and she went inside the ICU and saw her father with all the bandages and the monitors. She was very upset for him and she was barely managing to hold onto her tears seeing him like this.

She talked to the doctors there and they told her that his condition was stable and he would take few hours to regain his consciousness and they just need to wait for some time. There was nothing much to worry at this time and she was very relieved to know all this. She went outside and told DB about her conversation with the docs inside. She knew DB wouldn't have had anything since the time she came to the hospital owing to her anxiety...so like a responsible grand daughter...she insisted her to have something and then go back home to take some rest as she would be there overnight. DB resisted but later she agreed as Nidhi was very strict and no one could dare to disobey her. They both had some tea and snacks and then Nidhi arranged a cab for her to go back home. While leaving she was very worried for her as what would happen if she came to know about Ashutosh...but she knew he won't break his promise.

She left and Nidhi went inside and waited in the waiting area... She had changed so much in these 6 months... she was no longer that chirpy, bubbly Nidhi...she smiled for everyone to see but inside...a deep darkness engrossed her thoroughly. After she separated from her love...her life...nothing was the same for her... she had become absolutely a quiet person who just talked as much needed while earlier her talks never stopped ... Entire house was full of her giggles and talks which was all silent now. She knew she had asked him to stay as he was with her...but she herself... She just couldn't get over this and she could never forgive herself for going away from him. She had promised him in front of Maa that she would do anything for her love and would never leave him...but when he needed her support...she left him ... Because her family didn't support her decision... what if he himself had asked her to do so...but still she felt guilty at heart and since that day she wasn't able to stay that Nidhi which she was earlier...it was as if she had turned into a completely different person altogether who didn't share her grief with anyone now...she was just going on with the path her destiny had chosen for her quietly. Anyone who saw her now was taken aback by the change in her.

She was recalling the day when she left the hospital and Ashu... She couldn't believe herself for many days that he was no longer with her now... gradually she tried to normalise herself and come to terms with the reality... She joined some other hospital and she kept herself busy in the care of her patients. But not a single day passed when she forgot the beautiful moments spent with him... whenever she crossed that hospital, her memories came back to her mind and she controlled her urge to go inside and meet him once atleast. But her promise to him stopped her from going inside and she went sadly from there everyday. Colonel Verma wanted her to go to some other city so that she forgets everything but they were scared of sending her away as she wont be able to manage everything alone...here atleast they were here with her so that they can help her come out of this.

She drifted into a light sleep remembering the moments with him when early morning a ward boy came up to her and woke her up. She got worried if her father's condition deteriorated but he told her that she had to get some medication for him and his condition was fine. She went towards the pharmacy and on her way she overheard two ward boys talking about her father only.

One person: arey tune dekha wo jo ICU mein bed no 1 pe patient hai...unki condition kitni serious thi kal...par ab wo bahut theek hain...

Second: haan honge kyun nahi...Lucknow ke sab se bade surgeon ne unka operation jo kiya hai...warna unka bachna mushkil tha...

First: haan theek keh raha hai... Dr Ashutosh jiska bhi operation karte hain... wo bahut jaldi theek ho jata hai...unke haathon mein jaadu hai...

Nidhi thought...Dr Ashutosh... Yahan...that name kept on echoing in her mind and she couldn't believe what she just heard...she called out to the ward boys and asked them who operated on her father and they told him that Dr Ashutosh was called to operate him. Her entire memories of him being the most responsible and disciplined doctor she knew came back to her...how would he have managed to do all this... he knew that he was operating on my father...still he didn't let me know anything...But definitely DB knew everything... But she too didn't tell me anything... Why ? how could she... She had tears drop down her eyes and for few minutes she stood there crying...trying to hold back her tears.

But soon she reconciled herself and got the medicines she was asked to get... but she wasn't able to come out of this shock that he was the one who saved her father...such a pure gentleman he is...her respect from him increased manifold today... she wanted to meet her... but how? How could she face him...and he had asked her to never meet him again... What shall she do? She was in a fix as she couldn't decide at this point... On one hand she had her promise and other hand was her gratitude... She decided that she would meet him... As she wanted to thank him for saving her father and as far as promise was concerned... She wasn't meeting her as his love...rather she was the daughter of the patient he saved at that moment...so she decided that she would meet him the next day when he comes. She came to know from the staff that he would be coming there to keep an update on the condition of her father. So she waited for him to come so that she could meet him... she had to meet him once atleast... That was very important for her to do that...otherwise she wont be able to forgive her.

