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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Nice update...how will Ashu get rid of Natasha??

Thank u... you will come to know thatπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: babita68

Superb narration Ariya πŸ‘πŸ‘

The plot and the scenes are all nicely written. Nidhi is fainted, and her problem is Ashu's teasings. Ashu got excited on listening about Nidhi's illness. Loved his eagerness to know whether he did something wrong or it was else. πŸ˜‰ 😳
Again liked his teasing her, to know what she feels and how she reacts. Awesome!!! Now waiting eagely to see how Ashu will take care of her tears.
Thanks so much Ariya for the efforts and the wonderful chapter. πŸ€—It's beautifully progressing towards the love of Ashni. ❀️

Thanks BabitaπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: shobha21

Very nice update Ariya πŸ‘

Very good progress in the story.
Loved Ashutosh's concern about Nidhi's health.
Liked the way Ashu teasing Nidhi.
Thank you for the update Ariya.
Waiting for the next.

Thanks Shobha ji..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: swati62

Very nice. Waiting for the next chapter

ThanksπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Recap

Ashutosh: (in teasing mood)acha toh nidhi kuch socha kya gift loon Natasha ke liye? Mein Natasha ko kuch special dena chahta hoon i want to make her happy plz batao na nidhi.

Nidhi: Started crying.

Ashutosh: Nidhi kya huwa?


Chap 12


Nidhi: Nothing aap se matlab?

Ashutosh: why are you behaving like this Nidhi and why are you crying?

Before Nidhi could answer Nandini and Anji entered with tea. Ashutosh wanted to talk to Nidhi but nandini was not moving from there...

Ashutosh: Acha toh mein chalta hoon aunty.

Nandini: Arey beta thodi deir aur ruk jao?

Ashutosh: Nahi aunty its getting too late. Acha Nidhi mein chalta hoon Take care of yourself.

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At Ashutosh's room

Ashutosh: I am sorry Nidhi I made you cry today. Ashutosh let me message Nidhi.

Ashutosh: Hi Nidhi.

Ashutosh:How are you now Nidhi?

Ashutosh:kuch toh bola? Agar tumne reply nahi kiya toh mein samjhoonga tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho tum reply kar rahi ho ya aunty ko phone kar ke puchu that what is wrong with Nidhi.

Nidhi wasn't replying to his messages but after seeing his last she gets worried and finally replies to his message...

Nidhi:mein kuch nahi chupa rahi and I am fine.

Ashutosh: Really?

Nidhi: Hmmm.

Ashutosh: You seems to be sad?

Nidhi: No.

Ashutosh: You are lying.

Nidhi: No why will I?

Ashutosh: Bolo bolo jhooth you think mujhe kuch samjh mein nahi aata right?

Nidhi: Aap kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho?

Ashutosh: Ussi bare jo tum chupa rahi ho.

Nidhi: Mein kya chupane lagi.

Ashutosh: You know what I mean.

Nidhi: No I don't know at all.

Ashutosh: Ohh ok bye.

Nidhi: Bye.

Nidhi yeh ashutosh ji kis bare mein baat kare rahe hai meri toh kuch samjh nahi aaraha.

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Next day in the office

Nidhi was working in her cabin when she gets a call from Ashutosh to come to his cabin.

Nidhi: Sir apne mujhe bulaya?

Ashutosh: Han Nidhi yeh file deni thi.

While Nidhi was taking file Natasha entered the office

Natasha: Chalo Ashutosh chale?

Ashutosh: Han Natasha chalo between pehle tum kaha jana pasand karogi shopping or lunch?

Natasha: Ashutosh firstly lunch then shopping. Toh chale?

Ashutosh holds Natasha's hand and leaves for lunch. Nidhi goes to her cabin and starts crying badly.

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On the road in the car

Ashutosh: Natasha hum lunch pe nahi ja sakte.

Natasha: ashutosh ye kya keh rahe ho?

Ashutosh: Natasha mujhe abhi yaad aya mujhe ek meeting mein jana hai so mein tumhe ghar drop kar deta hoon.

Ashutosh drops Natasha at her home and says bhala taali.

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At the evening nidhi was crying in her room and anji was soothing her

Anji: Nidhi plz chup hoja plz nidhi aise ro mat Nidhi khana khale plz khana nahi khayegi toh tabiyat aur bigad jayegi plz kuch khale.

Nidhi: Mujhe bhookh nahi hai anji.

Anji: Nidhi khana na khane se kya hoga?

Nidhi: I know kuch nahi hoga but mujhse kuch nahi khaya ja raha hai.

Anji: Nidhi kya hogaya tujhe aaj subah tak toh tu theekh thi jab se office se ayi hai tabse kya haal bana diya apna kya hua office mein?

Nidhi: Anji yesterday night Ashutosh messaged me and unke behaviour se mujhe lag raha tha that he also loves me but aisa kuch nahi hai aj office mein Natasha ayi thi coz Ashutosh ji ne usse bulaya tha to take her for lunch and shopping. Anji it hurts me so much. I am feeling jealous. Mujhse yeh sab nahi dekha ja raha. Anji i can't see all that.

Anji tried her best to sooth Nidhi but she wasn't listening.

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At Ashutosh's home

Ashutosh: Aaj meine jaan boojh ke Natasha ko office mein bulaya phir usse jhooth bolke usse ghar drop kiya so that mein nidhi ko dikha sakhu lekin usne react nahi kiya ab kya karu?


hope u like it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Liked this update. My like button is not working. I am happy that ashu avoided Natasha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Once again a very cute update Ariya.πŸ‘πŸ‘ Loved Ashu's efforts to know Nidhi's love, but feels sad that it turns into her tears, always. 😭
Nice messages between them, this made them bit more frank while talking. Now, as Ashu has totally ignored Natasha, I would like to see how he will tackle Nidhi's feelings. Her jealousy is good, quite good but this may not delay much. Hope she shows her feelings soon.πŸ˜ƒ
Loved the chapter and waiting for the next, take your time. Can feel how much pains U are taking dearie. πŸ€—
Ariya, I could not understand this :


Ashutosh drops Natasha at her home and says bhala taali.πŸ˜•
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
How will Nidhi come out now???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Very nice update Ariya..loved it.
Liked the messages between Ashu and Nidhi.

Thank you so much for the update.

Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
ariya u fine na? plz check ur pm
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