AshNi FF: Kabhi khushi kabhi gham; discontinued

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I'm back with my new story on Ashni as i got a new idea recently πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
New year is here so why not a story on this theme onlyπŸ˜›

Hope you enjoyπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ i'm not sure whether this would be a two or three shot...depends on what comes to my mind...πŸ˜†
For now enjoy the first part😊
Here it is...πŸ˜‰


Nidhi was sitting with her fellow interns and was keen to plan for the new year celebrations in the hospital. But as this was her first new year after joining the hospital, she was waiting for someone else to initiate the discussions. But when she saw no one even talking about the upcoming new years eve just two days later...she decided to speak up as she was finding it so awkward as everyone in the hospital was so silent and there wasn't even a word being spoken about such an important occasion.

Nidhi: aap sab ka new years eve ka kya plan hai?

Everyone was shocked to see someone talking about new year celebration in this hospital.

One colleague: kya aapko pata nahi? Yahan aisi baatein karna bilkul mana hai...

Nidhi: aisa kyun ?

Other colleague: wo isliye kyunki humare Dean Dr Ashutosh ko party ya celebration ke naam se allergy hai... aap yahan nayi hain isliye aapko nahi pata shayad...par yahan koi bhi celebration nahi hota..

Nidhi was shocked to know this... although she knew about the strictness and the discipline which Dr Ashutosh had been maintaining everywhere in the hospital...but sometimes there should be exceptions to all the rules. New year is one such occasion when everyone deserves the right to celebrate and be happy. But despite her attempt to convince the others for planning some sort of celebration...no one agreed to participate in her plan as they were really scared of his anger. Nidhi decided that she too would cancel her plans as no one was ready to support her. She prayed to God to help her with a chance to do something special for the patients and the staff at the hospital who were missing out on a chance to welcome the new year with smiles and happiness. But with no help from anywhere, she retreated back to her work.

While she was going back home after her shift the next morning, she overheard Dr Ashutosh instructing his assistant that he should get all the necessary papers signed before the 1st of January as he was supposed to leave for a conference that morning itself. Nidhi was too excited to hear this and she immediately went back to the staff room to inform everyone that Dr Ashutosh won't be there in the hospital on the 1st of January and they could plan some small party on that day. Everyone was scared of the fact that if he came to know that they had organised a get together in the hospital...he would be really furious and they would have to face the consequences. But Nidhi assured them that she would manage everything and he won't come to know anything. They would just have a cake cutting ceremony and snacks and sweets distribution...and nothing more. Everyone agreed to her plan but everyone was still worried.

The new year had started and Nidhi had arranged cake, sweets and snacks for everyone... the junior staff had decorated their staff room and as Dean had already left... everyone was relieved that he won't be coming now. Little did they know that the storm was on its way for them. Everyone was enjoying the party and the patients and their attendants also were very happy as this was something very unique that was happening here. Nidhi was very happy to see everyones smiling faces and there were few children who were also admitted to the hospital. They came upto Nidhi and invited her for a dance with them as she really got along well with the kids. She couldn't refuse to the request of those kids and she joined them for dance. Everyone was clapping and some more joined them in their dance when suddenly everyone was shocked to see Dr Ashutosh stand right there in front of them (his flight had been cancelled bcoz of the fog so he came back to the hospital). There was a pin drop silence in the hospital and everyone stood there like a statue. Nidhi felt as if her breath stuck in her throat when she saw him...mar gaye aaj to... She thought. She gathered her courage and went upto him with a piece of cake in her hands.

Ashutosh: to yeh sab aap ne kiya hai Dr Nidhi? Aap hi hain jo yahan nayi hain...aur koi nahi hai jo yeh sab kare...wo bhi meri marzi ke khilaaf... Am I right?

She stood still with cake in her hands... her hands trembling a bit...

Ashutosh: don't you know that when I'm asking you something you need to give me an answer? (he shouted)

Nidhi: Sir...Sir ...wo ...wo main...maine...

Ashutosh: I need an answer Dr Nidhi... aap mere office mein aakar mujhe answer dengi ki aapne aisa kyun kiya... Aur agar aapke paas koi valid answer nahi hai to aap apna suspension letter meri table se lekar jaa sakti hain... am I clear?

Nidhi: ye...yes Sir...

Today a girl like Nidhi who never found it difficult to give any answer in the past...she just couldn't speak up in front of his furious looks... everyone along with her was spellbound and those kids started crying seeing everything happening there. Nidhi saw them crying and their tears gave her strength to speak in front of this stone hearted person. She wont let these kids cry on the first day of the year when they were already suffering from their illness. She asked them to calm down and assured them that she'll handle everything and they need not worry. She went inside his office and stood there in front of him.

