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aazeen from ur answers to the reviews the further story seems really interesting
Originally posted by: Tasha1994
aazeen from ur answers to the reviews the further story seems really interesting
to kya hone wala hai mithalee diOriginally posted by: Mithalee02
Hehehe... I know aage kya hone wala hain 😛 Mujhe ssab pata hota hain...Aazeen ka sab kuch pata hota hain mujhe 😛😉😛
Originally posted by: Swatishubh
What i loved about this story Aazu, is your handling the main leads never arguing over the break up or even to the decisions one had to make!!! This is where i can see Ashu and Nidhi understanding each other so well. Very nice beginning of the change in their lives after 15 yrs. 👏--Hello Bhabhi...🤗Why they are not arguing is because, the split of ways was somewhat mutual...He did not want to elope her breaking her family's heart, and she because had no other choice...Both were right in their own parts...I am glad you liked that...😃Nidhi is back to her roots, yet she is not happy with the time lost in her life. She is occupied with work and have devoted herself totally. Her distressed mood not letting her opening her bags even removing the covers from furniture.-- She's not unhappy with the time lost, but for the one person that she lost...She doesn't even know if he'd meet her anytime in their lives...She is living her life, but it misses him... The words of the song aptly fitting here- "Tere bina zindagi se shikwa toh nahi... Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi toh nahi..."😊Blue color! The color that defines their lovely bond! The color that reminds them of each other. Beautifully attired but not happy cos her Ashu is not there to look at. No this is not a coincidence, but the love that they still hold and living with it to keep on moving. It IS the talks of their hearts ❤️-- Each and everything associated with Ashutosh is in every being of Nidhi... With everything she does, she remembers him... Not to be saying in an exaggerated form- but they are soulmates...😃Wud have loved if Ashu have saved the going to be a fallen Nidhi, but her strange life has taught her how to stand at once when needed. Yes her love has achieved everything in his life, but is this what a life called? " Umr lag gayi keemat chukane mein "-- Zindagi tera bhi shukriya...Thokar dekar bhale hi zindagi na di,Par girke sambhalne ka hunar sikha diya...I don't think it would have looked appropriate at the seriousness of the situation with Ashu catching a falling Nidhi... As you've rightly said, it has taught her to stand and walk again after everytime she stumbles... The time she has spent taking care of herself when no one was there to hold her; it will take time for her to learn the art of stumbling carefree resting assured that there is her man to hold her just in time...😃Feeling for both loads! yes she never wanted to reach his heights, but she wanted to walk with him in all their odds and love. Loved to see them enjoying their company together, but got sad to know what they got from their sacrifice! Nidhi's family in the end, had no heart for her wishes and desires. The selfish they were, have send her again to the place she always want to. But is the life same?-- Mujhe shikwa hai tujhse ae zindagi,Main waisa na tha uske aane se pehle,Main na waisa raha uske jaane ke baad...Par zindagi ne badi khoobsurti se jawaab diya-Shikwa na kar, gila chodh de,Zindagi aksar badal jaati hai Maut aane ke baad...Life indeed is not the same... But what is life? The spent years? Or the person with whom you'd spend the rest of your years?😉Aur rahi baat family ki... Kuch hum viraasat mein paate hain, aur kuch hum kamaate hain... Jo viraasat mein se chhin gaya, usko kamaane ki taaqat hum mein humesha rehti hai...Family jisne saath chodh diya toh kya! Hum phir se nayi family bana lenge...😃Don't like what life gave them, but loved the smiles that they have always shared are still with them.Aazu, this is an emotional experience of how things are so very hard for some. Loved it from the bottom of my heart how you have originate the cult. 👏-- Aksar dil khol ke rone ke baad, muskuraane ke alaawa koi chaara humare paas hota nahi hai...The worst has happened... Now all that shall happen would be good only!😃Wud like to know how Ashu has drafted his years with success finally reaching him.-- Will see his part of story too in the next part...😃Luv ya ❤️🤗-- Love you too Bhabhi... ❤️ 🤗
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Did you call me in the afternoon?Originally posted by: Mithalee02
Hehehe... I know aage kya hone wala hain 😛 Mujhe ssab pata hota hain...Aazeen ka sab kuch pata hota hain mujhe 😛😉😛
Oh come on Tasha...Originally posted by: Tasha1994
to kya hone wala hai mithalee di
Originally posted by: bawaswift
Mujhe kismat se shikwa nahi magar Ae Khuda...
