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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome start manisha di...simple loved it. Thanks for this new story


You are welcome Tasha...glad that you liked it...I'm surprised to see you back here😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

I just came across a character i know from many years, and he seems to be real today to me ! First the name, and the place he has come from I just wish my bro comes back like this once in a while Thanks for the portrayal and entry of this character Manisha di 🤗




Thanks for realising what I intended to do...I just tried to put forward my imagination of the person you are talking about...although I don't know much but this is how my heart imagines him to be...I don't know whether I'm right or not...but for me he would be something like this...I'm so glad you liked the characterisation...The name was actually not planned but it was just by chance but later I realised that there couldn't be better name to this character😛

Thanks a lot dear😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely start di 👏👏I so loved Nidhi engrossing in her cousin bro's memories, missing him and the way he comes to meet her.

Loved the way they shared their childhood times and now he is all set to bridge the gap between the two families that are apart ⭐️

Nice story in the making di, I lost in Ashu's listening to Nidhi's changing her for him and he is so determined to do something more for her. Love is so polite and makes you more mature.❤️ I am looking forward to the two docs in meet and Nidhi getting her lost happiness back through her Sid Bhaiya😳

Thanks di, this was emotional and a beautiful effort by you. Hats off for keeping the forum active 👏👏Lovees 🤗


This character was introduced so that there is someone who realises what she was in the past and now how much she has changed herself...thats why I introduced someone like him...I'm so glad you liked him...I hope I can meet up to your expectations in the next and final part as well😊

Thanks a lot Dearie😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift


i too wish the same... 😳


Me too😛
But don't think this is ever possible😳😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Terrific start Manisha... ⭐️👏


New character's entry is Awesome n so energetic... ! Nidhi always longed a brother in the show... she got one in Armaan... N here too i saw she is sharing her feelings as same she relied on Armaan... !
Sid, the new entry is caring n mature n so understanding to make Nidhi n her life more easier.. !
Nice take on Ashu overhearing the convo... n coming to know how much she has done for him ,, n for his changed nature... hardstone turning into a melting stone yet once again..
Looking forward to see him burning the crackers this time... 😳
Nice theme.. lovely ambience.. n pure effort.. 👏
Keep it up Manisha... n many thanks for your efforts n giving us Ashni stories with your brilliant art of writing... ⭐️👏

God bless.. !


Thanks a lot Bro for telling me about the similarities between armaan and my character Siddharth...i'm glad you liked the start...hope that you like the second part as well...regards for your support always...god bless you Bhaiya😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

The Title made me to the land of the song :

Tere liye, hum hain jiye hothon ko siye!


Very nice starting Manisha 👏
You have touch the soul theme of a home and it's relations! Nidhi, who was just remembering her cousin, he was there knocking at her door! She felt sad and lonely without any from her Maayka, today a bro cum friend is here to fill the gaps that were built at the time of her marriage. The intuition and prayers,all said and shown so well! 👏
Beautifully written and versed so well, gelling so thoughtfully with the atmosphere at AshNi home!
I liked Sid coming and assuring her with happiness and joys that must be awaiting for her and Ashu! So felt for Ashu, who is listening over the talks and thinking of giving and gifting Nidhi with the charms of life she has left for him and for catching him with his lifestyle!
Overwhelmed with the very touching scene of the sis and bro meeting after such long time! Loved the scene, and their craving to meet and talk and talks. He is happy that she is happy, now will be looking forward to the Ashu - Sid meeting!

Thank ya so much sweetheart for this lovely effort, luv ya more ❤️ 🤗


This concept is there in my mind for a long time and when I promised bro that I would write something again...then I couldn't think of anthing so soon so I started this story...i'm glad you all liked the portrayal of this new character in my story...Loved to read your comment despite your busy schedule Bhabhi...God bless you and thanks a lot for your motivation and your love😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: mbskkk

good story you are making manisha beta 👏
story telling is an old way art and making of it is the broad mindset. What nidhi longed, she got today and she is now relying on sid for the peace making within the family. Is it not the need of the hour of every family? yes
ashu has seen the duo talking and may be he will give his hand in peacemaking along with sid.
if we go to the story, the families were against the marriage, so ashu must also take some initiative to make nidhi happy because her happiness is always in the smile of baba and bua.
carry on, bless you🤗


