AshNi FF: Kabhi khushi kabhi gham; discontinued - Page 18

Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#171

This is something we all need for a long time, a beautiful update Manisha 👏

So emotional, so purely an AshNi update, and full of the tears that fell on my lappy 😳

Will write more, as am really short of words for your stupendous and warm hearted write up!

Luv ya dear ❤️ 🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 6 years ago

#172

What Nidhi saw a teddy Ashu in the party.. she always wanted him to be like..

What CV imagined him n Nidhi n the little girl.,,,, somewhere in his heart he has seen a lovely life of what Nidhi desires..

But things are not the same at any end..

Ashu wants her to move on.. but do he really.. ??/ No he dont,, in fact he cant even..

Nidhi ,, all bowed to her father's wishes..first becoming a doc,,then leaving Ashu n now engaged to another doc Aman.. But her feelings were not in her father's hold.. she fell in love with the most eligible heart,, n she gave in,,, she wanted to live a life with him.. but she had to do what her father wanted her to..

What Ashu wanted.. he wanted her to smile like he do.. the fake ever.. the pretended... but her smiles were away for the many reasons..

She had to live a life she never wanted to live.. She ultimately when gave in to continue as a doc .. it was purely her noble heart n her attachment that to Ashu.. Yeah there is no denying a fact that she fell for him the very initial time she confronted to leave the job..

But things have miles travelled n now the bitter fact of her exchanging the ring to some other person is out.. which he is unable to bear.. n his tears are the proof that he is hurt.. n cant be stable again..

Nidhi knew what he is going thru.. not able to meet his eyes,, she was ready to talk to him,,, cos on this very Earth only she knows what he will be thinking n going thru..

It touched my heart Manisha.. when i saw him crying bitterly on knowing the brutal fact..

Emotional n very delicate.. truly heart breaking yet once again.,,

Loved the narrative., ⭐️👏

Narrative that took me to his cabin n i was only watching him consoled by his heart that is not his.. n Nidhi who wants to talk to him.. but as he knows her inner turmoil as well,, he look upon the other side n tried to sooth the scene.,

Its easy to say that moving on will make them feel better after sometime.. but its not easy.. not easy for the true lovers.. not easy for the best partners..

I wish CV wud have learnt it.. or else Aman wud realise how she is not happy with his presence or what..

Got emotional on reading it again.. n wud like to see the next part.. cos this will only make the things progressed.. n that can be a scene to watch..

Beautiful n sensitive update.. will wait for the next..

God bless..

Thanks, !

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#173

Love is priceless, it knows the feelings of heart, it climbs the mind and tell the soul that it belongs to you!

Sometimes our heart takes much time to accept the reality, the worst of all, cruel to kill!

What a beauteous Manisha 👏

Loved every bit of it! The cuteness of Nidhi and Nidhi junior, the kindness of the b'day party thrown and Ashu coming out but with no heart! And his coming was a blessing to both the Nidhis ⭐️⭐️

The way she looked upon him, she finds a dignified and elegant human being who can turn the tables for others. She looked upon a life with him, that can be viewed even by her baba, but she knows this is just for the time being.

Ashu on the other hand has seen the worst day of his life, after his Baba left him and again when Nidhi left him though it was mutual. But today, it's the storm of thunders and tears and heart breaks that are many!

The way you have narrate the whole scene of Ashu knowing about Aman, and then his reaction and closing himself in his cabin and his perplexity - all taking him to the world where he can see no Nidhi with him and he has to accept the very fact he knew for long! The scene came out magnificently matchless 👍🏼

Today is the end of his world, his love, his companionship and his claim that Nidhi belongs to her, even if only through heart!

What a pathetic twist! What a tearjerker! What a bleeding hearts of AshNi and your readers along with you yourself!

It's not easy to pen down these kind of phases, but you have stupendously done it Sweetie 👏

I loved your take, and feel how it mystify Ashu as he had to compose himself cos he knows Nidhi must and is going through a situation somewhere similar to his. he is definite to manipulate things for her to move on as he knows well that she has not yet moved on by heart.

If Cv had seen him in this phase, he wud have definitely thought of his mistake, but he regards his decision right. He finds best for his daughter, but will that best can give the same love and relation she deserves?

Am looking forward to Cv coming up with a tete a tete with Ashu cos that can only make him realise what and who real Ashu is!

No idea what you are going to show in the next, but am eager to know if Ashu is no more crying.

Cos if he will, then will Nidhi, then will AshNi and then will, you know!

Thanks for the superlative dear, Luv ya even more ❤️ 🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 6 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: bawaswift
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will come back with my take on your fabulous update.. ! Bless you Manisha... !

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Bless you too Bhaiya😃🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 6 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Swatishubh
This is something we all need for a long time, a beautiful update Manisha 👏
So emotional, so purely an AshNi update, and full of the tears that fell on my lappy 😳

Will write more, as am really short of words for your stupendous and warm hearted write up!
Luv ya dear ❤️ 🤗

Sorry to make you cry Bhabhi😳

Love you too😃🤗

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Anjani9

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