FF:Jo Hua Usey Bhool Ja:Ch13(Epilogue)Pg:78,Question Pg83 - Page 29

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Aazeen02 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry-sorry- sorry guys...

1 for, late update...

2 for, the inconinence caused 2 u all in reading my update... Actually, I hd to type with my moby, n it had a restricted 5000 charecter space... So was bound to write in this text message kind of language...

3 for, no PMs this time... As I don't hv my lappy wid me... I cnt... If ever I get it back, will edit this upadte, to a lil more reader frndly form, n pm u all the link... Tab tak k liye , tata-bye-bye... Do hit the like button, n comments welcome... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I guessed that you sent the chapter from your phone...the font and the text are too obvious to miss Aazeen...no worries...i copy pasted it in my word pad and increased the font size and read it...

good chapter...and looks like you are running with this FF...confession bhi hogaya!! and now they are going to India? this DB is good or going to raise issues?? shaadi kab hain?? your ff is also going to end with the marriage or you planning to take it further??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aazeen very good confession of Ashni here. So finally the whole family accept it.good going dear.DB called them to India? is she against this marriage?but this time we want Ashutosh stronger.
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx for the update aazu...πŸ˜ƒ it was awesome...
loved every bit of it...πŸ€—
i am extremely busy right now...but will give you a nice detailed review later for sure...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ suja di...

1stly, Thanx 4 jhelofying my chap...

2ndly, If the story is getting crappy, then I should give it a hold... I cant spoil my creation like that... Let me know, if thats the case...
U know, I had to edit this whole thing for almost more than 6 times, to accomodate the entire update... I too have an idea, how bad this chap has turned out to be... What I had thot of, n what has happened...
And if this is what dat is going to happen, then I have no choice, but to say, I quit...

3rdly, u know y I'm going at this pace... I have to catch up wid my studies... But wud make sure, that it does not do injustice to my story...
I did not want to leave the story hanging in between for an unknown period, n so m trying to put it together...

If u people really feel, this is going very badly, plz let me know, I shall give it a hold and relaunch this chap + the other chaps left, some other time...

As for DB's reaction, how do u think, wud a Grand mom react to know about the sufferings of her Granddaughter? And what do u think shud she react to the family of the abuser?

As for ending my fic, it wud go a lil beyond post marriage, n ofcourse, a few years later... May be 2 or 3 more parts...

Actually, when I had written the first chap of this fic, I had thot to make it a one or two-three shot fic... But, I thot it to be unjust... Coz that fic demanded few more chaps... So by luck, this is the situation...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Azeen , really beautiful chapter ...So finally Ashni confessed their love for each other ...So what next ? Marriage ...hayee hayee

next chapter main kuch romance b dikhado yaar , eagerly waiting for next chapter ...

I am loving this FF ...keep writing 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
very well written, thanks for updating in spite of your laptop issues. Hope to see the next update soon. You must be real good with the phone to type that much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nidhi recording the confession and listening to it contnsly is the highlight...
I feel that DB will not support their relation for some time as Nidhi had trouble from the same family...
Get a hint that you may be going towards their seperation...πŸ˜”
Enjoyed their confession and Ashu's parents support...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

thanx for the update aazu...πŸ˜ƒ

-- u r welcome zerry...πŸ˜ƒ

it was awesome...

loved every bit of it...πŸ€—
-- Thanks dear...

i am extremely busy right now...but will give you a nice detailed review later for sure...πŸ˜ƒ


-- Will definitely wait for ur review then... A nice one haan... πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saibanu

Wow Azeen , reallybeautifulchapter ...

-- Thanks so much sai...

SofinallyAshni confessed their love for each other ...

-- Yup love confessions done... πŸ˜ƒ

So what next ? Marriage ...hayee hayee

--Marriage??? Dont u think uske pehle, they have to face Db & CV? πŸ˜ƒ


next chapter main kuch romance b dikhado yaar ,

-- Abhi toh separtion aa raha hai... πŸ˜ƒ

eagerly waiting for next chapter ...

-- Lets see, when I can update next... Its a task writing the update with this cell phone...


I am loving this FF ...keep writing😊


-- Thank u yaar... This is such a big comliment, that my fic is loved by u... πŸ˜ƒ

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