AshNi FF: Kabhi khushi kabhi gham; discontinued - Page 19

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Manishaji, when is the next update???

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Will be waiting...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

What Nidhi saw a teddy Ashu in the party.. she always wanted him to be like..

What CV imagined him n Nidhi n the little girl.,,,, somewhere in his heart he has seen a lovely life of what Nidhi desires..

But things are not the same at any end..

Both of them want her happiness but their understanding of her happiness is different...thats why she is not happy...when the two people she loves the most don't think alike😔

Ashu wants her to move on.. but do he really.. ??/ No he dont,, in fact he cant even..

Nidhi ,, all bowed to her father's wishes..first becoming a doc,,then leaving Ashu n now engaged to another doc Aman.. But her feelings were not in her father's hold.. she fell in love with the most eligible heart,, n she gave in,,, she wanted to live a life with him.. but she had to do what her father wanted her to..

She is bowing down in front of everyones wish...but her heart refuses to do so... thats why she has stopped hearing her inner voice and has become so quiet..as if she has lost her battle😔

What Ashu wanted.. he wanted her to smile like he do.. the fake ever.. the pretended... but her smiles were away for the many reasons..

He loves her the most and thats why he does everything she wanted😊

She had to live a life she never wanted to live.. She ultimately when gave in to continue as a doc .. it was purely her noble heart n her attachment that to Ashu.. Yeah there is no denying a fact that she fell for him the very initial time she confronted to leave the job..

But things have miles travelled n now the bitter fact of her exchanging the ring to some other person is out..which he is unable to bear.. n his tears are the proof that he is hurt.. n cant be stable again..

Although he wants her to be happy...but the mere thought of seeing her with someone else makes his heart break into innumerable pieces...he cant imagine her with anyone else

This is what is pricking him inside and he is not able to share his grief with anyone😔

Nidhi knew what he is going thru.. not able to meet his eyes,, she was ready to talk to him,,, cos on this very Earth only she knows what he will be thinking n going thru..

Their understanding is at some other level...so they know each other to the core😃

It touched my heart Manisha.. when i saw him crying bitterly on knowing the brutal fact..

Emotional n very delicate.. truly heart breaking yet once again.,,

Loved the narrative., ⭐️👏

Thank you so much Bhaiya😃.. your appreciation means a lot to me😃

Narrative that took me to his cabin n i was only watching him consoled by his heart that is not his.. n Nidhi who wants to talk to him.. but as he knows her inner turmoil as well,, he look upon the other side n tried to sooth the scene.,

Its easy to say that moving on will make them feel better after sometime.. but its not easy.. not easy for the true lovers.. not easy for the best partners..

Agree with you Bhaiya... its the most difficult task😳

I wish CV wud have learnt it.. or else Aman wud realise how she is not happy with his presence or what..

I hope I can meet your expectations once the story unfolds😊

Got emotional on reading it again.. n wud like to see the next part.. cos this will only make the things progressed.. n that can be a scene to watch..

Beautiful n sensitive update.. will wait for the next..

God bless..

Thanks, !

Thanks for the amazing review as always Bhaiya😃

Jai Mata Di Bhaiya🤗

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Love is priceless, it knows the feelings of heart, it climbs the mind and tell the soul that it belongs to you!

Brilliant lines Bhabhi😃👏⭐️

Sometimes our heart takes much time to accept the reality, the worst of all, cruel to kill!

What a beauteous Manisha 👏

Thank you so much Bhabhi😃🤗

Loved every bit of it! The cuteness of Nidhi and Nidhi junior, the kindness of the b'day party thrown and Ashu coming out but with no heart! And his coming was a blessing to both the Nidhis ⭐️⭐️

The way she looked upon him, she finds a dignified and elegant human being who can turn the tables for others. She looked upon a life with him, that can be viewed even by her baba, but she knows this is just for the time being.

He is trying to fulfil her wish and he hopes that she would be relieved of her pain to some extent seeing him like this😊

Ashu on the other hand has seen the worst day of his life, after his Baba left him and again when Nidhi left him though it was mutual. But today, it's the storm of thunders and tears and heart breaks that are many!

The way you have narrate the whole scene of Ashu knowing about Aman, and then his reaction and closing himself in his cabin and his perplexity - all taking him to the world where he can see no Nidhi with him and he has to accept the very fact he knew for long! The scene came out magnificently matchless 👍🏼

Thank you Bhabhi...I'm glad you liked the narration...if you could imagine the scene...its a reward for me😃

Today is the end of his world, his love, his companionship and his claim that Nidhi belongs to her, even if only through heart!

What a pathetic twist! What a tearjerker! What a bleeding hearts of AshNi and your readers along with you yourself!

