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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Very nice continuation Indu di 👏👏
I liked Ashu's care for Nidhi and asking in his hold to be at home as she is still very weak. I just loved Ashu talking to Nidhi and come with her ideas and desires and his fears. Nidhi supporitng him, clearly understands his fears and inhibitions. Her lines would have glowed him inside. shayad aapke zakhm mere pyar se bhar jaye ⭐️⭐️
Col. Bua, coming to meet them, this scene is very emotional. Bua said what she wanted and sensed Nidhi's desires, and very understanding Ashu replied in a polite manner. Every one is talking of it -- be it Ashu, bua, Nidhi's tears and Baba noticing it. Very well narrated scene !!!
Coming to know of Anji Ranga, are not they confusing much with their life ?? Anji will understand much more than Ranga i guess.
Mallika is offered kind of a bribe time to time. Good that she returned it.
I loved Ashu's dreams of seeing Nidhi as the head of the paediatric unit. He longs for this but also fears her own desires and it's fulfillment. Things are such -- They both want each other to accomplish their dreams and future at the same time, which seems so tough !
I liked DR. Bhagat and Nidhi convo ! She cleared her mind to him and he is like laughing but could not deny the fact that Ashu is blessed to have her. But isn't that she is also much blessed to have him in her life ?? Yes she is 😊
Now Nidhi will be surprised by the visit to mussoorie ! This is a wow 🤗
I loved the last scene, where Ashu says that the time will tell all the answers and Nidhi prays of his dreams comprising of a cute little cuddly pink girl calling him papppa !
Immensely in love with this story and looking forward to what might happen in mussoorie. The visit is like a gift but i feel something is there related to this visit.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Perfect pics Florida 👏👏
The pink baby is so cute
babita.. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Indu di,
Bawa bro and Swati bhabhi are out of town. They might come here late or by tomorrow. i have just got this message.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Very well written update Induji...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Induji, how is your health now???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Lovely chapter and i loved the title - Waqt! 👏
Ashu is concenred of Nidhi's desires and fully supports her decision but the time is all that he needs. His fears are known to him, and his childhood that has seen worst of days. He is not sure of what he can give to his own child. But he definitely wants Nidhi to enjoy her days and not to " main tumhe waqt se pehle bada hote hue nahi dekhna chahta..i dont want ur shoulders to weigh with responsibility "
I loved this part of the chapter, He do wants her desires to get a name, but his plans are totally made for her. His dreams of seeing a Nidhi as the head of Paediatric unit. And not able to claim his desire cos he is unsure whether she will share his dreams. Very emotional. He is fighting within and not able to tell much to Nidhi, who is all in the dreams of let him having a dream of a baby cuddly girl calling him papppa. She really needs to see him as a father. Both are going through a hard time, yet their love is the one that makes them devoted. Both are not able to speak up much and Nidhi is yet to tell him about her version during the conversation.
Ashu has told Bua that every wish is fullfilled in a span of time and this wish will also see the sunshine, yet Nidhi's tears have also made baba to realize her eagerness for a baby.
Very indistinct of their hidden desires, Nidhi is approved to the MD, but her heart is not. She is a brilliant student, yet her perception is totally different. Ashu well knows of the fact what she desires, yet he needs time and want her to study so that can hold a unit at KGH.

Mallika is offered a bribe, a sign of bad elements in the KGH. Hope nothing worst happens to her and resulting in unfavorable situation for Ashu.
Anji and Ranga living at Solankis. They can if they wish. But the right place for both of them is Ranga's home. I wish Anji learns this and start looking at Ranga's good qualities once again.
Mussoorie is on the chart, and i want them both visit there with an ability to find out the solution of the desires they both possess.
Thanks Indu di, luv ya for this brilliant approach of life in front of us. ❤️ 🤗
So sorry for being late.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
What a fabulous write Indu di,,, ⭐️👏 Aap chha gaye.. !
Here are some quotes n my lines over them...

she s worse than MD!!

This is what makes Ashu realizing how she is coping up with the life these days..


muflisi..garibi..bhookh me chod diya mujhe akele...that insecurity has always lived in me..maine dekha hai..bachchon ko marte hue...sach kahoon..ek to tumhari kum umr..aur meri insecurities...mere man ke dabe hue andhere...darta hoon ..ki pata nahi apne bachche ..ke saath poora insaaf kar paaonga bhi ya nahi...will i make a good father??

