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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Lovely update Ariya. πŸ‘ Great to see AshNi in love with each other and Ashu acknowledging this fact to himself... but how I wish he had acknowledged the same to Nidhi as well...

So, there's MU... Natasha is hurt and wasnt able to walk hence Ashutosh had to lift her in his arms and carry to the hospital... Nidhi saw them and misunderstood...

BTW, was Natasha really hurt or she was faking injury to create MU b/w AshNi?

Good to see Ashutosh trying to reach out to Nidhi and texting her... Hope she responds and MU gets clears soon in next update. πŸ˜ƒ Awaiting next update soon dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi ariya... i need ur help...its urgent... plz plz plz check pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
The story has taken a sharp twist. Loved this one so much Ariya πŸ‘πŸ‘
Ashu is in love and so is Nidhi. Natasha could be a bold fake here, so this can a triangle from now onwards. 😳
Nidhi's inside love has made her so weak when she saw Natasha in Ashu's arms. This was emotional for her. But now Ashu has to understand this. If Nidhi is hurt by watching both of them, then somewhere she also loves him. This one will be a must scene to watch. Text messages looked Ash in a mess. Hope he comes to know her love soon. πŸ˜ƒ
Very brilliantly woven and shaped. Loving the FF dearie. πŸ€—
Will be waiting for more. Thanks πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: shobha21

Very nice update Ariya πŸ‘

So Ashu and Nidhi are in love with each other.

Why the change in Natasha 's behaviour??

What happens next ??

Please update soon.

Thank you for the update Ariya.

Thanks Shobha ji..πŸ˜›
u will come to know that in next chap.
updating in few minutesπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Lovely update Ariya. πŸ‘ Great to see AshNi in love with each other and Ashu acknowledging this fact to himself... but how I wish he had acknowledged the same to Nidhi as well...

So, there's MU... Natasha is hurt and wasnt able to walk hence Ashutosh had to lift her in his arms and carry to the hospital... Nidhi saw them and misunderstood...

BTW, was Natasha really hurt or she was faking injury to create MU b/w AshNi?

Good to see Ashutosh trying to reach out to Nidhi and texting her... Hope she responds and MU gets clears soon in next update. πŸ˜ƒ Awaiting next update soon dear...

Thank u Tupu di glad u liked itπŸ˜ƒ
updating in few minutesπŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: babita68

The story has taken a sharp twist. Loved this one so much Ariya πŸ‘πŸ‘

Ashu is in love and so is Nidhi. Natasha could be a bold fake here, so this can a triangle from now onwards. 😳
Nidhi's inside love has made her so weak when she saw Natasha in Ashu's arms. This was emotional for her. But now Ashu has to understand this. If Nidhi is hurt by watching both of them, then somewhere she also loves him. This one will be a must scene to watch. Text messages looked Ash in a mess. Hope he comes to know her love soon. πŸ˜ƒ
Very brilliantly woven and shaped. Loving the FF dearie. πŸ€—
Will be waiting for more. Thanks πŸ€—

Thanks Babita so much... feeling great that u liked the update😳
updating in few minutesπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Recap


When Ashutosh reaches his home Ashutosh calls Nidhi but she doesn't pick the call then he messages nidhi.

Ashutosh:Hi nidhi.

Ashutosh: How are you?

Ashutosh:Nidhi what happened?

Ashutosh: Why were you so angry?

Ashutosh:And why were you crying?

Ashutosh:Plz pick up the call or atleast reply to my messages.


Chap 10

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Ashutosh yeh nidhi ko kya hogaya why she is not talking to me? Kahi meine toh kuch nahi kiya? Lekin kya?

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At nidhi's home

In her bedroom Nidhi is crying

Nidhi: (while crying) why i am crying? Why i am feeling bad? Why why why? Mujhe kyun bura lag raha hai ? kya mein Mr ashutosh se pyaar karti hu kya? Agar aisa nahi hai toh why i am feeling so bad. Yeah i luv him but wo? Nahi wo mujhse pyaar nahi karte. Mein hi galat thi jo mein aisa soch rahi thi. Unka aur Natasha ka jhagda toh solve hogaya tabhi toh wo aaj office ayi thi. But then why he messaged me? Jo bhi hai ab mujhe nahi lagta aisa kuch hai. I luv him but he doesn't na? It's a one sided relation and ek tarafa relation kabhi bhi nahi tikta. Lekin mere sath hi aisa kyun hota hai jisse se shaadi honi thi usse ho na payi aur jisse pyaar karti hoon usko paa nahi sakti aur meine aisa socha bhi kaise kahan wo bade businessman aur kaha mein. Mein ab unse jitna door hosake mein utna door rahungi.

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At natasha's home...

Natasha: Thank you Jyoti. Thanks a lot agar tu mujhe nahi samjhati toh mein kabhi nahi samjh paati.

Jyoti: Don't say Thanks.

Natasha: Agar tune mujhe nahi samjhaya hota toh mein ashutosh ko kho deti agar tu mujhe nahi samjhati ki mein aise ashutosh ko kho dungi toh mein kabhi nahi samjh paati i thought he will say sorry to me but i was wrong usne us nidhi ke liye mujhe sunna diya. U know wo aaj bhi mujhse baat tak nahi karna chahta tha. Agar mein chot ka natak nahi karti toh wo toh mujhse baat tak nahi karta. Mein us nidhi ko chohrungi nahi.I will not spare her i just hate her jab se ayi hai tab se jeena mushkil kardi hai. And you know wo Ashutosh wo toh nidhi ke bare mein ek word nahi suna chahta. Thanks Jyoti.