I hope you would love the upcoming parts also... the twist hopefully would go down well with you as it progresses😃

It's not easy to pen down these kind of phases, but you have stupendously done it Sweetie 👏

I loved your take, and feel how it mystify Ashu as he had to compose himself cos he knows Nidhi must and is going through a situation somewhere similar to his. he is definite to manipulate things for her to move on as he knows well that she has not yet moved on by heart.

He has to be strong before her...he knows his few tears even would drown her in a sea of tears...he won't let it happen😊

If Cv had seen him in this phase, he wud have definitely thought of his mistake, but he regards his decision right. He finds best for his daughter, but will that best can give the same love and relation she deserves?

Am looking forward to Cv coming up with a tete a tete with Ashu cos that can only make him realise what and who real Ashu is!

you'll have to wait to see what happens next😉

No idea what you are going to show in the next, but am eager to know if Ashu is no more crying.

Cos if he will, then will Nidhi, then will AshNi and then will, you know!

Thanks for the superlative dear, Luv ya even more ❤️ 🤗

Thank you so much Bhabhi😃

Love you too😃❤️

Originally posted by: nishi05

⭐️ 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Good one...you have your own way of writing...👏

Part 8

Nidhi entered the room and saw Aman talking to CV and DB.

Aman: arey tum achanak kahan chali gayi thi?

Nidhi: wo bas main doctor se Baba ke discharge ke baare mein baat karne gayi thi...

Aman: to kab discharge kar rahe hain wo Uncle ko?

Nidhi: kal sham tak discharge kar denge...

DB: achhi baat hai...ab tu bhi ghar ja ab...tujhe aaram ki zaroorat hai... aaj raat main yahan rukti hu..

Aman: haan DB theek keh rahi hain...you look too exhausted...I think you should go home...if you want main tumhe ghar chhod deta hu...

Nidhi looked towards Baba and he signaled to go with him...she had to agree though she didn't want to...just then Nidhi (J) came running to her and was surprised to see a new person there.

Nidhi(J): Didi yeh kaun hai?

Nidhi didn't know how to introduce him to this small child...knowing that she won't understand... she was thinking of an answer when Aman spoke up.

Aman: main aapki Didi ka friend hu...

Nidhi(J): to aap inke friend ho... Main bhi inki friend hu...to aap mere bhi friend huye na...

Aman: haan wo to hai... to aaj se hum dono bhi friends hain... to meri is new friend ka naam kya hai?

He was surprised to know that her name was Nidhi as well... In a few minutes he had developed a bond with Nidhi(J). After some time her mother came and took her away from there and once she left, both of them left from there... CV too wanted both of them to spend time together...so that they get to know each other better. On the way Nidhi was absolutely quiet and was looking out of the window.

Aman: kya baat hai Nidhi? Tum jab bhi mere saath hoti ho itni chup chup rehti ho?

Nidhi: nahi...aisa to kuchh nahi hai...

Aman: I don't know maine aisa feel kiya to bol diya... maine tumhe humesha chupchap udaas dekha hai...aisi koi baat hai jo tumhe pareshan kar rahi hai to tum mujhe bata sakti ho... Main tumhara life partner se zyada tumhara dost banna chahta hu...

Nidhi: aisi koi baat nahi hai...

Aman: are you sure?

She signaled in a yes and by that time they reached her home and while she was going inside...he stopped her.

Aman: tum mujhe andar aane ko nahi kahogi? Suna hai tum chai bahut achhi banati ho... kya mujhe nahi pilaaogi?

Nidhi felt sorry for not inviting him and asked him to come inside with him...she could make out that he wanted to spend time with her. But she was not able to accept him at heart till now...she loved just one person and that is Ashu...how could she explain this to him when her own father didn't understand what she wanted. Both of them went inside and while she was preparing tea...he was having a look at her house. He saw many pictures there on the walls and he realized that Nidhi wasn't this melancholy person earlier. But the girl who was in front of him was totally opposite to the one in those pictures. He couldn't make out anything and he knew she won't tell anything as he had already asked her once. He switched on the TV and saw a news on TV related to a man marrying a girl much younger to him. He had a look of disgust on his face when Nidhi brought tea for him.

Nidhi: kya hua?

Aman: yeh news dekho...ek aadmi ne apne se 14 saal chhoti ladki se shaadi ki hai... Log bhi na... kuchh bhi karte hain... use apni umar ki koi nahi mili jo itni chhoti ladki...kya zaroorat thi ise?

Nidhi: kya zaroorat thi matlab? kya zaroorat hi sab kuchh hai? Agar ek insaan apne se chhoti ladki se shaadi kare to isme kya galat hai? Ise kyun ek news material ki tarah use kiya jaata hai? kya ek insaan ko adhikaar nahi ki wo apna life partner choose kar sake? Kyun sab ko doosron ki life mein interfere karte hain? Kya ek rishta sirf same age group hone se successful hota hai? pyaar bharosa ...in sab ka koi matlab nahi hai kya?

