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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: bawaswift

I die every day... every second without you...


Lovely update.. though got emotional after reading it.. !
Awesome... nice n good progression in the story Manisha.. ⭐️👏

Thanks a lot Bhaiya😃🤗

Ashu cud have stop Nidhi to go away from him.,, he cud have ,,, but he did not.. He opted to go with her decision,,, I feel this is the beautiful part of this story.. !!!
Here again,,, the similar situation for him,, n he is all alone here without her n living like a loving person all the while.. !

He is fulfilling her wish as she wanted him to stay forever like she wanted him to... so he is doing everything for her😃😳

But its not always him.,.. Nidhi also must be feeling n going thru the same., ! 😳
When we say that i am nothing without you n i will try to live but dont accept me to be happy everytime,, i will live according to you said.,, Then the other person also must be taken in regard.. !
Nidhi on the other hand was suffering every second along with Ashu there.. ! In other words.. it was not easy for both Ashu n Nidhi.,, !

You'll get to know what she is going through... im having a feeling that this small idea can be taken to so many different paths... mujhe lag raha hai yeh story extend hone wali hai... i hope aap sab bore nahi hoge padne mein😉😛


Lovely part is when Nidhi confessed to Ashu her love,, n acknowledged that he also loves her but is afraid of what people will say.. Log kya kahenge,,
N the most emotional one is when .. in the last he asked the invisible Nidhi,, though always visible to him in his heart n mind n soul.. that why all this happened when she said that it will be okay n she prayed,, they prayed.. !

destiny is cruel and it plays its part in everyones life...and thats why they both are suffering without each other😔

This is the beauty of this separation track,,, Ashni were never away from each other.. cos they were doing anything n living for each other.. with the support of each other,,, n with the love of each other..
I really do wanna know how Nidhi felt when she left him.,, n what happened to her in these years..
Cos the separation is not a suffering for one person,,, its for the both who have gone away.,,., for each other,, !
Loved this part,,, thanks dear for fabulous effort,, God bless,, !

I will try to fulfil this wish of yours soon...have patience😉😛
Aapko jaldi sab pata chal jayega😉

Thank you so much Bhaiya for liking the story😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome update manisha di. Enjoyed reading it Soo much


Thank you once again Tasha...how are you doing? hope all is well at your end😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Ashutosh decided to separate for the sake of Nidhi and her family...Nidhi asked him to remain the changed person...Excellent...

You are able to maintain that suspense in the story...👏



Am glad that you are liking the story and i try to write this way only...slowly everything would unfold😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very Nice update Manisha ❤️ 🤗

Love is not finding someone to live with, but to find someone you can't live without!

Bhabhi this is the most beautiful way of expressing whats love😃👏
Ashu knew what lands for them if goes on with his love with Nidhi, but Nidhi knew that his love will make it easy for both of them! I really love this couple, who loved each other but wanted their loved ones happy, before their own happiness!

This understanding and maturity is what makes this couple great...isn't it😃

Nidhi for whom love is everything bowed down to his decision to be away. But is was really really hard for her and for him! The decision he made was not a choice, but was the realisation that he knew they have to make! Ashu when wanted to go with Nidhi, her baba gave the same reason of age difference, that feared Ashu every time! Fate never helps anyone - it never cares about our plans, and no one can fight it!
The only thing good came out was the makeover of a hardstone! And the love they shared is increased with this separation.
Beautiful narration of yours make me so emotional, and the verse you have used later, it so gels well with the update! ⭐️
Awesome and unique, just like this beautiful show! 👏

That verse i just wrote in a minute just like that... i saw some episodes of EDT... Its a no sense show but i love the shayari at the end of every episode... so ive decided...ill also start doing this in my updates if possible😃

Once he never wanted this relation to give her disrepute, he is yearning of this very relationship today!
Will be eagerly waiting to know the next move in the story, with of course Nidhi and her life until now!
Thanks sweetie, for the impressive shot, and your efforts, luv ya ❤️ 🤗

I'll soon be updating the next part...am waiting for a special day to update the next part now😃
Thank you so much for the appreciation Bhabhi😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Waiting to see how they will meet again...


