SS:TUJHSE NARAAZ NAHI ZINDAGI CHAPTER:6 Last part UPDTD PG:67 22/09/16

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SS: TUJHSE NARAAZ NAHI ZINDAGI

PROLOGUE:


Do Pal Ruka Khwabon Ka Karvan
Aur Phir Chal Diye Tum Kahan Hum Kahaan
Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan
Aur Phir Chal Diye Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan ...

Nidhi held the umbrella tightly over her head amidst the heavy downpour... Today the clouds have decided to cry with the moaning in love couple... Nidhi with a very heavy heart had walked down the auto that lead her to the tin shed tea stall where her love, Ashutosh had come up on her request on call...

The harsh winds along the rain wetted the lavender salwar Nidhi wore... But today, not only were the clothes being wet in-spite the shed of the umbrella, but her heart too was drowning having the loving shed of her family...

She walked up to him... Her eyes swollen, lips plump with biting them hard to control her ever so continuing sobs, her face all wet with tears, never drying up... Ashutosh stood up from the bench... Though his condition wasn't any better than her, but he held on to the thread of hope... Hope of Nidhi... But from the face of it, he knew, the last twig of his hope is blown away... There isn't much left...

"Ashutosh! They didn't agree... They simply are not ready to marry me off to a struggling writer... They just haven't agreed... And here, you don't agree to elope me with you..., she wiped hard her tear stricken face talking about the grief her family has given and then determined said- "It's time to part ways Ashutosh... I do understand your morals against eloping and making a home without blessings... But my family simply doesn't approve of you... I'm sorry!"

A 24 year old Nidhi, a Literature Honours Student, fell in for an aspiring writer of the country... He had a long way to go, but would succeed eventually... But the society of regression cannot look beyond Doctors, Engineers, Chartered Accountants and Government Officials... A boy in his late 20's if is striving to publish his books, seems to be penniless for being a perspective groom, but how does that proves his worth? How can he be judged for his bright future with the doom of the day? The world did not understand love... Except the lovers...!

And here, two disheartened souls walk in two different directions... With two different burning aims for life... With a motive so strong to prove their worth for each other... Be each other's even when they cannot... Ashutosh's aim to become big one day for Nidhi, and Nidhi... Well Nidhi, to not become anybody's ever again... She decided to be only Ashutosh's, what if they cannot tie themselves in the wed-lock... She wouldn't do that with anybody either... She shall remain single for her entire life... Either him or nobody... And for Ashutosh, nobody but for Nidhi...

And here's the saga of the two broken hearts, separated by the cruelty of family... How the fate brings them together finally at the end...

~~THANKS FOR THE READ~~

PS: Guys, I need some suggestions for the title of this SS... I am unable to guess one... Kindly help me with the same...

Edited by Aazeen02 - 9 years ago
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Hey Aazu... loved the starting of the new story.. sad ,, gloomy ,, but they being single is much liked.. ! Waiting for the fate to make them one together again... waiting for the chances life wud give them.. !

Tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi...

How abt this title... 😳
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hey Aazu... loved the starting of the new story.. sad ,, gloomy ,, but they being single is much liked.. ! Waiting for the fate to make them one together again... waiting for the chances life wud give them.. !


Tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi...

How abt this title... 😳

Hello Veerji...
Yeah! This story is pretty much a sad, gloomy version...
Talks about a couple met decades after their separation...
The story will deffo move around 2 decades further in the next update...
Hmmm... Tujhse Naraz Nahi Zindagi seems appealing...
If something better doesn't pops up, will 100% go with this title...
Thanks for both the helps...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi. Aaz,
Thanks for the pm

Wow a new story!! From one of best writers !!😃

Really looking forward to it.

Loved the concept... Esp the profession u have chosen for Ashu.. So true.. No one will get their daughter mrd to a writer, much less a budding one... U know there is a sentence I often hear - writers bhookhe marte hain

I do have a title for the concept as far as I have understood it - Bin phere hum tere
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for this new story aazeen. of to read it a get back with a review
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wonderful update aazeen. liked it a lot .a very wonderful concept. ashutosh is a struggling writer and nidhis family is not ready to get them married because of that .really such a wonderful concept really liked the idea of ashu being a writer .thanks a lot for a new story. really liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aazuu do u want me to send aarti ji's ff to u
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How about this amreen tere bina kya jina
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Azeen. Thanks for the Pm.
Wonderful to read an SS on AshNi.

Beautiful start. A Touching story right from the beginning.

Loved the way you have given the characters a different profession. And also deviated from the age-gap which was the basic idea of the show.

Please continue soon.

Love reading your stories. You are an amazing writer.
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