Aman: oh I'm sorry I didn't mean to upset you... mera wo matlab nahi tha... you are right...agar do logon ke beech mein pyar aur trust hai to age difference kitna bhi ho...wo rishta bahut mazboot hoga...par yahan yeh ek love marriage nahi hai...balki isliye kyunki ladki ke pita us zamindaar ka karz nahi chukka paye...isliye usne us ladki se shaadi ki jabki uske pehle se 2 bade bachhe hain... I object to such marriages.

Nidhi: I'm sorry...mujhe pata nahi tha... Main pata nahi kya kya keh gayi...

Aman: chalo isi bahane tum kuchh boli to...(and he smiled saying this)

After this both of them had tea and he left for his home after that. Nidhi kept on thinking about Ashu...she wanted to tell him that she had agreed to this marriage only for the sake of her father's happiness...what would he think about her...he must have been shattered to know this truth about her...but how does she tell him ...how would she face him...she thought. But then her inner voice told her that he loved her and surely he would understand...without her telling him anything. Both of them shared a bond where they don't have to give any explanations to anyone. The only thought of his love and his trust on her brought a smile on her face and she slept peacefully remembering their happy times.

Next day when Nidhi was carrying out the discharge formalities...Aman was there with CV and DB had gone home once Nidhi had come there. While they were talking casually...Nidhi (J) came there and asked about Nidhi.

Aman: aapki Didi kuchh papers sign karne gayi hain...unke Baba aaj ghar jaa rahe hain na...to unhe le jaane ke liye kuchh papers sign karne padenge...wohi karne gayi hain

Nidhi(J): aaj main bhi ghar jaa rahi hu... Mumma bhi wohi karne gayi hain... Mujhe unse milna hai...

Aman: wo abhi aa jayengi...tab tak aap mere saath khel sakte ho...

Nidhi(J): achha to theek hai...main bhaagti hu aur aap mujhe pakdo... Dekhna aap mujhe pakad nahi paaoge...

With this she ran out of the room and Aman went behind her...CV smiled to see him with that small child. Nidhi ran went inside Ashu's office. ...she wasn't stopped by the guard as Ashu had adviced them not to stop her...especially when no important meeting was going on inside. She went inside and Aman followed her. She kept on running around the table and acted as if he was very tired and he sat on the table breathing heavily.

Nidhi(J): arey aap itni jaldi thak gaye...dekha aap mujhe nahi pakad paye na...

Aman: haan bhai... Hum to haar gaye...aap jeet gayi...

Nidhi(J) was elated on being the winner and she started taking out some things from Ashu's drawer.

Aman: nahi beta aise koi cheez nahi nikalte... Aapke doctor Uncle ki zaroori cheezein hongi na...chalo wapas rakho sab. She didn't listen to him and kept on taking out papers from the drawer. Finally Aman got up to keep everything back in its place... while he was arranging the papers he saw some photographs kept in that drawer. He saw a faint look of Nidhi in those photographs ...surprised to have Nidhi's pics there he took them out and was shocked to see her with Dr Ashutosh and the hospital staff. He also realized that she was a bubbly and chirpy girl in those photographs...he couldn't make out anything...Nidhi is hospital mein thi...usne kabhi mujhe bataya hi nahi...na hi Uncle ne... fir usne kyun chhod diya...aur wo tab to aisi nahi thi...chup chup... aisa kya hua jo wo itna badal gayi... Mujhe in sab baaton ka pata lagana hi hoga... he thought.

Nidhi(J): mujhe bhi dikhao yeh kiske photos hain?

Aman: kisi ke nahi...chalo chalte hain yahan se...

He took her with him and left her with her mother. She was getting discharged and both of them met Nidhi and CV. Nidhi (J) asked Nidhi to talk to her daily on phone and meet her regularly. Nidhi promised her that she would do so and both of them went home after discharge. After some time Ashutosh came there and handed over the discharge papers and gave the needed advice on regular medications and necessary precautions to be taken. Aman noticed the eye contact between Ashutosh and Nidhi and felt something between them...the way both of them looked at each other...their eyes spoke thousands of words which he wasn't able to understand. But he decided that he needs to figure out everything ... As it was about both of them... He wanted to know what made Nidhi turn into a lifeless soul ... The girl who used to be happy and full of life has changed drastically...he needs to know the reason behind this. CV was discharged and all of them went to their home with Aman. He didn't talk to any of them about Nidhi's past as today was a big day for all of them...CV was back home after so many days of hospitalization. He wanted her to feel the happiness and relief after a very long time.

Tere khamoshi ki awaaz mere dil mein shor machati hai

Bas un khamosh lafzon ko samajhne ki hai chaahat

End of this part😊

Hope you like it😊