OS - Baat Ek Raati Ki... Part 5 Page 109 Nov 24 - Page 3

Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tara1234
you write stories .I didn't know .pls write one

how many stories have u written

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shobha21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Fabulous update Suvika...Loved it 👏👏

You have selected a right song to that situation.👏

The convo between Ashu and Nidhi was very emotional.

Nidhi is giving a tough time to Ashu.

Felt bad for him...but he deserve it.

Thank you so much for the update Suvika.

Waiting for the next.

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shobha21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

One question Suvika...next update kaun post kar rahe hai?? Aap ya Aarti.???

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Aarti n Suvika, lovely write up... loving it ..

suvika thanks for the pm...

wud try to review when i can...

Edited by sshirley - 10 years ago

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Shari30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Nice ... Good to see you back now I get my dose of motivation for my grading .,, super liking the nidhi here ... Let's see how it unfolds

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syedzoya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Lovely chap Suvika di...Very emotional update...feeling excited what will happen in the next chap...Waiting for the next chap...

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day_lily

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Interesting concept..!!

Looking forward to read more..pls update soon..

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Chitra RaviKiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Trust is the base for any relation. U make any mistake but never ever cheat the person you are going to have a life long relation with.

Loved Nidhi's lines. Whom should I hate most? You for your betrayal or myself for my blind trust and love? Superb lline

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bc123456

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

What a pleasure reading your work , the language the feel , the story very good , please continue , Suvi , will come back for more

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ruchshah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Wow... Loved the story line!!!

Cant exactly express what i feel...but its an apt way in which Nidhi took things in her stride.

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