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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

On Ashu's signal he recollected her poetry and it was like...(I have taken my own poetry here which I wrote for Bawa Bro...)

How do I explain in words, what you mean to me

Whenever I close my eyes, I find you close to me.

In this lonely and dark world, you are a bright and shining star

You have a special place in my heart,

My brother...my best friend, so special you are.

You hold my hand; you help me find my way

I know you are with me, no matter come what may

You laugh with me when I'm happy and elated

You have tears in your eyes when I'm sad and depressed

I look up to you whenever I need an advice

I find you ready with one always...ever so wise.

You listen to me when I speak

You come to know even when I don't...

I need your help in all my decisions

I find you with me; without me saying.

Only a heart as serene as yours, would give so unselfishly

The many things you've done; all the times you were there.

I know deep down inside you really care for me

Even though I might not say; I appreciate all that you do

Where were you all these years; I missed you in all my smiles and tears

You make me feel at rest; to have you as my brother...I feel blessed

I feel very close to you though we are miles apart

You'll always be my brother; we are connected within our hearts.



rula maara.. πŸ€—

It doesn't really matter ...if we are together or apart,,,
you are never really far from me,,, you are always in my heart...

I love the way we both can laugh,,, until we almost cry,,,,
yet hug each other tenderly,,,, when real tears fill our eyes...

In some ways we are so different,,,, yet our values are alike,...
I know you will always have my back,,,, whenever trouble strikes...!

You know my darkest secrets,,,, and you never judge my pain...
You validate my dreams,,,, and let me know they are not in vain...

The face I often show the world,,,, is who "they" need to see,...
but you accept me for myself,,,, as God would have me be...

If I could turn one wish to prayer,,,, it would be that you could see,...
how precious you are in my eyes, ...and how you wil always be...!!!

For no matter where life leads us,,,, from now until the end,...
I pray you will feel my love for you,,,, my sister, my best friend...πŸ€—


me there... for u.. n shall be... πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Very nicely you have ended the TS Manisha di πŸ‘πŸ‘
The brothers are all alike ! They take time, but never leave their work undone. Here, i saw a drastic change in Ashu, all with the visit of Sid, and he followed him what he tells him about Nidhi and her likes and hobbies. What Ashu did, it was long due, but he always wanted to do something for her and did not leave the chance he grabbed from Sid today.

Loved to see Ashu taking initiative to gift Nidhi with her likes and her celebrating and burning crackers with him, so magical and lovely
She has got her Baba back and she feels so blessed that her Sid bhaiya has given her, her promised happiness. Brothers are all alike πŸ€—
Thanks a lot Di, for the beautiful presentation of emotions and love, change and new life !
Lovess, muaah ❀️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
What a lovey poem you have posted for Bawa Bro ❀️
Full of your love and you expressing all your feelings there, for him and for the times you both have shared. Awesome and truly emotional ⭐️⭐️
Bro is very right :: rula diya and that again with a totally magnificent lines written for you !
I am truly blessed to day on reading both of you πŸ€—
Keep it up both of you, meko aur bhi maangta πŸ€—

Let this love be growing with times, and you adore each other with all your sharing happiness !
Stay always blessed πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Indeed a changed ashu and fulfilling all nidih's wishes.
I am happy with this nice end, keep the good work manisha πŸ‘
bawa is a pure soul i have ever come across. i like your feelings written in one of your poem for him.

i will wait for more from you for ashni and sameer naina.
bless you beta πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: bawaswift


rula maara.. πŸ€—

It doesn't really matter ...if we are together or apart,,,
you are never really far from me,,, you are always in my heart...

I love the way we both can laugh,,, until we almost cry,,,,
yet hug each other tenderly,,,, when real tears fill our eyes...

In some ways we are so different,,,, yet our values are alike,...
I know you will always have my back,,,, whenever trouble strikes...!

You know my darkest secrets,,,, and you never judge my pain...
You validate my dreams,,,, and let me know they are not in vain...