Ashutosh: aap ne jawab nahi diya aap ne yeh sab kyun kiya?

Nidhi: wo maine yeh isliye kiya kyunki mujhe lagta hai ki har insaan ko naya saal celebrate karne ka haq hai...in patients aur yahan ke staff ko kyun nahi?

Ashutosh was angry to hear her answer and asked her who gave her the right to decide what would happen in the hospital?

Nidhi: yeh to har kisi ka right hai na... agar hum sab ne mil kar thoda smile kar liya to usme galat kya hai?

Ashutosh: galat aapke smile karne mein nahi hai Dr Nidhi... Galat hai in sab patients ki health ko risk karne mein... aap ne ek baar bhi socha ki in sab ko aap yeh cakes...sweets dengi... to inki health affect ho sakti hai... jitna time aapne celebrate kiya utni der poora staff apni responsibilities bhool gaya tha... is sab ki responsibility aap lene ko tayaar hain...? Agar kuchh ho jaata to kya aap smile karke us problem ko handle kar sakti thi... agar kisi patient ki health deteriorate ho jaati...tab kya aap khud ko maaf kar paati? Jawab dijiye mujhe...

Nidhi: nahi Sir...main yeh sab nahi kar paati... par maine to yehi socha tha ki in sab ko wo chhoti si khushiyan de paaun...jo inse door hain... kyunki yeh apne parivaar se door hospital mein admit hain... wo thodi der ke liye hi sahi...apni beemari ko... apne dukh ko bhool gaye the... main to bas yeh hi chahti thi Sir...

Nidhi went close to the glass window and showed him outside...

Nidhi: yahan aaiye Sir...wo dekhiye... yeh sab log bahar isliye chup hain...dukhi hain...kyun ki wo sab aap se darte hain... aur wo aap ke gusse ko face nahi karna chahte... jab main unke saath thi... to mujhe laga... jaise wo sab aap ko dua de rahe the...kyun ki aap ke hospital mein inhe ilaaj ke saath saath pyar bhi mila... in duaaon ki koi keemat nahi hoti Sir...yeh to anmol hoti hain... aaj hum sab ne thoda sa discipline ke badle bahut saari duaayen mili hain... hai na.. dekhiye na Sir...

Ashutosh saw the people standing outside and somehow her words touched the right chords in his heart and he stood there quietly... He couldn't say anything after that... Nidhi kept on standing there waiting for his response but somehow he was in a state of trance... in these years no one ever dared to speak like this in front of him and when today she did... He couldn't refute the fact that whatever she said... Somewhere he knew was right. He was brought out of his thoughts by Nidhi when she asked him whether she needs to pick up her suspension letter. He looked at her and for few seconds wasn't able to say anything. He later just asked her to leave from there and she went out. Before leaving the office... She looked behind towards Ashutosh who was still looking out of the window.

Nidhi closed the door behind her and suddenly with the sound of the door opening Ashutosh was brought out of his trance when the assistant informed him that the arrangements for the new year party had been done. He realised that he was lost in the thoughts of his first new year with Nidhi. So much had changed between them and now after 2 years of togetherness ... Again they were not together and he was missing her a lot. How he wished she comes back into his life but he had to respect her decision and will have to bear this pain of separation from his life.


End of part 1😊

Achha laga ya nahi... tareef to kar do pleaseπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³


Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/145675845

Part 2a

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/145799936

Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/145932889

Part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/145990862

Part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146058688

Part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146211708

Part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146365595

Part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146541954

Part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146648425

Part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146768449

Part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146939182

Part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147030585

Part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147315443

Part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147470209

Part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147600690

Part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147759116

Part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147912106

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Anjani9 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much...will be back...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Me crying πŸ˜†
What a beautiful and lovely story you have started Manisha di ❀️
I loved it, enjoyed it and will write more in a while. Have to come back to terms πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
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They are separate but inseparable, they are in love but not together.
I loved this start so so much πŸ‘πŸ‘ The trance in which Ashu was lost, is so beautifully written and well woven the plot as to see him hard stoned, and full form of dominating the staff and every corner of his KGH !
Mallika is missed though πŸ˜† I was reading the patients' care and lecture from Ashu, but was thinking that Mallika would have told him to say this πŸ˜‰
Coming back to the story ::

Ashu has been so lonely and silent in his life that he had to be hard to the life he was leading. He always wanted to give the best to the world, but something stopped him always to enjoy and smile ! Nidhi did took out him, but the separation track always have been the mute phase of their life !
I certainly loved the track, but sadness prevailed every time !

