Originally posted by: Veenaper
Dearest Eisha what a majestic update full of reverence, care and concern and awesomely spiced with chocolaty delight. You have started with those fabulous lines from Elizabeth Barrett Browning - let me add this -
The moment eternal - just that and no more - When ecstasy's utmost we clutch at the core While cheeks burn, arms open, eyes shut, and lips meet! - Robert Browning.
Thanks a lot dear 🤗 Thank you for liking this loving reverence and adding these lines to the ecstasy of their love.
Your Ashu always taking care of his treasure feeding her with the chocolate and both of them sharing it in their own inimitable style - must say this was the most sensuous scene in your entire FF and it must have knocked your readers senseless but hats off to you for maintaining the subtleness. I had always wondered where did the other half of the unfinished chocolate go - Thanks a ton for this bewitching scene. One thing I have noticed is your Ashu always allows his beauty to sleep in the mornings - made me go back to that scene in the show where Nidhi was hurt miserably for oversleeping for a few minutes.
Thank you dear your words mean a lot, in spite of you calling this scene as the most sensuous in entire FF you think I maintained subtlety, I take this as a compliment. 😆 yes I know you wondered about the unfinished chocolate and I'm happy they finished that 😉. I'm glad you liked this scene. Yes I too felt bad for Nidhi when Ashutosh behaved weirdly in that scene.Ashu busy with his duties, missing Nidhi a lot but he does not have the heart to ignore Mallika's request for having lunch together. But his face lights up when he sees his lunch sent so thoughtfully by his Nidhi and the naughty exchange of smses by them which naturally sparkles Ashu's face is noticed by an observant Mallika. Could feel her aching heart when Ashu so lovingly invites Nidhi to join him for lunch and he accepts the plate that she offers but still fiddles with his phone waiting for Nidhi - you have portrayed Mallika's pain brilliantly. Ashu behaving the perfect gentleman taking the dish that Mallika offers him but relishing the dish which his Nidhi has so painstakingly prepared - yes I remembered the honeymoon episode where Nidhi had taken interest to know about the recipe of Nadru Yakhini since Ashu had loved the delicacy. I loved Ashu's diplomacy that he displayed tasting the brinjal dish so that he does not hurt Mallika but quietly insisting that Nidhi's delicacy is what he loves more. Super loved Nidhi's mature behaviour in not correcting Mallika as to who actually cooked the dish and she humbly but forcefully says that she and her Ashu are differently alike. You have in your fabulous style swiftly but effectively erased that terrible scene in the show when Mallika had invited Ashni for dinner and repeatedly had hurt Nidhi with her unsavoury remarks. Could feel Ashu's helplessness to see Mallika's angst but Nidhi quick to erase that feeling and Ashni at long last enjoying those sublime moments to beat the severe longing.
Yes Ashu couldn't say No to Malika. He cares for her equally. He is a good friend and a good human being and knows how to balance things, unlike Ashu in the show who only cared for Malika until he came to know about her real face. I feel so contented when you all say you feel Malika's pain. Her character in this FF has not failed to evoke sympathies for her and I feel happy I have been able to maintain her dignity.
Thank you for saying I have erased the memories of a scene when Malika invited Ashni for dinner in the show. Here Mailka is way dignified than show's Malika and Nidhi getting topmost care and knowing she is the centre point of her husband's attention doesn't have that tinge of insecurity what Nidhi in the show felt. Thank you for liking and mentioning all these scenes.Your Ashu who always seeks his Nidhi on reaching home immediately sensing his treasure's absence and who can stop him when it comes to her health and well being ? When he cannot bear to even see a frown on her beautiful face could feel his torture seeing her grimacing in pain. The way he exhibits his care and concern only shows the unfathomable love that your Ashni share. Loved the way they spend their evenings, enjoying those heavenly moments together, on long drives and the happy moments spent with Nidhi's family and the bonding with the neighbors.
😃 No he can never bear to see her grimacing. Thank you for liking the way he showered his love care and concern on Nidhi.Nidhi glowing happily after being drenched in the shower of her husband's love, falling for him afresh with renewed zeal experiencing the pinnacle of his boundless care and devotion and also admiring his absolute restrain. She wants to attend her friend's party but at the same time she does not want to leave Ashu even for a minute knowing very well his aversion for such functions. Ashu displaying his heartstone temper at his juniors but to his Nidhi his annoyance is at something that she missed to give him that morning. Mallika quick to grab the opportunity butting in between and telling an irritant Ashu to let Nidhi attend the party. The phone convos that your Ashni shared were flavored with romantic naughtiness.