Chahte the hum bahut door jisse jaana

Kyun hota hai kismat mein paas usi ke aana

Dil ka dard jo ab tak rakha tha chhupa kar kahin

Aa na jaye wo bahar unke hi saamne wahin

Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
Superb, Amazing...⭐️ ⭐️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks a lot dear..πŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I am first...πŸ˜›


yeah you are firstπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: nishi05

Superb, Amazing...⭐️ ⭐️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thanks a lot dear..πŸ€—


Thank you DiπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76
but she felt some unknown sensation which made her stop and look around..

What a purely an emotional submerge that both Ashu n Nidhi have flown into..
What an incurable heart.. that goes on loving each bit of the other's heart..
What a heart that can never decipher life.. yet keep om merging with the love's cruel defeat.. !!!

-- of course by bawa.. 😳


I loved the beauty of this FF Manisha... it revolves around the hearts of the lovers n never complain them for the defeat they bear.. !
Very well penned down... β­οΈπŸ‘
Loved the way how Nidhi came to know of Ashu operating her Father. ! The only name that her hearts wants to echo.. its echoing in her family... in her life.. not cos she wanted.. but cos destiny claimed it.. !
The turmoil Ashu never wanted her to suffer.. she is bearing it... n not at this time.. but for the past.. the day they part their ways.. ! Lesser said is enough here.. cos their love needs no definition,,, no explanation.. only AshNi word is the best epitome ... !
I wonder how this couple managed to live so far for the promises they made to part.. made to bear pain.. made to suffer..
But yeah.. this is one of the aspect lovers are trying their hands to follow their fate n keep on loving the one who matters the most.. yet they cant name him or her except in their heart.. !
DB wud be asked by Nidhi for sure... but i need CV to come to know of his doc,,, n he realises that a good heart needs no age bar,,, any age can be fine to take care of their daughter... !
To top of it,, what when she will meet him... 😳
The only fear everyone is possessing,,, !!!'
In wait for that dear... impatiently,, cos their meeting can be the most emotional meet of the lovers' regime... so may both of them get the strength to face n embrace each other,,,!
thanks a tonne for this graceful story in making Manisha,,,πŸ‘
God bless,,, !!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77
It was never their fault, cos love knows no barriers, its for their love, that they are away!
Awesome update Manisha, as it has to be from your pen sweetie ❀️ πŸ€—
Cud felt the way Db saw and got herself in the pool of queries and Ashu judged and relieved her! It was beautifully xpressed and well woven the plot πŸ‘
Db cud have told Nidhi this, but she made her occupied with the silence, to Nidhi taking the things to herself as it comes to her! What an emotional dilemma Db was in, and it was only better to leave everything to the two and face!
Better late than never! Nidhi had to find him in her senses, as she felt a tug in her heart when Ashu was around. She had and has him in his heart, mind, soul and can never let him go from her, thus the memories always surrounding her and she can't remain the old chirpy girl anymore!
What a contrast! The hard stonic has started the ways she wanted and she is living the life he was used to! Love makes you parallel, but its test hates to smile without you!
Thanks so much for giving us the way Nidhi has been living so far - with him, without him!!!
Now as she has come to know of him, what she will say to him? This is a million mounted phrase for anyone asking - but for her, it wud be sharing herself to the man who is everything to her. Thanking him for saving her father, and not talking to him in the tone she always speaks to him in her soul! Making him feel relieved, and only leaving him in tears that he never show, that he acquires, that he save all his life!
I wish this wud be the masterpiece of your works Manisha, and am sensing it ⭐️⭐️
Am feeling the way they will meet, but don't know what lands for them in their tough and unpredictable life!
Thanks for this emotional stream and giving us yet another gentle and very thoughtful story πŸ‘
Luv ya dear, more and to the core! ❀️ πŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78
Please cover how DB appreciates Ashutosh for his care for Nidhi and also his dedication towards his patients...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Please cover how DB appreciates Ashutosh for his care for Nidhi and also his dedication towards his patients...


Everything would be taken care of 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You have written it well...πŸ‘
Appreciate how you are able to relate to the actual story...😊
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