Thanks a lot and regards to you Uncle for your presence and your comments here😃
Every family and every person needs someone who understands them...people who have someone for them are lucky and having a family together is the most precious feeling to have for anyone...those who have a loving family are the luckiest in the world and those without...are not so lucky...so I just tried to present her longing for her bro and her family with her...I'm glad you liked the idea😃
Thanks a lot once again uncle😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Nice story...thank you once again...🤗


You are welcome Anjani...thanks for your appreciation...God bless you🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Last part

With all these thoughts Ashu entered the room and as both of them saw him, Nidhi introduced him to her cousin Siddharth. She told him about himand that he had been in the US since many years and that's why he wasn't available at the time of their wedding. Siddharth asked her to prepare dinner for all of them as it was long that he tasted anything prepared by her and that he wanted to share some good time with his Jiju. Ashu too expressed his desire to do the same and took Siddharth to the garden outside. Nidhi served tea for him as well and then went to the kitchen to prepare dinner.

Ashu: Nidhi ne aaj se pehle tumhara zikr nahi kiya...

Siddharth: haan Jiju wo kya hai na humari families ke beech mein thodi misunderstandings ki wajah se bahut time se humare bade logon mein interactions nahi hai...so maybe that's why she didn't...but ab main aa gaya hu na...sab theek kar dunga...dekhna aap...

Ashu: hmm I hope so...tumhe dekh ke lagta hai ki Nidhi tumse bahut close hai...

Siddharth: Nidhi...wo to hum sab ki nanhi pari hai...sab cousin brothers ki ek hi behen...aur wo bhi sabse chhoti...bahut laad pyar mein rakha hai ise hum sab ne...

Ashu: to kuch batao na...wo bachpan mein kaisi thi? Main zyada nahi jaanta uske bachpan ke baare mein...

Siddharth: bachpan mein na...wo ek udti titli jaisi thi...kabhi idhar to kabhi udhar...sab uske aage peeche dauda karte the...aur mujhse wo specially bahut zyada attached thi...kisi se bhi jhagda hota tha...to unki shikayat mujhse kiya karti thi...use pata tha...ki main uska hi saath dunga...ahahah...ekdum pagli thi wo...hum use chidaya karte the...ki badi hoke hum uski shaadi ek daaku se saath kar denge...to rone lagti thi...bahut pyar tha hum sab bhai behno ke beech...but ab bade hokar...jaane wo sab kho gaya hai jaise...wo bhi kya din the...

Ashu: bachpan to hota hi aisa hai...masoom...Nidhi ki hobbies kyat hi...

Siddharth: uski hobbies...hmmm...painting...writing poetry...dancing...jaante hain...usne apni sabse pehli poetry mere liye likhi thi...sunaau...

On Ashu's signal he recollected her poetry and it was like...(I have taken my own poetry here which I wrote for Bawa Bro...)

How do I explain in words, what you mean to me

Whenever I close my eyes, I find you close to me.

In this lonely and dark world, you are a bright and shining star

You have a special place in my heart,

My brother...my best friend, so special you are.

You hold my hand; you help me find my way

I know you are with me, no matter come what may

You laugh with me when I'm happy and elated

You have tears in your eyes when I'm sad and depressed

I look up to you whenever I need an advice

I find you ready with one always...ever so wise.

You listen to me when I speak

You come to know even when I don't...

I need your help in all my decisions

I find you with me; without me saying.

Only a heart as serene as yours, would give so unselfishly

The many things you've done; all the times you were there.

I know deep down inside you really care for me

Even though I might not say; I appreciate all that you do

Where were you all these years; I missed you in all my smiles and tears

You make me feel at rest; to have you as my brother...I feel blessed

I feel very close to you though we are miles apart

You'll always be my brother; we are connected within our hearts.

