AshNi TS: Tere liye.... Last Part updated - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: bawaswift


rula maara.. 🤗

It doesn't really matter ...if we are together or apart,,,
you are never really far from me,,, you are always in my heart...

I love the way we both can laugh,,, until we almost cry,,,,
yet hug each other tenderly,,,, when real tears fill our eyes...

In some ways we are so different,,,, yet our values are alike,...
I know you will always have my back,,,, whenever trouble strikes...!

You know my darkest secrets,,,, and you never judge my pain...
You validate my dreams,,,, and let me know they are not in vain...

The face I often show the world,,,, is who "they" need to see,...
but you accept me for myself,,,, as God would have me be...

If I could turn one wish to prayer,,,, it would be that you could see,...
how precious you are in my eyes, ...and how you wil always be...!!!

For no matter where life leads us,,,, from now until the end,...
I pray you will feel my love for you,,,, my sister, my best friend...🤗


me there... for u.. n shall be... 😃




Me too too emotional to read you Bhaiya😃
I just wish our bond stays the same forever...loves to you Bhaiya...and I know you are there for me😃🤗
This feeling is a big support in itself😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: babita..

Very nicely you have ended the TS Manisha di 👏👏

The brothers are all alike ! They take time, but never leave their work undone. Here, i saw a drastic change in Ashu, all with the visit of Sid, and he followed him what he tells him about Nidhi and her likes and hobbies. What Ashu did, it was long due, but he always wanted to do something for her and did not leave the chance he grabbed from Sid today.

Loved to see Ashu taking initiative to gift Nidhi with her likes and her celebrating and burning crackers with him, so magical and lovely
She has got her Baba back and she feels so blessed that her Sid bhaiya has given her, her promised happiness. Brothers are all alike 🤗
Thanks a lot Di, for the beautiful presentation of emotions and love, change and new life !
Lovess, muaah ❤️


Brothers are so very important in a girls's life...I know this as I have gone through the craving for a brother...and thats what made me think of this idea and I made this story...Glad that you loved it...😃

He helping to patch up the differences in the family and Ashu changing himself was a real surprise for her😃

Thanks a tonne sweetheart😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: babita..

What a lovey poem you have posted for Bawa Bro ❤️
Full of your love and you expressing all your feelings there, for him and for the times you both have shared. Awesome and truly emotional ⭐️⭐️
Bro is very right :: rula diya and that again with a totally magnificent lines written for you !
I am truly blessed to day on reading both of you 🤗
Keep it up both of you, meko aur bhi maangta 🤗

Let this love be growing with times, and you adore each other with all your sharing happiness !
Stay always blessed 🤗


You are right Shona...I had tears in my eyes to read the lines written for me...truly fantabulous👏⭐️
Bro please write more often for all of us please😃

hope our bond of love grows with time like this only😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: mbskkk

Indeed a changed ashu and fulfilling all nidih's wishes.

I am happy with this nice end, keep the good work manisha 👏
bawa is a pure soul i have ever come across. i like your feelings written in one of your poem for him.

i will wait for more from you for ashni and sameer naina.
bless you beta 🤗


Thank you so much Uncle for the beautiful comment😃
I amd glad that you liked the ending😃
Bawa Bro is very special to me and I can never think of my life without his presence around...God bless him and his family...Regards to you Uncle😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: nishi05

Awesome both of you...Manu and Bawa Bro..Awesome poetry...⭐️👏👏
Really heart touching poems...👏
rula diya na...🤗
God bless you both...!!! Love you...❤️ 🤗


Thanks a tonne Devyani Di...glad to see that you loved the poetry😃
Loves to you as well Di😃❤️🤗
Bro is such an awesome writer...👏⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Lovely ending to a beautiful start Manisha 👏

Sid came for a purpose and filled the gap between the families, i wish every home gets a chance for the grudges be broken and love be poured!
Ashu came forward to help Nidhi and see her eyes shine more and he did what he wanted her to see like. Sid and Ashu gave Nidhi all the wondrous joys this Diwali, i loved the concept ⭐️
Baba coming and hugging the couple with his blessings, Nidhi always crave for!
The burst crackers are the real example of Ashu finally breaking all the odds and is the real simpleton from a Hardstone of times!
Beautiful feeling to see a happy family with a change : of minds, of hearts, and of situations!
There is no denying a fact we all love our families. But to bow down and to start thinking from the same state of mind one is going through in the family is an initiative takento restore the lost joys and finding the happiness in the dark!
I rely on your stories a lot Sweetie 🤗
And that's the reason that i see your poems so realistic and straight from your heart!
Thanks for beauteous and for the journey of AshNi all going smoothly more with Sid around!
One must have these kinda gifted brothers around 🤗
Luv ya, more than you can ever think ❤️ 🤗


Thanks a lot Bhabhi for the awesome understanding of the written lines and the deeper understanding of all the emotions😃❤️
I owe a lot to you and Bro and thats the reason i make it a point that I keep on writing for you all😃
Thanks a lot for being there...family relations are very important in everyones life and thats what I tried to present here through my story...I'm so glad I could keep upto the expectations from me😃

Thanks a lot😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Me Nishi? oops, tough job among the brilliance 😳 😆

Let them do the official job, we'll clap for them 👏


No Bhabhi...all of us know what an awesome writer you are...so please don't say this😉
I want you to write something here as well...Please do the honors...we'll be all waiting for you😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Thank you Anjani...😃
The story was just planned to show the importance of relationships in our life..and I'm glad you liked it...Thanks😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


No Bhabhi...all of us know what an awesome writer you are...so please don't say this😉
I want you to write something here as well...Please do the honors...we'll be all waiting for you😃🤗

😳

Will try for sure, but I need time sweetie ❤️ 🤗
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