Originally posted by: bawaswift
I die every day... every second without you...
Lovely update.. though got emotional after reading it.. !Awesome... nice n good progression in the story Manisha.. ⭐️👏Thanks a lot Bhaiya😃🤗Ashu cud have stop Nidhi to go away from him.,, he cud have ,,, but he did not.. He opted to go with her decision,,, I feel this is the beautiful part of this story.. !!!Here again,,, the similar situation for him,, n he is all alone here without her n living like a loving person all the while.. !He is fulfilling her wish as she wanted him to stay forever like she wanted him to... so he is doing everything for her😃😳But its not always him.,.. Nidhi also must be feeling n going thru the same., ! 😳When we say that i am nothing without you n i will try to live but dont accept me to be happy everytime,, i will live according to you said.,, Then the other person also must be taken in regard.. !Nidhi on the other hand was suffering every second along with Ashu there.. ! In other words.. it was not easy for both Ashu n Nidhi.,, !You'll get to know what she is going through... im having a feeling that this small idea can be taken to so many different paths... mujhe lag raha hai yeh story extend hone wali hai... i hope aap sab bore nahi hoge padne mein😉😛Lovely part is when Nidhi confessed to Ashu her love,, n acknowledged that he also loves her but is afraid of what people will say.. Log kya kahenge,,N the most emotional one is when .. in the last he asked the invisible Nidhi,, though always visible to him in his heart n mind n soul.. that why all this happened when she said that it will be okay n she prayed,, they prayed.. !destiny is cruel and it plays its part in everyones life...and thats why they both are suffering without each other😔This is the beauty of this separation track,,, Ashni were never away from each other.. cos they were doing anything n living for each other.. with the support of each other,,, n with the love of each other..I really do wanna know how Nidhi felt when she left him.,, n what happened to her in these years..Cos the separation is not a suffering for one person,,, its for the both who have gone away.,,., for each other,, !Loved this part,,, thanks dear for fabulous effort,, God bless,, !I will try to fulfil this wish of yours soon...have patience😉😛Aapko jaldi sab pata chal jayega😉Thank you so much Bhaiya for liking the story😃
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