Ashu was so impressed to hear this as now Nidhi had not written any poetry since the time he knew her...he felt sad to realise that she wasn't the same anymore...she had changed herself so much for him...he told Siddharth that he wanted to do something for her and would like to make this Diwali special for her. Siddharth told him that he had an awesome plan to do that... just the Nidhi came to invite them for dinner and they all went inside. Nidhi had prepared Sid's favourite dish...guess what...rajma rice...and all of them relished the delicious meals and their childhood memories. After dinner they all had coffee together and in the meantime when Nidhi was making coffee, Siddharth told him about his plan and Ashu agreed to that. He greeted them and went back home and promised to be with them the next day.

Next morning, Nidhi woke up early as every year she made rangoli on Diwali. So this year also she did the same and arranged colours and flowers for rangoli...to her surprise she saw Ashu too coming there and offering her help in making that. She was happily amazed to know that he wanted to do that and after that both of them made a beautiful rangoli...Nidhi was very happy today...not only because he helped her in rangoli...but mainly because today he tried to do something he had never done before.

After rangoli making they both had breakfast together and then told her that he would be going with Siddharth for some shopping as he didn't know much about the good shops now in Lucknow. Siddharth had asked him for his help as he wanted to buy something for his family. So Ashu went to meet him at their decided meeting point. The rest of her day passed off in decoration and arrangements for Diwali Pooja. It was evening when she called Ashu that he shall be home on time so that Pooja could be carried out on time and he told her that he would be there in some time.

Nidhi got ready for the Pooja and was waiting for him to come home. The door bell rang and as she opened the door...was astonished to see Ashu, Siddharth and her Baba with them...how come all of them together and that too with Baba...she thought. All of them came inside and Nidhi hugged Baba and asked Siddharth how did all this happen? Ashu told her that it was Siddharth who owes the credit for all this. He only took Ashu to meet Baba and helped them clear all their misunderstandings and differences and finally he had accepted their relation as he was happy to know that she was happy with her chosen life partner.

Baba: kabhi kabhi bade bhi galti karte hain...maine bhi ki thi jo tum dono ke pyar ko samajh nahi paya...par Siddharth ne mujhe uska ehsaas karaya aur maine apni galti ko sudharne ki koshish ki...mujhe maaf kar do tum dono...

Both of them touched his feet together and received his blessings and after this they all carried out the Diwali Pooja together ... ...Nidhi was very happy today and this was evident from her smile which was making her look all the more beautiful. Ashu and Nidhi lit the candles and diyas together and the entire house was full of light and happiness all around. After having dinner, Siddharth told her that one more surprise is waiting for her outside and she shall go and see it for herself. She ran outside and saw Ashu standing with crackers waiting for her...she was astonished and wondered how many more surprises are awaiting for her today...Ashu told her to join him in burning these crackers as he alone is very scared to do this. She went to him and helped him do this and gradually he became comfortable with the crackers.

All of them had a blast this Diwali and actually it became the most memorable Diwali of her life when she got her brother, her father and a changed Ashu and that too...just for her. She thanked her cousin Siddharth for coming back and doing all that he did for her and he promised her that in future, he won't let any misunderstanding creep up between them. Ashu too promised her that he would try to become a person that she wants him to be but she told him that she loved him as he is and he didn't need to change himself...he is the best and will remain the love of her life forever...

The end...


Thanks for reading and commenting😊

Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Things do change if we want them to... its just a matter of time that we have to wait n wait for long..
Sid came n tried to change the scenario n got successful n this was not easy.. ho took years for himself to chase the path he wanted to n today achieved it,, with giving Nidhi her happiness that was there ,,, but was missing somethings n now is all happy to see Ashu changing n determined to do more,, n that Baba is back with her,,, accepting their relation...!!!

Awesome update,,, n no other ending wud be there accept this,,, ⭐️👏
Loved it Manisha...thanks dear,,!

The poem.. tu na batati toh bhi i knew it was for me,,, 😃 cos jo tune likha,,, its our routine n understanding we live,,,, ! 😃
Bless you for what you have given to this bhai,,, me,,, me speechless betu...

Dil ki kali,, yuhi sada,, hansti rahe,,, khilti rahe,,, bagiya tumhari mehekti rahe,... 🤗
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