Wo zindagi mein hi kyun aaye jo kismant mein nahi the..Iss kadar akele ho gaye hain aajkal..koi satata bhi nahi aur koi manata bhi nahi..-- Beautiful lines Veerji!👏What Nidhi has lost in her life,,, a family for whose sake she left her love alone..What Ashu was expecting in his life,,, he got all but all alone..Both of them are doing well in their professions... but solitary moving on in life..-- "Sab kuch hai darmiyaan, bas tumhari hi kami hai..." I guess that shall be the gist of that... But dont worry... Sab theek ho jaayega...😃Got to know Nidhi's feelings in this chapter.. where she recalls Ashu n the time they spent with each other.. In her attires, in her wardrobe,, in her approach she always remember Ashu..-- "Tera zikr mere har nafz mein hai... Ab toh lahuu bhi tumhare naam se behta hai.."^^ Did I go overdramatic???😆😆 This fiction has brought the shayaraa in me live... Ab toh aisa lagta hai, bas ek ke baad ek instant shayari likh sakti hoon...😆Meeting unexpectedly at the felicitation ceremony.. the critic and the writer acted as if nothing was there ,,, ! The couplet she read made her realised how Ashu has penned down their own story there.. ! The instinctive move by which Ashu wanted to balance her showed the pumping of the hearts melting for each other n wanted to be away from the world.. !-- They were existing in the real world, yet their minds were in their own little world...All the above points are just telling they want to escape the fake pompous world and go and sit beside each other in their own cosy world...😃kad lamba hone se insaan bada nahi hota.. How right.. ! Ashu had no money with him ,, but his knowledge n mind has given him today the respect n wealth.. ! No matter how but he has proved that he is worth the love.. He Was worth her love !!!!-- Hahahaha... Ye kad lamba hone wala dialogue is just mine...😆I was constantly told by my cousins and all that I am a dwarf among the 6 feet tall brothers...And I used to shut them up stating the same line...😉😆Coming to Ashu, yes, though he needn't, yet he proved himself worthy of her...😃Baby sitter ka kaam khatam n she is free to go the place she always wanted to.. ! She wanted this place even 15 years back.. toh.. ??-- Toh? Aana toh wahin hai jahan dastoor ne jagah banaayi thi... Toh kya hua agar wahan pohochte-pohochte 15 saal lag gaye...😊She has given her good youth times to her family leaving her happiness aside.. but the family chose their own joys over her persona.,,, ! She is hurt.. she was always hurt ...Her smiles have many a queries to the life.. but she wont say anything or even utter much.. cos she is back where her love resides..-- Hmmm... hurt toh she is... shayad humesha rahegi... But if not easing that hurt, their love can atleast soothe something in them...😃What next.. ??/ Ashu's life so far.. wud like to know that as well.. !Nice n a soul stirring progress.. want them again together.. but this time no family or any issues maangta..-- Ashu's life so far, as well their story moving forward some bits... Family toh aayegi... Par kaunsi woh dekhne wali baat hai...😉😃Thanks Aazu... loving the story..⭐️👏-- It is my pleasure veerji... I am glad you are loving it...😃
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Thank you very much!😃Originally posted by: Sonu12345
Lovely update aazeen di really liked it a lot
So Ashni met after 15 years that's a really long time. Both their life's have changed soo much Ashutosh became a successful writer from a struggle that's nice .Really liked the cute little romantic movements you showed .thanks a lot this story
Awww!!! Shooo shweet!😃🤗Originally posted by: bawaswift
Plzz do take your time dear... 😃Kis baat ki jaldi hai... ??/ 😃Ok... bearing.. Ye bear chalega... 😛
Hi Ruchi Di...Originally posted by: ruchshah
I like this story...just as I have appreciated your previous works!Do u have a PM list, then please add me too...would love to see how this one unfolds
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