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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: babita68

Very nice continuation Suvi di !!! You have narrated the feelings of Ashni so well. I loved to read the whole chapter. The song, do pal -- it's so perfectly matching the related scenes you have put into. Awesome, fantastic. 👏👏 Classy. ⭐️⭐️

Thank you Babita.

Ashu has so much to talk about, but now Nidhi has learnt to evade. It was a very bad time for both of them. Nidhi if on on hand is pocketed with many questions to Ashu then on the other hand, Ashu has to explain much more with guilt in his eyes and heart. Trust is gained and without it love means nothing. Ashu has some more miles to go.

True that.

It was a very sad episode with so much of dismal in Ashni's life and made ours with gloom. Nidhi confronted with him so bravely, he had no choice left only to repent. Knowing upon Nidhi knows that Malika was a choice of baba, Ashu had nowhere to start with. He tries his every bit to make her acknowledge his mistake. He confessed his and needs an excuse with another chance. I liked Nidhi showing not much eagerness to nod him in a yes. She has all alone suffered for doing nothing. She is punished and now she has to forgive. Here i want to ask Ashu and concerned ----- Had Nidhi would have done that mistake, Ashu would have forget and forgive Nidhi so easily ?? No, i don't think so.

Good question and I agree with your thoughts.

Had Ashu would have not listened to Mallika's misdeeds, he would be here today ?? Nidhi is right --- rishtey banana assan hai, per nibhana.. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On the same path, i loved Ashu filled with proud for Nidhi's MD. She is a good student and has learnt every aspect of life too. 😳

I could never understand how Nidhi became a senior intern from a junior intern. There is no such thing as senior intern in medicine. But anyway, don't get me started on the med blunders in the show. I get irritated. 😡

Anji and Nidhi bond is awesome. The have such a good understanding and they share an equal heart to take every take of their life together. Anji wanted her to confront Ashu and not hide more. And she did it so courageously.
Oh. Ashu tried to get a seat with Nidhi on the flight, but fate was not willing. Sighs and feels bad. He wants to hide his tears from his baba, and failed. Hope baba could do something much better when he talks with the elders. Elders knows the best.

You need to wait to know the elders POV 😆

And Anji's eng. can bring them together and they will hopefully. 😃 The looked so awesome a couple at her eng. in the show --- Hope to see the repetition.

Or She Devil might decide to add another twist. You never know. 😈

Super liked the update Suvi di. Now will wait more from the next one. I hope Aarti will be back by then.
Take care. 🤗

Aarti will be back hopefully sometime after 20th of this month. THank you for the review Babita. and you too take care. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Shobhaji..what is your opinion of captain Akash Saluja?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Suvika, Have you started on next update???



When and where?? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Awesome update. You know I also wanted the same to happen in the show but as ever u know our cv's.. But i thank both of you for writing on this issue. When is the next update?😊😉
Edited by ssss97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: neelimapn4

Suvika..I am sorry I am late in replying..

Thanks a lot for sending me such a wonderful OS..
I read both the parts..
Ashu was never shown repenting in the show..
The writer was very unfair to Nidhi..
But you and Aarti are doing an excellent work..
Waiting for the next part..



Hi Neelima... how are you?? Great to see you here and please don't apologize..

show didn't cash many angles. Too busy concentrating on the contrived vamp
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Suvika.



Next two updates are going to be from me only although ideas and thoughts are both Aarti's and mine. She is in India right now, attending a family wedding. If she can get anywhere near the laptop, she would type and post an epilogue for this OS.



Epilogue agar Aarti nahi likh paayi hai toh aap likhiyena.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Who is writing next update??? Suvika or Aarti???? 😕



Well... Ideas are from both of us... but typing I will be doing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: babita68

Hello Suvi di, Hope U too had a great Sunday with the kids. 😃

Will be waiting for you, take your own time. 🤗



sat and sun were great Babita... exhausting but great. Thank you.

Replied your review. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Chapter 2 is ready 👏 Will be reading the OS next week... !

Thanks Suvi di for the efforts ... This must be a lovely one... ! Keep going 😃



Take your time Bhavit. No hurry. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: sss97

Awesome update. You know I also wanted the same to happen in the show but as ever u know our cv's.. But i thank both of you for writing on this issue. When is the next update?😊😉



Thank you Swathi..

Next update probably Friday
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