SS:TUJHSE NARAAZ NAHI ZINDAGI CHAPTER:6 Last part UPDTD PG:67 22/09/16 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Overwhelming update Aazu, loved it πŸ‘πŸ‘
I liked the way Ashu expressed himself while saying -- bas zindagi kaati ..
It's only and only Nidhi's love that made him moving on, but the question Nidhi asked, made him laugh like mad. I liked when he cleared it with Nidhi !
Either you are life, or there is no life without you πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈ
Loved to see Ashu so down to earth. He is the same simple man as he was 15 years back. He is same for his Nidhi, becos he is changed for the world as a new being and a writer, but for her he is still in ! Beautiful gesture of Ashu, awesome attitude to life !
Looking different in looks, so that they can go out together, this is a lovely idea !
So, Ashu can make the house dirt free πŸ˜‰ Nice to see him pointing blue color clothes of Nidhi's wardrobe. The color magnifies how Nidhi is still so close to his choice that she carries.
Loved to know that they had dinner together and had a nice time. Being alone is hard again for Nidhi, and getting his message is a gift again for her. Liked to see them happy in each other's company and enjoying every minute.
A thought has plunged in her mind if to take up this relationship again. Would like to know how she finally decide to and what Ashu's thoughts over all this nice day he spent with his Nidhi !
Very nice continuation Aazu, with many things told specially a positivity through Ashu's words that he is still in.
Thanks dearie, loves ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago

I love you, for all that you are! For all that you have been! And all you are yet to be!

AshNi loved each other as a couple, never to separate in heart and soul, never to feel they are out of mind. Emotional flow took over progressing a lovely story of sweetness that has no place for looking back! πŸ‘ Aazu, you have been so awesome with every update of your stories, that every time i feel your pen writes what your heart tells it to. πŸ‘πŸ€—
The story moves in the same day, but how the same day changes in the end of it, lovely! The two love birds who had no idea what they will get during the day except a professional outcome, got the lost beings to themselves. They got to talk to them, spending time with them, heart out to each other, and looking forward to a life that can heal up all the wounds that they have suffered so far. Be it the dinner or the dusting of the house - the main idea is so to spend time with and within each other, that you have simplified so gracefully! ⭐️
Ashu has given the sign that he is already in ( her life be it a mess ) and that he has never thought of anyone else than her. His feelings are of Nidhi or no one. He is determined that one day he will be equal to her and jab tak jeyenge tumhe mohabbat kerenge! What else do Nidhi wants? In all her life she has longed him and today he is there in person, who is hinting a lovelife that even his dreams are not yet over with. Then, why and what Nidhi is apprehending of? The world, the society? The ones who have never look back to them, after they obliged to their wishes?
Had Nidhi been rigid, she wud be living a married life with him. Had Ashu objected, she wud never be a baby sitter at her home.
Today, life has once again given them a chance, and i feel they will come closer after this evening and their hearts will speak up! Blue color is going to play cupid again, so let's meet AshNi in blue next time πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Luv ya Aazu, for this sensitive SS, i am floored β€οΈπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
Am watching this kinda pic through this update -



And eagerly wants to watch this AshNi!!! 😳



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Posted: 9 years ago

Wo din jo tere saath guzaare the, talash unhein nazar baar baar karti hai...

Judai ka ek saal bada bhari guzra, lamha her ek keh gaya wo tere saath guzra...

Tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi hairaan hoon, fir se muskurna chahta hoon agar tu naraaz na ho toh...

( hope you will like my written lines.. 😳 )


Loved the update that manifests the inner self of Ashni.. who are same as before.. just that there are some events that have to be shared.. otherwise wohi zindagi hai.. wohi main hoon wohi tum.. !
Distance is the test of love.. many will fail.. but for those who can withstand it have the answer.. true love !β­οΈπŸ‘
This is what we have seen thru the eyes of Ashu... He is standing at the same path where Nidhi left him but cud never got separated..
Nidhi has seen the world n its bad events shattering her but left her to let her reach for the place she always wanted to live.. She has work and a life now where she has Ashu back with her.. but she is hesitating.. right .. ??/ I feel she is still battling the society n cant come out of its clauses.. ! Once she makes up her mind to go back to Ashu.. the same society will come back to tell her the dos n donts again... But i dont think this time Ashu will let her listen.. Or she will herself do that.. ??/
I saw a firm and a lover Ashu who can do things even after becoming a popular man to the society.. ! He is the same for Nidhi n to the world... but he has to take the permission of Nidhi to be hers.. cos even after becoming a writer,, he is yet to ask the life what it has in its pocket secretly saved for him..
" You want to cook for us nor not.. Yes i want to.. ! "The need is there... the acceptance is there... but the fear of an unknown is there.. Liked to read the way you have presented the thoughts of them... they are closer,, even more.. yet they are waiting.. for each other n for themselves..
I wish to see Ashu coming straight to her.,.. not cos she is free from her home task.. not cos he has become something today... but for the love he n she possess for each other... the love thats still alive.. n was never dead.. Today Ashu has the confidence to stop Nidhi from going away from him.. the only thing is the initiative... Will he.. ?// Or, Will baba this tiime.. //
I shall wait sensibly to know the minds of the distanced lovers... for whom love never died but their hesitations shall die now..
Awesome toh meri behen pahel se hi hai.. today dealing with this emotional theme,, she has topped the next level as well.. Celebrations.. !!! πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
Thanks dear.. ! how were exams.. ??/ 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey friends...