will soon be updating Anjani...give me some time please😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
will try to come here tomorrow.
loves di ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


will soon be updating Anjani...give me some time please😃


Take your time...no pressure...come back only when you are ready...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

will try to come here tomorrow.

loves di ❤️


No hurries dear...first take care of your health first😊🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you for your effort...🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2a'''short update


He went back home and himself prepared dinner for himself as always... There wasn't a moment when Nidhi was away from his heart or mind... He was thinking about her...lost in her...wished to find himself in her...he slept thinking about her and woke up every morning by wishing her a very good morning... he wished the air to take his wishes to her...wherever she is...it was as if he was breathing her everytime. He just prayed for her happiness and well being every time he came across any temple...but never went inside as he believed that Maa had taken her away from him and so he wont go inside a temple till she herself returned his life back to him...but he knew that wasn't possible; but still he had decided this in his heart. As he had promised her...he never tried to find her whether she was still in Kanpur or had gone to some other place.

The days kept passing by and he was trying to keep himself busy in his hospital and his patients...little did he know that destiny had planned something else for him. One day around 11:30 pm while he was trying to welcome sleep into his eyes while sleep was just away from him...he received a call from an unknown number...he was surprised that this number was not from a known location. He picked up the phone call and found the call was from a small hospital on the outskirts of Lucknow...they had a patient of road traffic accident who had sustained severe head injury...but unfortunately the neurosurgeon wasn't available there owing to a conference in Delhi...so they wanted him to manage that patient. Although he didn't go too far away for treating patients, but as the patient needed his care and treatment urgently...he decided to go there immediately.

Soon he left his house and started towards the hospital... He soon reached there in 3 hours and was immediately taken to the ICU where the patient was admitted...he asked about the details of the patient but as no one was there with him and he himself was unconscious...no one knew anything about him...he went first through the CT scans and seeing them he decided that this patient needed and urgent surgery. He then went to examine the patient and when he saw him...he was shocked to see Colonel Verma there in ICU...How...how did Nidhi's Baba met with an accident...what happened to him...why was he going somewhere alone...all such thoughts clouded his mind and he wasn't getting any answer to his questions.

But seeing his condition he realised that he first needed an urgent surgery and all things could be managed later... He told the docs there that he knew the patient...he was his friends' father and gave them the number to Nidhi's home...the staff from the hospital informed Dadi Bua about his accident and here Ashutosh was worried about facing Nidhi once again...he had taken a promise from her that she wont try to meet him again in life...but here...the situation again took a turn and he would be face to face with her once again. He asked the docs here to try and contact some other neurosurgeon as he knew what conflict he is going to face sooner or later... Again he would be stuck up between his heart and mind and he would again find it difficult to come out of his tussle. But unfortunately no other neurosurgeon was available owing to the ongoing conference.

Then being a doctor and his first duty being towards his patients...he decided to take the charge of treating and operating her father...but obviously they would be needing the consent from the family. He waited for her along with her Dadi Bua to come and give consent...till then he was treating him in the best way possible. Soon Dadi Bua arrived and he saw her coming alone...where is Nidhi...why is she not here? Has she left Lucknow...is she alright? All such questions came to his mind and he sent the doc at the hospital to take her to Colonel Verma and calm her down as she would have found it difficult to face him at the first instance. She went to the ICU and as told by Ashutosh...the doc enquired about the patients children... She told him that his daughter is out of town for some work and would be back in some time. She had informed her about her father's accident. She asked how did they know about her address and they told her that the patient had some documents through which they came to know about their address...actually Ashutosh had asked them to say so... Regarding the consent Dadi Bua told them that Nidhi would be reaching by the evening and she would see into the official works as she herself wasn't aware of these matters. They decided to wait for few hours as his condition was keeping stable and not showing signs of deterioration. Ashutosh was fearing how would he face Nidhi once again now...the evening was approaching fast and his heartbeats kept on increasing at the very thoughts of seeing her once again after 6 months. As it was difficult for him...similarly it would be a difficult task for her as well...he knew this...he just prayed to the Almighty to be with her and give her the strength to face him and to keep her feelings in control. He waited for her to come soon as her father's condition was quite critical and he was constantly keeping a watch on his situation.

End of this part... I have dedicated this part to the two birthday babies at this forum...Bro and Babita... 🤗

Happy birthday to both of you 😃

Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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