Originally posted by: Swatishubh
Diya, this chapter really made me feel very fresh, thanks sweetieβ€οΈπ€
When Ashu was moving with Mallika for the concert, i was thinking of the dinner party only. But when he finally visit there, i felt relaxingπ³Nicely woven the plot. Now this will be very interesting to see how Ashu wud feel for Nidhi when he will drop her home after spending a good one hour with her.πMallika tried hard, but destiny had other plans and she had to go for the conference. Hope she will come to know how her plans got shelved and Ashu is realizing his real feelings for her.π³Loved it!
Good progress Diya... βοΈπ
Originally posted by: bawaswift
Good progress Diya...βοΈπ
Nice to see Ashu going for the dinner,,, He wanted to as he has said.. But i wud only thank Mallika's conference that made Ashu going there ..ππ³What makes me feel good is to how Nidhi talked to him.. the simple authoritative tone,. any one can be lost in her ways of punishment that she gave him...πThanks for this chapter dear..πtake care.. !
Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Wonderful update diya loved it a lot pls update the next update soon
Hi all...
Thanks for reading the last updt... herez latest one...
CHAPTER 06
In car... On the way to Nidhi's house
"Dinner kaisa laga aapko" She asked.
"Good " He said.
Suddenly rain started heavy thunder and strong shower and Ashu was drive due to heavy rain and looked Nidhi.
"Hume thodi dere rukhna chahiye ... tha ki yeh baarish khatham hojaye" he said.
"Aur agar nahi rukha toh?" She asked
"Agar raath bar aise barasthe rahenge toh yeh jaise tu ne aaj subhah kaha tha yeh raath meri sabse khoobsurath raath ban jayegi" He said which made her to have an eletricfing effect through out her body.
"Mera bhi Dr.Ashuthosh"Nidhi also agreed to his statement which he gave passionate look.
She got out of the car.
"Nidhi baarish mein bheegna ka shock hain kya?" He asked.
"Aap bhi chaliye" she said closing the door
"No way..."He completely denied he invitation.
Then she came and open his door and force him to come out.
As the drops of rain touched and the wetness spread throughout his body he felt as if he was in heaven. He spread his hands out. I felt the bliss of rain. Nidhi watching how Ashu was enjoying the rain. He came to Nidhi and stood behind lifted up her arms and spread in air.
"Iss pal ko mehsoos karo Nidhi" He wispered in her ears.
She started dancing in air. He stood watching. She unknowingly spread her wet hair on his face. Suddenly he held her hand pulled her towards him. She kept beholding him with surprise.
He touched her cheek softly and said
" Yeh kaise jaazbath hain joh sirf maujoogi mein mujhe mehsoos ho rahi hain... Yeh kya joh mujhe ehsaas dilatha ki hum dono ke beech mein ithne faasle hain phir bhi hum ithne kareeb hain... "
She gave gulp and said "Aap hi bathayiye Dr.Ashuthosh" her words gave him a blow he left his holding and taken a step back. The heavy showering of the rain stopped.
"Chaliye hume dere ho rahi" He said.
"Par..." She was get the answer he got in to the car. She has nothing so she also got in. Ashu sped the car.
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They reached Nidhi's home. She got down. As soon as to started to tell Bid him , he drove away.
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Ashu got into home. Arman was waiting him in couch.
"How was your concert?"Arman asked.
Ashu came sit next to him.
"Yaar aaj jo hua voh nahi hona chahiye tha"Ashu felt upset.
"Par hua kya hain meri jaan?" Arman insisted the explanation.
Ashu explained Mallika's confrence cancelled the concert then attending dinner Nidhi and his indirect confession infront of Nidhi.
"Toh iss anhoni kya hain? Log isse pyaar kehthe hain puthru" Arman words gave him a shock.
"What???" He jumped up from the couch.
"Don't be so surprised"Arman said.
"Just stop your non sense Arman" Ashu said and went to his room
"Yaar ... Arre suno na?"Arman explained and asked.
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At Nidhi's room...
Nidhi prayed to Bajrangbali
"Aap jaanethe mereliye kya sahi hain toh joh ehsaas Dr.Ashuthosh ke dil mein usse maintain karke rakhna. Please voh apna feeling confess karein"
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Ashu looking at the moon through his window. He started to collect all the moment he sped with Nidhi.
"Yeh mujhse kya hogaya." He said in frustration
Precap:
Ashu unable to hide his feelings for Nidhi.
Originally posted by: babita..
Mesmerizing update Diyaππ
The rain scene gives the same feeling of Ashu and Nidhi getting wet in the rain after coming from Priyanka's marriageπ³Beautiful expressions that Ashu recollects from his past that he has spend with her. Liked to see him confessing but his confused mind that took him away from Nidhi again has to realise what the love he has for her. Loved this one, and in the realm of Ashniland !!!!!!πPrecap is much beautiful which shows Ashu not able to hide his feelings for Nidhi. Will wait for the next. Thanks a ton Diya for the fine progress in the storyπ€
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