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No Tasha... Let it be... I cannot take that before asking Aarti di...😊Originally posted by: Tasha1994
aazuu do u want me to send aarti ji's ff to u
No Tasha... Let it be... I cannot take that before asking Aarti di...😊Originally posted by: Tasha1994
aazuu do u want me to send aarti ji's ff to u
Thank you Tasha for your suggestion...Originally posted by: Tasha1994
How about this amreen tere bina kya jina
Hi Azeen. Thanks for the Pm.
Wonderful to read an SS on AshNi.-- Hey Mehek... You are welcome dear...I am glad it was wonderful for you...😃Beautiful start. A Touching story right from the beginning.-- Thank you very much dear...😃Loved the way you have given the characters a different profession. And also deviated from the age-gap which was the basic idea of the show.-- Glad, you liked the change...😃Please continue soon.-- Sure!Love reading your stories. You are an amazing writer.-- Thanks buddy... But you are being modest... I am still learning to write...
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Originally posted by: Amreen...
Hey Aazeen... lovely story...
-- Hi Amreen... Thanks Buddy...
I love the song "Do pal rukaa..." too much already and u using it here on AshNi has made me like it even more...-- The song indeed is really beautiful! I too love it...
Lovely start... beautiful concept.-- Thank you!😃
A very new and unexplored concept must say...
Ashu a budding writer while Nidhi a literature student... Both already madly in love with each other... that they can belong to each other even being away from each other.
-- I am glad that u liked it, and felt that to be an unexplored concept... I try my best to bring something new...😃As it is shown there is no one for AshNi other than each other... I love it... muuaahhh...
You know I am in love with the theme... One of the most beautiful themes used here...
Thanks a million for providing us wid a new story with such lovely presentation... it will not only increase the count of stories here but will also increase activity on the forum...
-- Love sometimes is like that only... That person or nobody else... I'm glad u liked that... Hehehehe... So happy you liked that...Yup, it will increase the forum activity... Glad u liked the presentation, though it was written in a jiffy!😆Looking forward to read more...-- Sure-sure...
Continue soon... and yes have u seen my recent works here... If you haven't... plz have a a look.-- Yes Amreen I had been reading one of your works... I dont remember which one... I guess the one Where Ashni were neighbours in a foreign country, and he age her pizza... Is that yours? I read that... Very gripping I must say...I will read all ur works once I get some time...I have plenty of things at hand right now... But will come up soon...😃Thanks a lot dear for your lovely comment... Loved it!😃
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Originally posted by: Amreen...
Thanks a lot Amreen for your suggestions... I will tell you why I couldn't take any of your suggestions...1. Humari adhuri kahaani---- It looks like in the prologue that the story is incomplete, but it isn't... I wont let their story be incomplete... I suck at writing tragedies, and I dont enjoy one personally... So not my forte, not my story...😊2. Chaahun Main Ya naa---- This one is more because--- Humesha tumko chaaha, aur chaaha, aur chaaha kuch bhi nahi... nahi... nahi... Kuch bhi nahi...---- They will love each other forever no matter what... Na chaahne ka toh wo soch bhi nahi sakte...3. Ek Pyaar ka naghma hai----- Amreen I guess this title was used by Suvika di for one of her OS already... I didn't want to reuse it, until I had really no other title... 😳4. Jo Bheji thi Duaa---- Dunno dear, couldn't relate with that to my story...** You must be feeling me rejecting your titles, but you will understand why I did so, when you will read the story till the end... Why I have been so choosy about it... And I am really very sorry, I couldn't use that!
I have heard that song umpteen number of times...Originally posted by: Amreen...
In fact the best title one for ur story is "Khudaaya Ve..." from movie LUCK starring Imran Khan and Shruti Hassan... Plz hear the song once if you haven't...
The lyrics exactly depict the pain AshNi are going thru in your story...
Aaiye, aapka, intezaar tha...😆
Thank you very much Sonu...Originally posted by: Sonu12345
lovely update aazeen di liked it a lot
the New concept is really wonderful liked ashu and nidhi so much .you showed ashu and nidhi grief so well .nidhi wanted to run away but ashu didn't want to do that that's why they parted ways thanks for This story
Originally posted by: babita..
Liked this new concept Aazu 👏👏
-- Hey Babita... Thankoo...😃😃😃Separated by the cruelty of the family -- the concept is appealing and i would like to know more how they both meet again and how the things change.-- I thought the storyline is quite predictable...😉Ashu is an aspiring writer, hope he become a flourished one after the decade they are destined to meet. They are aiming at proving their worth of each other. This will be a clear direction that they are going to be each other's and no one else's.-- Waqt ne jo kiya haseen sitam, sitam toh jee lenge hum... Pyaar mera amar hai magar, Duniya ka zeher bhi pee lenge hum...They are each other's dear... Not even fate can part them long!Hopes are high for a brighter future!😉Loved it, will wait for more, Thanks dearie for this new and fresh story at this forum. Loves 🤗-- Will try to stand at your standards dear... Dunn just wanna save my grace...😳It was a pleasure writing...Thanks a lot!Loves!🤗
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh
World did not understand their love, but only lovers. How emotional and a touch of sadness prevailing and the two lovers got separated not by their choice, but their fate.-- Ek song mere dimaag mein aa raha hai... The most positive song in their situation---Tumse judaa hokar mujhe door jaana hai,pal bhar ki judaai,phir laut aana hai,saathiyaa...Sang rahega, tera pyaar...saathiyaa...rang laayega intezaar...😃Lovely concept Aazu, am glad that you cud come up with a different theme from your writes that i've read till date. 👏-- Right from the time I have started writing, I have tried novel things in my write-up, any how making something new in that... (Though Families have always played an inevitable part of my stories...😆 Everytime they were the bonding factor, this time it's a reason of separation... But families are hell necessary...😉 ) Bas they are the constant... Other than that I have tried my level best to take it differently...Be it my 1st OS meri toh maa hi nahi hai- Talks about the absence of that one person from Ashni and Khushi's life, that they miss the most...Be it my incompl. FF: Pyaar toh hona hi tha- talks about the twins, and their story...Be it Jo hua usey bhool jaa: Talks about Domestic Violence, Assaulted and Miscarriage victim lady coping back to life...Be it Mere Jeewan saathi: A complete sweet family dramaBe it my os: i shouldn't have left her alone-- Clearing the loops from the show...and so on...Just my only try to try something different...I really find stories boresome with--- He hates her, she dislikes him... They keep on bickering and then fall in love, she keeps on falling, he keeps on catching, her dupatta blows, her hair blows, they smile, they marry, and the story ends... To boring for my taste...😕Awesome to know that they will be together, though they will have to pay for their golden years.Will wait for the next one to know what's lying in their destiny.-- "Tha toh wo waqt anmol, par kya iss saath ki koi qeemat lagaa sakta hai...? Sab kuch chodh ke ye dil tumhare paas aaya hai, kya isse badi koi raqam hogi? Aakhir mein sapne toh tumhari hi baahon mein rehne ke dekhe they, aur aaj bhi tum wohi toh kar rahe ho... Apni baahon mein mujhe samet ke khud simat se gaye ho... Kya isse zyada ki khwaahish kari thi humne?"
^^ These are not the dialogues of the story, but the essence...😳 I hope I haven't disclosed everything...😆Thanks a lot bhabhi for such a beautiful, soulful response... I loved it! ❤️
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