Congratulations for this new FF dear... So, my "chhota packet, bada dhamaka" sis is all set to rock the writers' world of ktlk forum... ☺️ Good luck!!!
First of all, salam hai aapki himmat ko... pehle hi FF mein, domestic abuse jaise sensitive social issue ko chheda hai aapne... aur justice bhi poora kar rahi hai aap apni kahani ke saath... 👏 The concept that u have chosen for ur fiction is a sad reality of thousands of innocent south-asian girls' lives who get married to NRI grooms and unfortunately get trapped as a slave and have their lives ruined... 😭
Nidhi married to Jagan gave me a 10000 volt ka Zatka... seriously... But, it's what the story is all about... so, I am ok with it and Jagan is already established as abusive and treacherous husband for all ktlkians. However, all the pain inflicted on my dear Nidhi - physical and emotional - rendered me all sob sob... 😭😭😭 Aisa kaun sa atyachaar hai yahan jo ki domestic violence ki category mein aata ho aur Nidhi ne nahi saha ho... 🤢 Upar se aisi barbarous kick pregnant wife ko... 😲 I swear, agar yeh jagan mere haath mein kabhi aaya to dekh lena, woh haal karungi uska ki naani ki naani yaad aa jayegi usko... 😡 Aazeenji... meri 1 request hai aapse: Jaise hi Nidhi ko hosh aaye, usko iss jagan ke khilaf bayan dilwana... yeh nahi ki aadarsh bharatiy naari aur Devi banker chup rahe... Waise toh mujhe andaza hai ki aisa nahi hoga coz Nidhi was shown very determined to escape from Jagan's cage but phir bhi mere man mein jo baat aai woh maine likh di...
Loved to see Nidhi as a pediatrician and with a very nice and caring family and Anji like friend in India. What I liked most is she talking to her baby to pray for their safe escape and staying determined to break free of his tortures... thank God, she had some monies & her passport was within her reach only - Jagan hadnt taken it away and put it in the lock-box... 😊 Jagan's behaviour and dialogue were really abhorrent but pathetically true to reality... 🤢 Such abusive and tyrant people can show such atrocities only... 😡
I dont see much chances of survival of the fetus... unless u r offering us a medical miracle 😃 Whatever u decide is upto u and I am with u in any option u choose: termination or continuation of Nidhi's pregnancy. Ashutosh would be the Godsend now... huh?? Really liked her in-laws and Jethji - Ashutoshji's arrival at the perfect moment and why their arrival will be revealed in next chapter I hope. But, who called the cops? Some neighbour or Ashu and her in-laws themselves?
Awaiting next part... plz. try to update soon!!!
Edited by ttrocks - 12 years ago
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