OS: On the Cusp of Paradise..Ch. 3 on P-28.please see p-41 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Ashni1234

Wonderful update Shirley di

Originally posted by: sss97

Shirley seriously???? I mean i thought she was pregnant in the previous update and now brain tumor..

Waise thanks for no cliffhanger this time. Please update the next chapter soon. The story is going great. LOved it

Originally posted by: babita..

Oh, so it's the dreadful disease that's making Nidhi collapsing. Hard to accept, but it is True.

Hi babita.. sorry for the delay.. Yes its SGCA.. I knew this concept will be hard to accept..thats exactly what I warned u all earlier about..

Nice way of description Shirley and loved Nidhi's caring love for kids coming through the toys. The doubts of Ashu were obvious but it all resulted in the disease and not her pregnancy.

Glad u liked the description n u liked how I showed Ni's looking fwd to her kid.. Yup its not pregnancy..

Mallika's pains are such that she even can't blame anyone except her past deeds. Felt bad for her and for a minute thought how Ashu would have come to the point of raising a finger towards her.

So much loved Mallika's care and love for Nidhi and she did not think of what Ashu blamed her of, and continuing standing with her.

True.. I am trying to experiment with Mal's character here.. I often wonder... don't bad experiences of life change ppl n mk them realize what they were doing? I think sometimes.. ppl understand the importance of right n wrong after bad exp..

Now is the tine how Ashu's sudden pains will come out and how he will react.

hmmm...

Overall a progress in the story with sadness every where except Nidhi's becos she is still living in a dream world of her own where she is playing with her kid, and the toys all that are helping her.

will wait for the next. Thanks Shirley for the update !!!

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni

What a lovely chapter Shirley... Loved every bit of it... Poor Nidhi... shez suffering from such a miserable disease... feel sorry for her... Ashu 8 so sweet and caring. I just love him and his care for his dearest Nidhi... I am having a gut feeling that Mallika is not at fault here... but I guess the vulnerable hubby took over on the sensible doc cum friend...

Thank u Amreen.. I m glad u liked it...

Hmm.. true she has BT but its a low-grade tumor..

R u also an AD Amreen?

Yes Mallika is innocent here...wasn't that clear?

Ashu was shocked n couldn't accept... given Mal's past deeds.. its natural he will blame her becoz he doesn't wanna accept that Nidhi can have a prob like that......

I don't know why but I was having a strong feeling that the theme of the story as well as Nidhi's reports have some connection. And my presumption became true... Plz don't let my Nidhi suffer too much and put Ashu in a devastated state... Bring the world's best couple out of their misery as soon as possible. Plz post next chapter pretty soon... can't wait to read it.

true.. there has to be a connection na? otherwise the story doesn't mk sense..

I can understand ur sentiments.. but I cant change my story..as it is, its a difficult n challenging topic to deal with..

P.S. : Sorry that I couldn't actively participate in the discussion on euthanasia... I really wanted to but just couldn't make up for it... sorry again and will try to do from now on...
Loads of love
Amreen

Originally posted by: Anjani9

MY GOD!!!! You have attempted this story where Nidhi has brain issue??? 😲

yup.. I m experimenting with a new concept..

I thought she has some problem and cannot become Mother...😕

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I have not participated in euthanasia discussion but I feel

If a person is not in senses and chances of recovery bleak...she should be given chance to die If there is no one to take care of a person and she or he is not required by anyone, is it not more respectable to die rather than living being cursed by all?
• What is achieved in the case discussed? She lived for 40 years without any use to anyone including her?

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nidhi in this condition.. ??/

Cud not welcome this idea.. cant believe what i read..

Yep...

I can totally understand Bhavit.. no one on this forum can welcome this idea, including me... but this is a new concept I wanted to experiment with..

Ashu's pains are gonna increase.. with Nidhi planning for a family ,, whereas she is suffering with..

Yes.. that's y its titled "on the cusp (verge/edge) of paradise.. would ashni be able to enter their paradise.. or would it be lost?

Mallika is a changed person here.. Good to see her so caring n tender at heart or else Ashu's remarks wud have stop her coming closer to Nidhi..

Yes.. I believe ppl do change, don't u think so?

Good narration,. but me sad...

thanks.. I totally understand..

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Nidhi's reports and the discussion seems going parallel from now. How i wished her being learning the experience of motherhood and Ashu's wish of a complete family becoming reality. But the reality bites when the dreams are shattered and the senses stop working.

Ashni's miserable days. Mallika's concern so doting. Ashu is attentive and not able to express much. Nidhi all lost in her own dreamland.

hi swati, m sorry for the delay in responding..

true.. its not always that life gives u what u want.. sometimes pleasant surprises n sometimes rude shocks are a part n parcel of life..

yes this story is no fairy tale.. take that for sure..

yes.. I m glad everyone likes mallika here..

true..Nidz is in her dreamland..

Just a question -- Shirls, are you going to show the theme of the OS from Nidhi's point of view? She was the one who seemed so pessimistic in her approach towards patient's care and had always been against the implementation of the law. Will she change her mind over her own health condition? Or is it another part of telling the world that the docs can do miracles and the people shud have faith in them?

hmm.. wait n watch..

its like its easy to say something about others, but diff when it comes to us, right?

Heavy heart, but looking forward for a hope, hope from the best Neuro besides her.

can understand what u feel

best neuro may be a weak hubby right now, cant he?