She walks in Beauty-Th5, Chap-52, pg-55 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

So sweet of you dearie, i knew you wud come ❀️ πŸ€—
Yes by now, i know that am not allowed to go for long. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ Will be back soon my dear, luv ya and will miss ya. Waiting to come back soon !!!





Thank you and me too waiting for you to come back πŸ€—




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: babita68

Nice update Eisha πŸ‘

I'll review later. πŸ˜ƒ



Thank you dear. take your time πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinku14

WOW... BEAUTIFUL.⭐️.. u know Pansyji... you narrate ashni's love so so so romantically that its always as fresh as new love... u know it makes us eager to read what next😳... its so very very beautiful.. and now the little miff between them is very nice...😊 needed to see their little nonk jhonk...and aftermiff romance is so much awaited...😳..love u



Thank you Aryan πŸ€— please you can call me pansy or eisha, no ji πŸ˜ƒ

I'm glad you are liking the narration and thanks for waiting eagerly for updates. Little miff is yet to come and 😳

Thanks a lot dear for reading and liking this update. Love you too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ Bro and Swati dear. For beautiful pics








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Posted: 10 years ago
Eisha, Thanks for your wishes, from all of us πŸ€—




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Posted: 10 years ago
Dearest Eisha what a majestic update full of reverence, care and concern and awesomely spiced with chocolaty delight. You have started with those fabulous lines from Elizabeth Barrett Browning - let me add this -

The moment eternal - just that and no more - When ecstasy's utmost we clutch at the core While cheeks burn, arms open, eyes shut, and lips meet! - Robert Browning.

Your Ashu always taking care of his treasure feeding her with the chocolate and both of them sharing it in their own inimitable style - must say this was the most sensuous scene in your entire FF and it must have knocked your readers senseless but hats off to you for maintaining the subtleness. I had always wondered where did the other half of the unfinished chocolate go - Thanks a ton for this bewitching scene. One thing I have noticed is your Ashu always allows his beauty to sleep in the mornings - made me go back to that scene in the show where Nidhi was hurt miserably for oversleeping for a few minutes.

Ashu busy with his duties, missing Nidhi a lot but he does not have the heart to ignore Mallika's request for having lunch together. But his face lights up when he sees his lunch sent so thoughtfully by his Nidhi and the naughty exchange of smses by them which naturally sparkles Ashu's face is noticed by an observant Mallika. Could feel her aching heart when Ashu so lovingly invites Nidhi to join him for lunch and he accepts the plate that she offers but still fiddles with his phone waiting for Nidhi - you have portrayed Mallika's pain brilliantly. Ashu behaving the perfect gentleman taking the dish that Mallika offers him but relishing the dish which his Nidhi has so painstakingly prepared - yes I remembered the honeymoon episode where Nidhi had taken interest to know about the recipe of Nadru Yakhini since Ashu had loved the delicacy. I loved Ashu's diplomacy that he displayed tasting the brinjal dish so that he does not hurt Mallika but quietly insisting that Nidhi's delicacy is what he loves more. Super loved Nidhi's mature behaviour in not correcting Mallika as to who actually cooked the dish and she humbly but forcefully says that she and her Ashu are differently alike. You have in your fabulous style swiftly but effectively erased that terrible scene in the show when Mallika had invited Ashni for dinner and repeatedly had hurt Nidhi with her unsavoury remarks. Could feel Ashu's helplessness to see Mallika's angst but Nidhi quick to erase that feeling and Ashni at long last enjoying those sublime moments to beat the severe longing.

Your Ashu who always seeks his Nidhi on reaching home immediately sensing his treasure's absence and who can stop him when it comes to her health and well being ? When he cannot bear to even see a frown on her beautiful face could feel his torture seeing her grimacing in pain. The way he exhibits his care and concern only shows the unfathomable love that your Ashni share. Loved the way they spend their evenings, enjoying those heavenly moments together, on long drives and the happy moments spent with Nidhi's family and the bonding with the neighbors.

Nidhi glowing happily after being drenched in the shower of her husband's love, falling for him afresh with renewed zeal experiencing the pinnacle of his boundless care and devotion and also admiring his absolute restrain. She wants to attend her friend's party but at the same time she does not want to leave Ashu even for a minute knowing very well his aversion for such functions. Ashu displaying his heartstone temper at his juniors but to his Nidhi his annoyance is at something that she missed to give him that morning. Mallika quick to grab the opportunity butting in between and telling an irritant Ashu to let Nidhi attend the party. The phone convos that your Ashni shared were flavored with romantic naughtiness.

Just loved how you have ended this exquisite update - Nidhi making her stand clear to her friends siding so lovingly with Ashu and explaining about her inability to attend the party. But the girlie gang not willing to give up easily, venting out their displeasure about Ashu not knowing that they are being watched !!! I strongly feel that it is Mallika who overhears them and she must have felt happy at this revelation.

I salute you for the awesome splendor of this update. πŸ‘ Love you and thanks a millionπŸ€—


Edited by Veenaper - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all Eisha, i loved to read the fabulous update. Loved it more and more after reading it again and again πŸ‘ It's an utmost feeling of happiness with Ashni so much deeply in love. The Hot chocolate scene, Ueee maa☺️. I felt so.. πŸ˜‰
Mornings are always so beautiful in your updates. Loved to see Ashu taking so much of care of Nidhi and not letting her get rid of that restful sleep.
The lunch at Kgh. Liked to read how Ashu wanted Nidhi to join him and Mallika. But what i liked the most is he took Nidhi's box first and then on asking he did full justice to Mallika's too. Mallika felt inside deeply that their world is with them, and left. A sad feeling for her. Wish she gets a life for herself too.
Ashu ate with Nidhi even it was so late. Eating without her is never in his books, and they had dinner. Awesome!
The new love that you have mentioned for Nidhi.. I loved how it is portrayed. Ashu taking full care of her and of health. what a loving husband to a loving wife.
It was romantic Ashu who later talked and sms his wife. Now as Nidhi has already dropped the idea to go to Ahana's birthday, wish to see Ashu taking her there.
Lovely and an astounding update dearie. πŸ‘ More realistic to life and full of an alluring love ❀️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eisha, i'm already missing Swati, shubham and bro. Loved to read your replies to their reviews, and more loved swati's πŸ˜ƒ
Wishing them all the best in their life, cos i know Swati must be reading you. She told me what You matters in her life. πŸ€— Meeting them was only a chance, but now i feel it's the best day of my life.
Edited by babita68 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi



yes yes I agreeπŸ˜›


Thank you Deeps dear & Mudraji πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi pansy - super loved this chap as usual πŸ˜ƒ I was so engrossed that I was actually rudely jolted out of dreamland when the chapter ended
Just love the way u write romantic scenes - it's so undescribable what I feel reading - u can feel each of their emotion yet there is nothing remotely indecent abt the scenes. That has always been the beauty of ur writing that u never ever cross that fine line while showing sensuous romance,

Ashus TLC for nidz during those days was just fab as was his restraint - must say this ashu is a dream husbandπŸ˜›

Loving the way u shaping mallikas character - the scene of the trio in ashus cabin was fantastic - how do u manage to write so beautifully !!!!

But I m severely disappointed at one thing - where is jagan? I m so loving him here n awaited ur update for him more than ashni. Please please him a meaty part in ur next chapter

All in all, a fantabulous updateπŸ˜ƒ
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