The face I often show the world,,,, is who "they" need to see,...
but you accept me for myself,,,, as God would have me be...

If I could turn one wish to prayer,,,, it would be that you could see,...
how precious you are in my eyes, ...and how you wil always be...!!!

For no matter where life leads us,,,, from now until the end,...
I pray you will feel my love for you,,,, my sister, my best friend...πŸ€—


me there... for u.. n shall be... πŸ˜ƒ



Awesome both of you...Manu and Bawa Bro..Awesome poetry...β­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘
Really heart touching poems...πŸ‘
rula diya na...πŸ€—
God bless you both...!!! Love you...❀️ πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Hay Manu...πŸ€— will read n comment soon sweetie...😳
You're Awesome sweetheart...πŸ‘
Thank you..love you... Bless you..!! β€οΈπŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: babita..

What a lovey poem you have posted for Bawa Bro ❀️
Full of your love and you expressing all your feelings there, for him and for the times you both have shared. Awesome and truly emotional ⭐️⭐️
Bro is very right :: rula diya and that again with a totally magnificent lines written for you !
I am truly blessed to day on reading both of you πŸ€—
Keep it up both of you, meko aur bhi maangta πŸ€—

Let this love be growing with times, and you adore each other with all your sharing happiness !
Stay always blessed πŸ€—

Me too wants more from both of you...n from bhabhi too...😳 πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Lovely ending to a beautiful start Manisha πŸ‘
Sid came for a purpose and filled the gap between the families, i wish every home gets a chance for the grudges be broken and love be poured!
Ashu came forward to help Nidhi and see her eyes shine more and he did what he wanted her to see like. Sid and Ashu gave Nidhi all the wondrous joys this Diwali, i loved the concept ⭐️
Baba coming and hugging the couple with his blessings, Nidhi always crave for!
The burst crackers are the real example of Ashu finally breaking all the odds and is the real simpleton from a Hardstone of times!
Beautiful feeling to see a happy family with a change : of minds, of hearts, and of situations!
There is no denying a fact we all love our families. But to bow down and to start thinking from the same state of mind one is going through in the family is an initiative takento restore the lost joys and finding the happiness in the dark!
I rely on your stories a lot Sweetie πŸ€—
And that's the reason that i see your poems so realistic and straight from your heart!
Thanks for beauteous and for the journey of AshNi all going smoothly more with Sid around!
One must have these kinda gifted brothers around πŸ€—
Luv ya, more than you can ever think ❀️ πŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: nishi05

Me too wants more from both of you...n from bhabhi too...😳 πŸ€—

Me Nishi? oops, tough job among the brilliance 😳 πŸ˜†

Let them do the official job, we'll clap for them πŸ‘

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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Things do change if we want them to... its just a matter of time that we have to wait n wait for long..

Sid came n tried to change the scenario n got successful n this was not easy.. ho took years for himself to chase the path he wanted to n today achieved it,, with giving Nidhi her happiness that was there ,,, but was missing somethings n now is all happy to see Ashu changing n determined to do more,, n that Baba is back with her,,, accepting their relation...!!!

Awesome update,,, n no other ending wud be there accept this,,, β­οΈπŸ‘
Loved it Manisha...thanks dear,,!

The poem.. tu na batati toh bhi i knew it was for me,,, πŸ˜ƒ cos jo tune likha,,, its our routine n understanding we live,,,, ! πŸ˜ƒ
Bless you for what you have given to this bhai,,, me,,, me speechless betu...

Dil ki kali,, yuhi sada,, hansti rahe,,, khilti rahe,,, bagiya tumhari mehekti rahe,... πŸ€—


Sid came as a pleasant surprise and helped AshNi get back what they were missing...the family's support and Ashu changing to become what Nidhi would love to see him as...

Thanks a lot for the appreciationπŸ˜ƒ

And yes...I know ki aapko pata chalna hi tha...after all aapke liye hi thiπŸ˜‰
Me so blessed to have a bro like you...God bless you tooπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
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