I was previously talking about a ghazal back then that would be actually apt for this update...

I am posting the lyrics of the song, if possible I will also put the YouTube link too...

Just have a look both at the lyrics and YouTube video too, and please let me know the scenario is just so co- incidentally almost same...

I came across this song after I had posted chapter 1... And felt it so similar...

So here it goes...

Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi... (2)
Yeh nazarana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Apne gham ka geet bana kar gaa lena... (2)
Raag puraana tera bhi hai mera bhi... (2)
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Tu mujhko aur main tujhko samjhaaoon kya
Tu mujhko aur main tujhko samjhaaoon kya
Dil deewana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Dil deewana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Shahar mein galiyon galiyon jiska charcha hai... (2)
Woh afsaana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Maikhane ki baat na kar waiz mujhse... (2)
Aana jaana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Yeh nazarana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi...

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dVW7Pb3NnLc&gl=IN&hl=en&client=mv-google
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aazeen pls give me one day for the review. So sorry for being late . Busy with diwali preparation
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fine ghazal,,, ! Goes with the story.. β­οΈπŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
wish all my friends a very happy Diwali
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley

y? I really think by now u should hv got used to that name?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Aap ki shaadi ko kitne saal beet gaye? huh?πŸ€ͺ🀣 🀣
And what padhai? I finished around 18-19 months back!
Okay so now that u have the money for netπŸ˜›πŸ˜›, r u reading my new story?πŸ˜ƒ
@bold -🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 Achaji? good hai ji.. at least u tell the reason truthfully, voh aapke mr. khan toh padhai ka bahana banate hain🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣
good na - kabhi toh pagalpanti bhi karni chahiye na
missed u mithee


Hehehe Nope abhi tak aadat nahi uss naam ki mujhe...And kitne saal pata nahi! Mr. Khan ko hee poochna padega...πŸ˜†

Acha padaai ho gayi...chalo acha hain😊

And na ji, koi bhi kahani nahi padi ab tak...office jaana and ghar sab usme mujhe bilkul time nahi milta...Aazeen ka bhi aajkal koi post nahi padti...

Missed you too Shirley Ji...Yaha aati hoon na bada ajeeb sa lagta hain.i mean pehle jab show chal raha tha hum sab yaha kitne log the..ab kaafi soona soona hain yaha nahi?

Chalo koi nai take care ... πŸ€—
Edited by Mithalee02 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Hey friends...

I was previously talking about a ghazal back then that would be actually apt for this update...

I am posting the lyrics of the song, if possible I will also put the YouTube link too...

Just have a look both at the lyrics and YouTube video too, and please let me know the scenario is just so co- incidentally almost same...

I came across this song after I had posted chapter 1... And felt it so similar...

So here it goes...

Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi... (2)
Yeh nazarana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Apne gham ka geet bana kar gaa lena... (2)
Raag puraana tera bhi hai mera bhi... (2)
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Tu mujhko aur main tujhko samjhaaoon kya
Tu mujhko aur main tujhko samjhaaoon kya
Dil deewana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Dil deewana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Shahar mein galiyon galiyon jiska charcha hai... (2)
Woh afsaana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Maikhane ki baat na kar waiz mujhse... (2)
Aana jaana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Yeh nazarana tera bhi hai mera bhi
Gham ka khazana tera bhi hai mera bhi...

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dVW7Pb3NnLc&gl=IN&hl=en&client=mv-google



Update kya hain pata nahi... Par Ghazal hain achi... *Whats app wala Kiss*πŸ˜†

Edited by Mithalee02 - 9 years ago
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