Loved to see a Nidhi trembling with a cake piece in her hand, and got scared looking at the furious side of the Dean ! 😳 Loved to see her relieving the kids from the fears of him. And loved more to see him lost in her words and the sight out of the window πŸ€—
The later trance made me cried hard 😳 I could not believe it was all a two year old time he was recalling ! The time is so cruel na di, we want to enjoy and continue enjoying, but time do not have the heart to give us the moments we want to live !
The separation did gave them the cries and sadness, but after that there were only khushiyan, had it been minus mallika πŸ˜‰

Plss do continue this story, with every thing shown, bcos we miss Ktlk and characters, that we wanna see them all again and again !
Thanks for this new year gift di, loving it and will be waiting for the next part eagerly.

With huggies, shoni wali ❀️


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Posted: 6 years ago
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All applauds for you Babita, what a review!!! ❀️ πŸ€—
Awesome!!! πŸ‘
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Thanks Manisha for this beautiful new year gift ❀️ πŸ€—
And what a start to the new one! Loved to see a time of the start of their love and, and a time when they are away from each other, but surely not from the love they have!

The written part is well correlated and makes it politely an emotional scene in the end of it! What a sudden contrast to the scene, when the door Nidhi shuts, is opened by an assistant and that after a two year of gap! Wondermagical scene it is πŸ‘
So, now after two years of the time when Nidhi juggled to organize a new year party, Ashu arranges for one nowhere but there itself in KGH! Where Nidhi had to ask the other interns, he is now openly throwing it! Where Nidhi had to sob the crying kid patients, he is there to may be even dancing with them and rejoicing all for Nidhi and her wishes!
I always love this true love of AshNi, who even in their separation, always knew what the other one was thinking and wishing. They did feel sad, but always did the good for others, to make others happy and indirectly making their love happy!
I felt for Ashu in the last scene, he is celebrating for Nidhi, without Nidhi, and with Nidhi in his heart!
I do want to know here, what exactly made them part the ways, and to what extent they fell in love for! I do want to know what and how he fell in the beauty of love, and how Nidhi made him enjoying the little things of life!
Hardstone turned into a soft doc, i and we all know, but i do wanna know how he melted to her love here in this story!
Manisha, thanks so much Sweetie, for this special gift you have gifts to us on this new year ⭐️⭐️ can't thank you enough my sweetheart, it's a blessing always to get from you!
Will wait for the next one, luv ya, with shoni si huggy ❀️ πŸ€—


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Nidhi closed the door behind her and suddenly with the sound of the door opening Ashutosh was brought out of his trance . He realised that he was lost in the thoughts of his first new year with Nidhi. So much had changed between them and now after 2 years of togetherness ... but he had to respect her decision and will have to bear this pain of separation from his life.



He is missing her at this time of celebs that she taught him to celebrate.. !
He is missing a life to spend out there with her,, but has to do it all without her.. as he respect her decision to bear the separation .,. ! What a change that we can see in his attitude to life.. n to himself.. n me waiting for the reason they made parts.. !
Lovely scenario the story starts with.. β­οΈπŸ‘
Awesome narration,,, n a never thought twist Manisha.. Hats off dear.. ⭐️

Ashu is living a life where there is no Nidhi with him,, but he is living a life exactly how she wanted him to lead,, !
Nidhi,, Nidhi who made him realise the true sense of living a life even in sadness... who taught him that every one needs to enjoy in their worse days or so..
She was excited to celebrate the new year,,, fighting the oddness of the Dean,, n gave up.. but got more excited over his not being there on the day.. n managed to organise what she wanted to do..
But ye ho na saka,, he was there due to bad light.. only to see the true light of the life he was missing,, !!
Loved the way you have projected the story.. n have left the scene where Ashu is only remembering the beautiful past.. n only to come back to the senses n accepting the life as it is.. for her.. !
Very nice take dear. .. good that i am a part of this beautiful TS,, n will get more from you..
Ashu got a lovely life... but things were not favourable.. still they are there living n living with kabhi khushi kabhi gham.. but living the life as it come to them,, Fantabulous.. !!!

Thanks dear.. will wait for the next..

God bless.. !!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Me crying πŸ˜†

What a beautiful and lovely story you have started Manisha di ❀️
I loved it, enjoyed it and will write more in a while. Have to come back to terms πŸ˜†


Yeah dear what a take on the twist by Manisha.. β­οΈπŸ‘
But,, but .. but.. your review Babita... 😳 its 100 on 100... n mounts the analytic quality in you... ⭐️⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘
Fabulous.. n stupendous.. ⭐️
Hats off to you too.. ! Three Cheers.. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

God bless.. !!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Waiting for part - 2...
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Are you working on Part-2???
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