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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Hi Diya❤️🤗

Thanks for the chapter dear! Liked it and enjoyed it👏
Nidhi wants her love back to her and what a way to make him coming out of the amnesia of a phase he has forgotten! With Nidhi around, he will surely fall in love with her all over again😉Just waiting for that to happen.
Mallika is talking of her dares but loved Nidhi's reply to her. Nidhi is more confidant that Ashu will come to the party. Hope to see that.
Mallika's challenge is brilliantly accepted. Nidhi has fine friends with her, Anji, Rohan and Armaan. All so helpful and support systems.👏 Looking forward to watch out where Ashu will spend his evening to make it more beautiful as Nidhi wanted😳❤️
Thanks dear, luv ya🤗



U r welcome dear... Yhh wnts get her lov bak.. . Keep readin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Sonu12345

Wonderful update diya


Thnx fr cmntin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Wonderful updates diya loved it a lot
Waiting for the next one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashni1234

Wonderful updates diya loved it a lot

Waiting for the next one


Thnx for comnting ... Will updt tody
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Hi all...

Herez the fresh and interesting chapter.Thanks to all reads in advance.

CHAPTER 05

Ashuthosh got ready to go for the concert with Mallika

"Ashu tu yeh teek nahi kar raha hain" Arman interpreted.
"Kya hua Arman?" Ashu asked.
"Nidhi ?" Arman indicated about the dinner with Nidhi
"Par Mallika ne usse samaja diya tha I'm not interested any parties" Ashu reminded Mallika word of denying the invite
"Aur tu joh ab ja rahe hain Is that what you like? I know tum yeh sirf Mallika ki khushi kliyee ja raha because she had taken care of you"Ashu bow his head as a sigh tueness in Arman words.

"Chalein Ashuthosh ?" Mallike came from outside wearing a beautiful silk sari.

"Haan... I'll drive " Ashu said went along with Mallika.

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On the way to concert...

Ashu was in a delimma on seeing the message.

"Yeh concert kab tak khatam hoga Mallika?" Ashu asked.

"Kyun Ashuthosh kahin jana hain kya ?" Mallika asked with a little fear inside.

"Nahin... Bas aise poocha" Ashu said with little. Smile on his face.
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Anjie ,Rohan and Nidhi sitting around a table. They were waiting for Ashuthosh.

"Nidhi are you sure ki Dr.Ashuthosh ayengey?"Anjie asked
"Mein chahthi hoon ki voh ajaye"Nidhi said
"Lekin Nidhi ji its already 8" Rohan said looking into the watch
"Toh aaplog shuru karo na"Nidhi taking the menu card and looking for cuisines.

RING RING... Mallka mobile.

"Hello... Kya ... Par ab kaise?"Mallika said arogantly and hung the phone.

"Kya hua Mallika .Kisne phone kiya?"Ashu asked in embarrasement.

"Hospital se phone tha. Muhje Delhi Sanjeevani Hospital mein confrence attend karna hain.Abhi isi waqt jana hoga" Mallika said in a upset tone
"So why are you upset?"Ashu Surprisingly asked.
"Ashuthosh aaj shyaam tumhare saath bithana chathi thi"Mallika desperately said.

"Arre toh hum kabhi bhi spend kar sakthe hain . Ab tumhara confrence zaroor hain.Mein tumhe chod detha ghar chod detha hoon aur tum airport Adithya saath ke javogey na"Mallika noded to Ashu's words.
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Ashu drops Mallika at home.

"Bye"Ashu
"Bye"Said Mallika.

Ashu took his phone and looked at the time its 20:45.He sped his car.

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"Nidhi hume chalna chahiye. I dont think he'll come"Anjie as soon as she finished her. Anji's words brought tear in Nidhi's eyes but let didn't let the tears fall.

