FF:Jo Hua Usey Bhool Ja:Ch13(Epilogue)Pg:78,Question Pg83 - Page 52

nandinibose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

awesome chap.👏

superb song selections.

really enjoyed the idea of a hatke sangeet.😊

loved the mehndi ceremony as well.

thank u 4 the wonderful wedding.

pl give us some more ashni moments.😃

thank u

luv u😳

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Ena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

main bhi thoda naach loon great song selection...nd lovely sangeet aazeen! issme bhi sangeet haan! 😆😆😆 aj ap sab log ak saath kaise aagaye haan? ajka din bahot badiya hain! thank u...love u! u all r great writer!👏👏👏👏

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: Ena292
main bhi thoda naach loon Haan-haan naach lo... kisne mana kiya hai?😆😆😆
great song selection...nd lovely sangeet aazeen! Thankkk youuu... ena... issme bhi sangeet haan! haan yaar coincidence...😃
😆😆😆 aj ap sab log ak saath kaise aagaye haan? I did not expect Suja di's update today... Coz unhone kal hi diya tha... So aaj akele mers hi hona tha... Lekin as soon as I gave my update, Suja di too gave in 15-20 mins... mehez ek ittefaaq tha...ajka din bahot badiya hain!yeh toh soch par hai meri behen...thank u...love u! u all r great writer!👏Thank you so much... i love u too...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: saibanu
Yayyeyyee ASHNI are finally married now 🥳Yup!!! Finally they are married now...😃

it was such a great chapter Aazeen , Loved it ...All song selection was just too great 👏,Thanks a looottt Sai...now waiting for next part desperately ...Will try updating very-very soon...

Thank you for this chapter 😃 U r most welcome...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nandinibose
awesome chap.👏

superb song selections.Thanx a lot Nandini...😃

really enjoyed the idea of a hatke sangeet.😊 I wanted a lil change in the pattern of sangeet... so did this... glad u liked the hatke sangeet...😃
loved the mehndi ceremony as well. Thanx dear... I tried keeping it simple yet a cute one... thets it...

thank u 4 the wonderful wedding. U r welcome... But, I felt, I had not done, much justice to the wedding part... went in a blurr... Par kya karti... had to end this ff super fast...

pl give us some more ashni moments.😃 Kya baat hai? aaj sab mujhse ek hi baat keh rahe hain... I think iss baar bohot doori ho gayi... lekin koi baat nahi... next update mein Ashni n only ashni... ok...!!!!

thank u U r welcome...

luv u😳 Love u too sweety...😃 N thanx 4 the awesome review...

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rayafan17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

liked the whole marriage sequence. You write well. Please continue..

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: deepali1772
liked the whole marriage sequence. You write well. Please continue..

Thanx a lot Deepali... I'm glad to know, u liked the wedding sequence... Yeah! Would continue very soon... Just writing my next chap, n wud sleep only when I complete it... So that, when ever I get time, I can type n post it... Almost half the chapter done...!

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rayafan17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

great effort on your part appreciate it.

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Hi Aazeen

As promised here I am with the reviews of both your chapters.

Chap 10

Ok I think that Highlight here was Ashutosh and his songs.

I love that Ashutosh is so romantic

and willing to sing with any hesitations, for his love.

And Aazeen I love you choice of old songs,

They happen to be some of my favorites also.👏

I love how you started where you left off with the last chap

and Nidhi's teasing Ashutosh with the food was

adorable.

But even more so was Ashutosh, and the way he ate the

leftover bite from Nidhi's food.😳

You have done a great job with his character, and the way

you have described his support and love for Nidhi is beautiful.

I also really appreciate that you have shown him to be making equal efforts

in getting to know and become a part of her family.

Awesome Writing Aazeen.

Chap 11

This was a fabulous update. Starting with the haldi, mehendi

And your Sangeet, was out of this world.

I loved your song selections.. I am surprised that

someone of your age, would like such old and classic songs.

Great.

The interactions between AshNi, though short

were very romantic, and very cute.

I loved the way you made the whole family participate.

with songs. That was a great touch. And very original.

You I think The best part of this was the shaadi.

all the outfits that you described were awesome,

and I loved how you went into details

with the colors. Ashutosh in his sherwani

sounds absolutely scrumptious. Kaash we could see him ...

Anyway, I can't wait for the Vidai, and the SR.😳

So when is the next update. waiting eagerly for it.

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#520

It was beautiful...all songs were amazing...AshNi are now married yeee waiting for next one and like their convo about how Nidhi gonna call Ashutosh it was sweet:)

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