AshNi FF- Ek Ajnabee Haseena Se... Chap 6 updated on page 33 - Page 13

Originally posted by: babita..

Amreen, I so loved the progress in the story👏👏Meticulous and scrupulous 👏👏

Ashu lied for his late classes and what a fine reason to it. I liked his analysis of Nidhi just joining and needed to have the impression right for her teachers. While he himself is late for the first time and can be excused without interrogations. His smiles can tell that yes his new friend is given priority.

There, Nidhi is all smiling on recalling his ways to express, and his likes of pizzas and other things. They both are friends, yet very different friendship unlike with others.

The time they want to spend at the terrace is awesome. They both are in wait to reach there, after completing their chores. And something inside them took them to the place where they hold each other's feelings so widely, openly. Deep inside these feelings touched me.😳

Loved Ashu taking out his guitar and talked to his Baba. Nidhi has changed his mind and have put a feeling that he will be only close to the memories of his baba more.

Lovely song that Ashu played and Nidhi hummed. Beautiful synchronisation. Her surprising him again and again is even surprising her.😉Loved the narration that U have displayed at the terrace. Ashu with Guitar amidst the garden look. He looks pure and magical today. Me in the auraHe is adorable and Nidhi exposed it. What a lovely scene with coffee mugs and lovely ambience.

Thanks Amreen, this was loving🤗

Will wait for the next, take your own time dearie❤️

Thanks a lot sweetheart... first of all a *lots of hugs* and *kisses * for you for your lovely reviews. Yes Ashu is concerned towards his new friend. He values her friendship...Deep within even Ashu knows that baba will love it if he doesn't boycott himself from doing his favourite things but Nidhi was the one who unconsciously showed him the mirror and brought him out of his guilt a little bit... If not completely. I am sure you will love all further AshNi meetings in the story with unexpected surprises. Ashu always looks amazing to me while playing violin so he is adorable while playing guitar too. Thanks again for liking my way of narrating... am glad for it.


Aage ke terrace convo next chapter mein milega... Till then stay tuned and keep imagining their aage ki baatcheet...
How will Ashu react to Nidhi's sudden 'adorable' wala comment??? ANY GUESSES...

Will try to give next update ASAP...
Love and hugs
Amreen

A wonderful update amreen. Love it a lot

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

A wonderful update amreen. Love it a lot

like the way ashutosh and Nidhi's friendship is processing. Liked Ashni's terrace scene and the guitar one too.ashu is soo sweet he spoke lies for nidhi. So now have ashni started having feelings for each other.

Really love this story. You are a wonderful writer. Really love your stories

Thank you Tasha... Ashu lied for a friend at present... Feelings... yeah they are looking upto each other as good friend for now... any other feeling hasn't even crossed their minds. ...it will take time... it's own Sweet time... :) Thanks again

Hey Amreen... nice update.. ⭐️👏

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hey Amreen... nice update..⭐️👏

The frndship of Ashu n Nidhi is slowly moving towards a deep likeness n this will lead to .. we all know to what..😳

I loved Nidhi praying n Ashu looked at her all amused.. ! Very cute scene.. n the way both talks now .. its very new to both of them... n the way they both are remembering each other's likes n tastes.,. you have very well picturized it.. !

Ashu lied n i liked the reason he gave to himself.. Yeah his reason justifies his concern for thus new frnd.. but is it the only reason.. ??/ Well .. lemme not disclose my POV.. just wanna see what you will provide us with..😃

The eagerness to visit the terrace n recalling the last night at the terrace.. I feel that both of them are unknown of their feelings yet.. ! But things are getting proved now.. ! Ashu taking out guitar as Nidhi n Baba's views match.. ! Nidhi fully set to reach the terrace n before that she is hearing the tunes n the time she reached to him.. she was singing the song.. ! This is an amazing a scene where we can see the two very new friends are getting closer to each other n admiration is taking place of the bantering n surprises are mounting.. !

Beautiful scene at the terrace where Nidhi finds him adorable.. ! I do hope that he is gonna be feeling good inside.. ! Any one wud..😉

Liked the coffees at both hands.. ! Will wait for more.. cos learning of Ashni's views for each other gives a feeling that they both are becoming more than frnds now.. !

Thanks,, !

Thanks bawa... Thank you also for such a looong review... am very pleased... Nidhi with her childish antics can amuse anyone... They are slowly becoming comfortable with each other... Thanks to the terrace and coffee... Yes Ashu's act justifies his consern... by remembering Nidhi's words and then doing what he hadn't done even when so many people wanted him to do that us playing the guitar... I have tried to show the need of friends in his life who will show him right and wrong when he is confused and vulnerable... The story will slowly progress with their relationship becoming even more beautiful.
Love and hugs
Amreen

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very beautiful update Amreen👏

Right from the morning till evening, Ashu and Nidhi are in the awesome company of each other.Whether they are with each other in person or not, the very presence of each other's name makes them smiling and falling in a deep thoughts of their actions and banters.

Very sweet treat of their whole day spending in the Inst. and feeling a special bond in their new friendship.

Nidhi waiting for the cab, and Ashu firmly lied for his late classes. The new bond has given them a judgement to see the things as they come. I cherished the way they both have started changing to their tastes as according to other's.😉Few friends hold this bond.

The terrace epic scene is marvelously written.⭐️I loved the guitar playing such sweet melody and Nidhi out of her emotional flow, hummed the lyrics. Very lovely and continuous share of love that is going to take place. The solemn treatment of every scene is relishing! Well presenting the picturesque of the start of love and it's developing through a strong relation between the two.

Simply loved it and will wait for how Ashu will react to her sweet remarks calling him adorable.

Thank You Dear... they remember each other and their like... although involuntarily.
Was that a treat... well thank you if it was... so sweet of you.
Ashu's lying and the reason behind is what he told himself but we know why he has done that... :P
Yes the bond they share is out of this world... am happy that the terrace scenes are so loved by u all... I mean it.
Ab Nidhi ki weakness gaana hai aur Ashu bajaayega toh Nidhi toh gaayegi hi na...
Thank you once again
Hugs
Amreen

Originally posted by: amreen_ashni

Thanks babita... Thank you also for such a looong review... am very pleased... Nidhi with her childish antics can amuse anyone... They are slowly becoming comfortable with each other... Thanks to the terrace and coffee... Yes Ashu's act justifies his consern... by remembering Nidhi's words and then doing what he hadn't done even when so many people wanted him to do that us playing the guitar... I have tried to show the need of friends in his life who will show him right and wrong when he is confused and vulnerable... The story will slowly progress with their relationship becoming even more beautiful.
Love and hugs
Amreen

Oops... sorry for the error bawa... it was typed babita by mistake... have corrected it... :)

Thank you for the update, will be back...