OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41 - Page 3

A wonderful story Shirley ji .loved it a lot .

Lovely update Shirley .

Wow! Mind blowing story Shirley... Even you write so well... Stopped the story at such a cliffhanger OMG... can't wait to read the next update... Your AshNi are so sweet and understanding... Mallika is such a changed personality... unbelievable... She is so supportive and loving towards Nidhi... I like this new Mallika very much. The theme u chose is so different and good. Using Aruna shaunbag's case as an example was a great point... Nidhi is ready to start a family... can imagine Ashutosh's expressions at that revelation and his enthusiasm to become a dad as well as Nidhi's anticipation to experience motherhood. She will be an excellent mom. In all this was an amazing story with a superb theme... looking forward to read more... continue soon...
Love
Amreen

Shirley its just amazing.. loved reading mallika being that positive here.
Loved the conversation about euthanasia..
all their views are right in their own way.
Its was an icing on the cake after Nidhi had joined them.. and the khadoos n the later dialogs were just so perfect. That's the way these two are chalk n cheese but at the end they are one.
Waiting for the next one.
So the lone tear that had escaped from mallika's eye proves that Nidhi is pregnant... So waiting to see Ashutosh's reaction n.
nidhi's too


And please continue sooonnn...

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Shirls 🤗

Read the magnificent start to the OS 👏 New idea commenced with much to debate and more to elaborate! Liked the idea of implementing a law that can create controversies.

Will give my review tomorrow. 😳

Originally posted by: Ashni1234

A wonderful story Shirley ji .loved it a lot .

Loved Ashni's relationship in your os

love mallika in your os. Wish she was the same In the show

a lovely os

waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Lovely update Shirley .

Thank u Tasha.

Liked the story a lot . thanks for posting this story

I m glad.. u r welcome.

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Loved mallika and Nidhi's relationship in this os.

hmm.. its a different thing I m ttrying here.. but is it easy for anyone to change?

hope it was the same in the show.

hmmm..

Liked the concept of the story a lot

I m really happy u liked the concept.. did u understand whats the concept from the first part itself..?😛

Waiting for the next update. Waiting to see what is there in the reports

will try asap

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Read it.. in a bit of hurry isliye review and discussions bad mein doongi.

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni

Wow! Mind blowing story Shirley... Even you write so well... Stopped the story at such a cliffhanger OMG... can't wait to read the next update... Your AshNi are so sweet and understanding... Mallika is such a changed personality... unbelievable... She is so supportive and loving towards Nidhi... I like this new Mallika very much. The theme u chose is so different and good. Using Aruna shaunbag's case as an example was a great point... Nidhi is ready to start a family... can imagine Ashutosh's expressions at that revelation and his enthusiasm to become a dad as well as Nidhi's anticipation to experience motherhood. She will be an excellent mom. In all this was an amazing story with a superb theme... looking forward to read more... continue soon...
Love
Amreen

Originally posted by: sss97

Shirley its just amazing.. loved reading mallika being that positive here.

Thank u Swathi.. I m glad u liked Mallika

Loved the conversation about euthanasia..

Thanks

all their views are right in their own way.

what do u think abt it?

Its was an icing on the cake after Nidhi had joined them.. and the khadoos n the later dialogs were just so perfect. That's the way these two are chalk n cheese but at the end they are one.
Waiting for the next one.

hmn.. I was just trying to show how Ashu n nidhi have same views but express differently.. moreover its easy to be positive n preach to others na?

So the lone tear that had escaped from mallika's eye proves that Nidhi is pregnant... So waiting to see Ashutosh's reaction n.
nidhi's too

hmm wait n watch.. also pl. tk part in discussions
And please continue sooonnn...