The fears Ashu has revealed for the first time... they are the real feelings he has loved all his life.. Hie fears are much understood by Nidhi... My heart felt for him too... he is so scared of a life he has lived n cant share it with anyone.. n when he himself has not seen a good childhood how can he be able to give a loving life to his kids..


and secondly..i sincerely feel..mujhse shaadi karke tumne apni umr ke doston ko khoya hai..main tumhe waqt se pehle bada hote hue nahi dekhna chahta..i dont want ur shoulders to weigh with responsibility. .aur nidhi..kya hum..hum tum kaafi nahi hain...atleast for a few years more..."??
Loved Ashu's sincerity over his reasons.. ! He is polite ,, yet he is genuinely correct.. !
"waqt aur pyaar sab zakhm bhar dete hain...shaayad aapke zakhm bhi mere pyaar se bhar jaayein...
Nidhi is so despaired to have a baby,, but not at the cost of her Ashu's fears..


dadi bua..yaad rahe aap apni poti ko tulsi pila sakti thi..per meri biwi ko nahi..."
Laughable.. ! Ashu knows how Nidhi must be missing them.. n he invited them.. right ??/

dadi bua..hur chahat ka ek waqt hota hai..jab iska waqt aayega to yeh bhi poori ho jaayegi..."and nidhi sitting a lil far ...tried to hold back her tears...as her eyes met baba's ...n she could feel him understand the conflict of their dreams desires n fears...
Perfect ... he is determined now.. he is polite but firm to give time to her desires..

baba smiled n said"pata nahi colonel...per mujhe nahi lagta yeh theek hua..hur rishte ki ek seema hoti hai..ek daayra hota hai...aur jab daayre toote hain to rishte ulajhte hain...sulajhte nahi...and ashutosh seemed to agree.
Yeah... Anji has invite disgrace to her relationship in marriage.. Hope she will realise the reality in time.. ! I dont think Ranga will stay there for long...

.there was a dream in his eyes...a dream of seeing dr nidhi head this paediatric unit...but did nidhi share his dream...???ashutosh sighed...
So sweet of Ashu.. ! His dreams consists of Nidhi's career n what a gift he has for her in his dreams.. Lovely.. ! But his fears even increase here..

dr Bhagat laughed at her honesty"dr nidhi..its like saying..u love the softy but you hate the cone"!
Nidhi is genuine even to her Teacher... But her academics need much attention.. whether she likes or not...
Bhagat is right..Ashu is lucky.. but i feel Ashni are lucky to have each other..

kuch sawaalon ke jawaab sirf waqt de paata hai..to abhi ke liye tumhara sawaal waqt pe chod dein...bolo to"??
Ashu can not go away from the fact... but can only ask for the time... Hope things just change once they arrive in mussoorie..


quite sure that one day her love will make the sun shine n all darkness will clear away...n then even in dr ashutosh's dreams ..there will arise n appear that cute lil baby in pink frock...with curly hair...cuddling up to him n crooning "papppa..."!!
Pure n pious dreams... Her desires are more for Ashu... For her his whole life has seen darkness... n this way she can give him the gift of life..
Hope the sun of love shines more brighter in the coming days...!
State of incertitude is there... but still they both understand each other n their desires so well...
Wud like to hear Nidhi telling her version...

Thanks Indu di... sorry for being late...aapke shubh ke liye hi laga hua hoon...😛
And many thanks again for the dedication,., 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry Indu Ji , starting with the university I am already under so much pressure as my mother was pretty sick getting IV injections daily and then Eid coming up. Hope all is well with you and your health . It was a beautiful update Ashutosh still wanting Niddhi to be alright and then vacation.
Would both of them understand each others feelings towards their dream / future.
Niddhi being very honest with Dr Bhagat how she thinks.
Ashutosh planning a surprise vacation along with Baba was very sweet.
What is with this pharma guy?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Baba is supporting Ashutosh on his dream, what about his support for Nidhi???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Induji, what about Nidhi and class mates meeting where they question about Ashu and their marriage, need not be negative but general enquiry...

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