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Next day in the office

When Ashutosh tries to talk to Nidhi. She avoids him. In the afternoon Ashutosh enters into Nidhi's cabin.

Ashutosh: Hello nidhi.

Nidhi: Sir aap?

Ashutosh: Han mein kyun mein aapke cabin mein nahi aasakta?

Nidhi: Nahi aisa nahi hai apka office hai aap kahi bhi aasakte hai.

Ashutosh: Nidhi tum aise kyun behave kar rahi ho whats wrong with you?

Nidhi: Nothing. Mein jaisi hu waisi hi behave karungi na.

Ashutosh: Nidhi meine tumhe kal itne call kiye itne messages ki why you didn't take my calls nor did you answer my messages why nidhi?

Nidhi: Sir mujhe kuch kaam hai manager sir ko file deni hai.

Before Ashutosh could speak nidhi left the office...

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At Ashutosh's cabin

Ashutosh: Whats wrong with nidhi? Why is she behaving like this? Akhir baat kya hai?mujhe us se baat karni hogi lekin kaise wo toh baat hi nahi karna chahti. Ab mein kya karu? kaise usse baat karu? Uske ghar jawo kya? Nahi.

When Ashutosh was busy in nidhi's thoughts someone knocks the door...

Ashutosh: Natasha tum yahan kya kar rahi ho doctor ne toh tumhe rest karne ko kahan tha na.

Natasha: Ashutosh: i am fine now. ashutosh mujhe tumse baat karni hai plz mujhe maaf kardo.

Ashutosh: Natasha plz i told you na i don't want to talk on this topic so please go you need rest.

While Ashutosh was talking to Natasha. Nidhi knocks on the cabins door...

Ashutosh: Come in.

Nidhi: Sir is file pe apka sign chahiye tha.

Natasha: Lo ashutosh nidhi bhi agai mein us se bhi sorry bol deti hu. I am sorry nidhi meine us din over react kardia tha sorry for that.

Nidhi: Its ok.

Natasha: Dekho ashutosh ab toh nidhi ne bhi mujhe maaf kardia.

Ashutosh: Hmmm Natasha i can see that.

Natasha: Plz nidhi tum kaho na ashutosh to forgive me plz.

Nidhi: Yeah sure sir ap inhe maaf kar dijiye.

Natasha: Dekho ashutosh ab toh nidhi bhi keh rahi hai plz ab toh maaf kardo and Nidhi Ashutosh ko plz bolo ki aj mere sath dinner pe chale.

Nidhi: (trying to stop her tears) sir ap inke ke sath chale jayiye.

Natasha: Chalo na ashutosh she holds Ashutosh's hands.

Nidhi could not tolerate all this so she leaves the cabin but this time ashutosh notices her tears.

Ashutosh: Ye nidhi ko kya hogaya? Why was she crying? Jab Natasha ne mera hath pakda uske ankho mein ansu agai kyun? Kya wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai? Han aisa hi hai but but mein ye confirm kaise karu ? Idea. Natasha.

Ashutosh: Natasha plz go now you should rest na.

Natasha: Lekin dinner?

Ashutosh:Han jab tum theekh ho jawogi tab challen ge.

With that Natasha leaves for her home

In the evening at Ashutosh's cabin

Nidhi: May i come in sir.

Ashutosh: Yes come in.

Nidhi: Sir aap ne mujhe bulaya kuch kaam tha kya?

Ashutosh: han nidhi actually yeh kuch personal kaam tha dekho nidhi tum ek ladki ho so you know ek ladki ko kya gifts pasand aata hai, I want to buy a gift for Natasha but samjh nahi aaraha kya loon so i thought mein tumhari help leta hoon.

Nidhi: Iin anger)sir mein office ki employee hoon aur ye mera kaam nahi hai jo gifts suggest karti phiru. May i leave now?

Ashutosh: Yeah you can and i am sorry i thought tum meri help karogi.

Nidhi without saying a word leaves the cabin..

At the night nidhi receives a message..

Ashutosh: Nidhi plz if you can plz help me in suggesting gifts for Nidhi.I want to gift something special to her.

Nidhi could not stop her tears.

Nidhi: Mere saath hi aisa kyun huwa? Mein kya karu mein nahi dekh sakti Ashutosh ji aur Natasha ko ek saath . Whole night she keeps crying.

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In the morning

Anji goes to nidhi's room to wake her up

Anji: Nidhi uth ja. Nidhi arey uth na late ho jayega, aaj office se off lena ka irada hai kya?

When nidhi doesn't respond Anji goes near nidhi and what she saw is that Nidhi is fainted...

Hope you like it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Very nice chapter continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
So, it's clear that Natasha was faking. Liked the chapter Ariya, very well written. πŸ‘πŸ‘
Nidhi's tears and her restlessness has confirmed that she too loves Ashu. This scene was quite emotional. ⭐️
Natasha has crossed all the limits to act as a nice person. But Ashu is confidant of his love to Nidhi. I loved the part when Nidhi could not hold her tears and left the cabin. And Ashu comes to know about her love for him. Lovely part when Ashu tries to confirm her love and asks for a gift to Natasha.
Nicely shapen the story dearie. Eagerly, Oh so eagerly waiting for the next part. And want to see Ashu see Nidhi's love for him in her eyes, tears and.. ❀️
Thanks dear for this beautiful FF πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Very nice update Ariya.πŸ‘..loved it.
So Natasha was faking.
Loved Ashu and Nidhi's self thoughts.
Waiting for the next.
Thank you for the update Ariya.
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