"Aap kuch kha lijiye Nidhiji" Rohan said
"Ek kaam karo tumlog javo mein intzaar karoongi" Nidhi conformed.
"Nahi hume koi jaldi nahi hain"Rohan said.
"No both of go" Nidhi insisted.
"Acha ... ek kaam karthe hain agar Dr.Ashuthosh ek ghande mein nahi aye aap mujhe phone mein aapko lene aajavoonga" Rohan said in support of her. Anjie looked at Rohan he gave a sigh.

"Hmm"Nidhi agreed and they left.
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After a while... Nidhi sat resting her chin on her palms and frequently looking the doorways

"Nidhi..."called by Dr.Ashuthosh which gave Nidhi feeling of getting life back . Her eyes filled with tears. She stood up as soon as she saw him and was spellbound.

Ashu came and sat opposite to her.

"Aap kahan the? I was waiting for you for the last two hours."Nidhi asked angrly but in a childish tone.

"I'm sorry Nidhi voh Dr.Mallika ke saath concert pe jana tha aur achanak usse ek phone agaya and she went to Delhi for 2 days"Ashu explain.

"Agar aaj Dr.Mallika nahi gaye hothe toh kya aap nahi aathe?"She asked with a sad tone which made Ashu was quit for a while

"Mallika ke kehne ke bavjjod bhi aap mera intzaar kiya... kyun?" Ashu question made clear he would come overcoming any obstacle.

"Jaantha tha ki aap zaroor ayengey"Nidhi said in surety.

"Mein aana chahtha tha"His words made her world to standstill for a few moments and just beholding him.

After having the dinner they got out.

"Arre tumhare dosth aanewale the na ... Mein toh bhool hi gaya. Kahan hain voh log"Nidhi got irritated and gave a angry look.

"Ok ... Don't give that look Nidhi" He realised he was late and they both left.

"Tum kaise javogey?" Ashu asked
"Galathi aapni ki hain toh zaza toh aapko bhuktha hi hoga"Nidhi said.

"Ok ... Tell me what i should do" Ashu was ready to take the punishment.

"Ek gande aapko mujhe jelna hi hoga you've to drop me home"Nidhi told

"Yeh bhi koi zaza hain Nidhi? Ajavo" Ashu asked and she really loved his word and both got into the car.

Precap:

Ashu to realise his unknown feelings.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Me first 😊
Off to read !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Very cute chapter Diya 👏👏
Had Mallika did not have to go for the conference, Ashu would have never come to the dinner party, right ?? This question is going in my mind as well like Nidhi. 😳
Good to see him joining Nidhi, though the couple for whom the party was arranged, left. Loved to see them having dinner and then Nidhi asking for a favourable punishment for him. 😉 Beautifully taken by Ashu !
Nice progress in the story with Ashu not clear for his feelings yet. And as U have mentioned in the precap, will wait for the unknown feelings he will realise. Nice to see Anji and Rohan's support for her. Thanks dearie 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: babita..

Very cute chapter Diya👏👏

Had Mallika did not have to go for the conference, Ashu would have never come to the dinner party, right ?? This question is going in my mind as well like Nidhi.😳
Good to see him joining Nidhi, though the couple for whom the party was arranged, left. Loved to see them having dinner and then Nidhi asking for a favourable punishment for him.😉Beautifully taken by Ashu !
Nice progress in the story with Ashu not clear for his feelings yet. And as U have mentioned in the precap, will wait for the unknown feelings he will realise. Nice to see Anji and Rohan's support for her. Thanks dearie🤗




Thnx for comnting... Ashu wud've defintly gone though it was late... As he wished to join the dinner. Its clearly mentned in his word... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Very cute update diya ji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Diya, this chapter really made me feel very fresh, thanks sweetie ❤️ 🤗

When Ashu was moving with Mallika for the concert, i was thinking of the dinner party only. But when he finally visit there, i felt relaxing 😳 Nicely woven the plot. Now this will be very interesting to see how Ashu wud feel for Nidhi when he will drop her home after spending a good one hour with her. 😃
Mallika tried hard, but destiny had other plans and she had to go for the conference. Hope she will come to know how her plans got shelved and Ashu is realizing his real feelings for her.😳
Loved it!


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