AshNi TS: Tumse hi meri pehchaan; Last Part on Pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: bawaswift


Hello dear.. πŸ˜ƒ
So nice to see you back at the Forum... n you are right something has come up so late here.. i wish more members come back to read n comment here n join back the Ktlk team.,,,, !!!
Thanks to Manisha for the Awesome effort... ⭐️ πŸ‘


Yes..πŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
I wish Ashu is safe n sound... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Manisha, When is the 2nd part coming???
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: nishi05

Awesome narration Manisha...⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘

You narrated it very well dear..love the way you explain their love and their belief in their love...kabhi kabhi hamara farz hame itana bhi waqt nahi deta ki hum apne dil ki sun paye...kuch kar paye...

Like these last lines,

"Insaan ko har cheez ka saamna himmat se karna chahiye... Waqt ki yehi khasiyat hai...achha ho ya bura...theherta nahi hai...isliye kuch bhi ho jaye...kabhi bhi ghabraana nahi...mann ki Shakti aur bhagwaan me vishwas ho to har mushkil chhoti lagne lagti hai"

Simply Awesome πŸ‘


Eagerly waiting to know what had happened to Ashu... where he is...and how Nidhi will find him, her struggling with her fears n situation...

like it...no no I love it...πŸ˜ƒ
Wonderful efforts...keep it up dear...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thank you
Bless you !! β€οΈπŸ€—


Thanks a lot Di for your loving comment...thats true...many times we do have to place our duty above our love...thats the time when we are tested😊
I hope I could relate to AshNi as you all do...I'm not sure whether I can every do that😊
Thanks once again😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: babita..

Very beautiful start Manisha di πŸ‘πŸ‘

The fears, and bad signs did shook her, but Ashu's words and love made Nidhi move on, with a decision that no one, even destiny can not separate them !
Very nice story in making, i would love to post more.
I am in the Land of Ashni, where they are as always inseparable with their eternal love !



Thanks dearπŸ˜ƒ
Nidhi is shaken up now...due to those bad signs coming true...she isn't able to reach her love...but she has her duty to look after the patients...I am glad I could reach your hearts...love you Shona😊
thanks a lot once againπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: babita..

The dedication to the lovely couple at our Forum, Bawa bro and Swati bhabhi ❀️❀️ makes the story more interesting though.

Nice take di, ⭐️⭐️
U are superb,i will come back with more for the first part !

Thanks a lot di πŸ€—
loves ❀️


This dedication is truly deserved by our bro and bhabhi...πŸ‘β­οΈ
Love them both and love ya tooβ€οΈπŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice,, n an interesting story you have started Manisha... too good.. β­οΈπŸ‘


Yes.. Nidhi has lived a beautiful relationship with her love Ashu.. a one time hardstonic.. now a lovely brat.. πŸ˜‰
Loved your narrative part dear.. Awesome effort to give us such a delightful story... thanks a lottt.. !!!

Whats in store of Nidhi ahead.. is to be watched thru your pen now.. will be in wait for that.
Nice observation to the characters as you have not watched the show...πŸ‘
i wud like to read more.. n that from the aspect of what she do in this time of test... what Ashu brings in .. n what lays ahead.. !
Good start.. keep going the flow.. in wait for more..
n yeah.. me too wud love to write more... much more.. πŸ˜ƒ

God bless... !


Thanks Bhaiya...I never expected that you would like my presentation of the characters despite the fact that I haven't seen the show...I really didn't know much about them...I'll try to complete the story soon...I hope I can meet your expectations there as well😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: bawaswift

I want to dedicate this story to the lovely couple at this forum...Bawa Bro and Swati Bhabhi...whose love for this forum is known to all of usπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
Bro and Bhabhi please accept this small token of my love for you both...I somehow feel that AshNi must have been very similar to both of youπŸ€—...the beauty of their relationship is just as beautiful as yours...πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘...Obviously without the age gap between themπŸ˜³πŸ˜›


Thanks dear... yeah the love you can say.. but i dont accept Ashu's immaturity time to time in the show... πŸ˜†
Thanks dear... this means a lot.. 😳

Bless you... !

πŸ€—


Bless you both tooπŸ€—
About his immaturity...I'm not sureπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
I dedicated this to you for your love only...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

I got shivers Sweetie, on reading mine and bawa's name in your dedication, as the couple like AshNi ❀️ πŸ€—

This means everything to us, all our love for them is the reason we are here today!😳

Thanks Bhabhi...I just felt that I should do this...as this is how I imagine AshNi...so...πŸ˜ƒ

The story has started on a lovely note, with AshNi married and are happy in the arms of each other's luv! Lovely start with a humanly aspect to the superstitions we take in our lives!
Nice part as always is Ashu catching her eyes and getting to know what she is going through. Yes he is angry, but he is concerned, loving nature of his πŸ‘
Liked Nidhi's restlessness, but fearing what lies ahead for them the same day of curfew and riots.
Good beginning, interesting twist, nice and a mature creation by you. Awesome and an effective reflection to everyone's life here.
Hope to see Ashu safe, and both the docs saving lives of the victims if any!
Luv ya dearie, for the beautiful effort and attempting first time AshNi and giving them a screen here!
Thanks cud be a very little word here.
Keep updating, am loving the TS!

❀️ πŸ€—β€οΈ πŸ€—


I'm so glad you liked the first part...I hope I can keep up with your expectations in the next part as wellπŸ˜ƒ
Will try to update soonπŸ€—
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome di. Really loved the starting Soo much. Pls do continue soon


Thanks a lot Tasha😊
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