Yes Nidhi glowed drenching in the shower of her husband's love. Her love knew new heights and to say in Emily Bronte's words she actually came to know about,
"He's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same."
that's why she wanted to be with him equally, gave up the idea of attending her friend's birthday party and didn't feel bad about missing that party.
Just loved how you have ended this exquisite update - Nidhi making her stand clear to her friends siding so lovingly with Ashu and explaining about her inability to attend the party. But the girlie gang not willing to give up easily, venting out their displeasure about Ashu not knowing that they are being watched !!! I strongly feel that it is Mallika who overhears them and she must have felt happy at this revelation.
"Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O no, it is an ever-fixed mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wand'ring bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken." 😃I salute you for the awesome splendor of this update. 👏 Love you and thanks a million🤗
Originally posted by: babita68
First of all Eisha, i loved to read the fabulous update. Loved it more and more after reading it again and again 👏 It's an utmost feeling of happiness with Ashni so much deeply in love. The Hot chocolate scene, Ueee maa☺️. I felt so.. 😉
Hi Babita! Thank you for reading and liking this update. If I remember right, you joined this forum as "Peanut"? You have changed your name.
Thanks dear for liking chocolate scene 😳Mornings are always so beautiful in your updates. Loved to see Ashu taking so much of care of Nidhi and not letting her get rid of that restful sleep.The lunch at Kgh. Liked to read how Ashu wanted Nidhi to join him and Mallika. But what i liked the most is he took Nidhi's box first and then on asking he did full justice to Mallika's too. Mallika felt inside deeply that their world is with them, and left. A sad feeling for her. Wish she gets a life for herself too.
Oh! Thanks a ton dear for noticing that. Yes, mornings in this FF are always beautiful. Actually, Ashu treasures his Barbie doll very much. 😆 😳 Thanks for liking the lunch at KGH. Yes dear, here Ashu knows how to strike a balance between his friendship and love. Thank you for feeling sad for Malika.Ashu ate with Nidhi even it was so late. Eating without her is never in his books, and they had dinner. Awesome!
😃 thank you.The new love that you have mentioned for Nidhi.. I loved how it is portrayed. Ashu taking full care of her and of health. what a loving husband to a loving wife.
Thank you dear. Yes their love touched new heights in this update.It was romantic Ashu who later talked and sms his wife. Now as Nidhi has already dropped the idea to go to Ahana's birthday, wish to see Ashu taking her there.
😃Lovely and an astounding update dearie. 👏 More realistic to life and full of an alluring love ❤️
Originally posted by: babita68
Eisha, i'm already missing Swati, shubham and bro. Loved to read your replies to their reviews, and more loved swati's 😃
Wishing them all the best in their life, cos i know Swati must be reading you. She told me what You matters in her life. 🤗 Meeting them was only a chance, but now i feel it's the best day of my life.
Originally posted by: sshirley
Hi pansy - super loved this chap as usual 😃 I was so engrossed that I was actually rudely jolted out of dreamland when the chapter ended
Thank you Shirley dear. You read my updates is an honour in itself and when you take time in your busy schedule to write your review here. I feel overwhelmed. Thank you for liking this update.
Just love the way u write romantic scenes - it's so undescribable what I feel reading - u can feel each of their emotion yet there is nothing remotely indecent abt the scenes. That has always been the beauty of ur writing that u never ever cross that fine line while showing sensuous romance,
Thank you so much for saying that. I'm always concerned about that, would never like to cross that fine line. The absence of vulgarity is a must.Ashus TLC for nidz during those days was just fab as was his restraint - must say this ashu is a dream husband😛
😃 Thank you. Yes, he is a dream husband.Loving the way u shaping mallikas character - the scene of the trio in ashus cabin was fantastic - how do u manage to write so beautifully !!!!
Thank you for loving Malika's character and liking lunch scene. 😳 Becoz I've got the most beautiful readers.But I m severely disappointed at one thing - where is jagan? I m so loving him here n awaited ur update for him more than ashni. Please please him a meaty part in ur next chapter
Oh! Thank you for missing Jagan. Of course he is going to come. 😉All in all, a fantabulous update😃
Originally posted by: Veenaper
Hi Dearest Eisha -
Wishing you A Very Happy Friendship Day.Words could never tell you
How important you'll always be,
Just little things that you do
That are especially meant for me.
You always seem to remember
All the things to do.
That makes friends last forever,
And share a bond so true.
I'm so glad God gave to me
Someone just like you.
He knew that you would be
One of the chosen few
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