Three Shot:Love you bhai ke dost (Moh-moh ke dhaage) Part:3*COMPLETED* - Page 2

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Aazu, I already "liked" your other two RES too! Cant wait to read them! 😃

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful story aazeen .
you lost your two stories 😭 wanted to read the emotional os you had told me. we won't get to read that os 😭

Originally posted by: shobha21

Great start Aazeen...beautifully written.👏👏👏

Lovely song..👏...can't wait to read the next part...😊

Please do continue soon.

Thank you so much for this three shot story Aazeen.

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thanks Tasha...

Arre don't ask... I was so-so frustrated yesterday na, almost on a verge of tears... I had blasted that shopkeer for destroying my works...😭😭😭

I have no idea, if I'm re-writing it or not...😕

Hoga toh phirse likh dungi... Nahi toh gone... Its not easy re-creating the same magic by re-writing...

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thanks a lot Shobha di... Thank u so much...

The song is indeed lovely...

Will try posting the next part soon...😃

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Now this is a fantabulous... Lovely start of what we call... Aazu's pen obeying her mind n heart...👏

O I just loved Nidhi's state of mind... her cozy looks... n her heart beating fast .. only n only for her Love... Ashu...❤️❤️

Cute... Awesome starting of the new story... The title is very catchy Aazu... Full marks to that.. !!! %%%%%

-- Hello Bhaiyya!
Ek toh u are too humble to ever criticise, and ur humbleness makes me hopelessly positive... 😆
I sincerely look forward to your and some more people's comments that I genuinely feel have read the story so deeply, that you are able to take the pearls out of the piece of writing...
Thank u sooo much bhaiyya for all the support and appreciation...
Ashu has all the feelings, but insecurity has held him up...
Nidhi is still dealing with her emotions... It's never easy for any girl to approach her elder brother and Say I love your best friend...
Though the brother may not disapprove of it, yet, thats not so easy... And thats the complexity of their r'ship...
As to the title... Heheheheh, I was tired of the Filmy titles, and wanted something very casual, and cathy, and this was the 1st title that came to my mind... And bas! Used it!

Hmm... the seductive side of Ashu in the first moment... It made me glued here... for long now.. !😉😛

The observation of her lovely Bro is obvious... ! The eyes locked were superb... n cud made every one left heart beating for long.. ! The jumping Nidhi said it all... Her mind is all set for him... ! Beautiful narration dear.. !👏👏

-- Again thanks a lot... Armaan is getting small clues, yet the big revealation is yet to come...
As the song suggests, the next part is definitely a union one... This TS is basically pink and lightly romantic... The family thing and all is not there in this TS, that's my USP...

The background took me to the Internship days at KGH... n here she is at the other hospitaL... N of course without a doubt... he is getting all her news from the Doc there.. ! Taking care is his habit... aur fir Nidhi ki care... toh banti hai...😉

-- Heheheheheh... His situation is like- Milo na tum toh hum ghabraayein, Milo toh aankh churaayein, humein kya ho gaya hai... 😆

Wow... so he knows her a decade back ... n his best friend cant or wont say NO... But he opted her internship at the other place... ! Aazu.. you have given a right reason of him not letting here doing her internship... I loved n lived the moment ... he cud have

-- unhuh! Correction here... He doesn't know Nidhi from a Decade, he last saw her a decade back... He knows Nidhi right from the time they all were kids... But because he n Armaan were boarding school buddies, he very seldom met Nidhi...
As to having Nidhi do Internship in d other hospital, he is subtly trying to push her away to not fall... The day the barriers are broken, he will be right there for Nidhi...

<font color="#3300ff">he would one day sit on his knees and propose her uncaring of that fact she is his best friend's younger sister...😳</font>

But he is sacred... Why.. ?? No... i dont think she will object... Uski condition nahi dekhi... ??

-- Just if he knew what her condition is... He slightly can guess Nidhi's liking for himself, but he himself is insecure about his fate... And something.. Some assurance are needed for him...

Thanks my dear sis.. for this highly appreciated work you have gifted to all of us.. ! And you have written a new one... I can understand how you wud have felt when your lappy got formatted.. ! Its hard to get the data back.. !

Will be waiting for the next chapter.. Take your time... cos once you will start writing... the best will come out.. !!!⭐️⭐️

-- Hmmm... I will concentrate on this TS first... Then will see for the rest of d 2 stories... But likhungi bhi toh ab exams ke baad!