xmy fan-ficx :x-Pyar Kiya To Darna Kya-x

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like this program so i wanted to write a fan-fic. it about Yuvraj falling in love with Krishna.

here i go....

It starts off with the song "Ragu pati ragav raja ramโ€ฆ patit pavan sita
ram" Krishna doing the pooja at a mandir. she is wearing a beauitful pink sari (like this but the blouse is the same as to what she wears in the program)

krishna: ramji ho sake a to meri ..... apa to jaante hai ke main apa se ka meri dil kya chahta Hai.

she takes the gods blessing and goes. at the Raichand house everyone is having breakfast but yuvraj isn't at the breakfast table.

papa: yeh yuvraj kya hai

krishna: papa woh yuv.. yuvraj

papa:hmmm, ja ke hota yuvraj, i tell him to make it quick and bring him with u

krishna goes to wake yuvraj, she taps him on the shoulder but he just morns and says go away dollie. krishna gives a ๐Ÿ˜• look and says it's me krishna

yuvi: krishna tum yaha

krishna: papa ni

yuvi: i no(he quickly takes out his clothes, goes in his bathroom brushes his teeth and has his showers but in the rush he forgets his clothes and comes wrapped around in a towel)

krishna quickly turns around

yuvi: kya (he looks down and is๐Ÿ˜ณ) woh main

krishna: it's ok, get ready fast.

he gets ready fast but one of his button on his shirts is lose

yuvi:krishna dekho meri button

krishna turns around and says don't worry main ho na

she gets a sewing box and comes close to yuvi and and sews the button on she is nearly done when the winds blows really fast becasue yuvi's window was opened and her hair gets in her faces where she is holding the needle in one hand and taking her hair away from her face from the other hand. yuvi just watching krishna and with out planing gets his hand near her face and removes her hair away from her face

krishna looks at yuvi with a shocked look

krishna is feeling a bit weird when yuvi figure touch her face. they are both staring at each other when they hear ouch.

krishna figure was bleeding becasue the needle poked her when they were staring at each other. yuvi is shocked and qucikly takes her figures and puts it in his mouth and tries to stop more blood from coming. krishna just looks at yuvi and he justs looks at her when suddenly she frees her figure and goes and yuvi is just smiling and goes behind her๐Ÿ˜›

hope u like the fan-fic so far๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 17 years ago
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LOls nice... very descriptive (love the saree.) GOod job w/ the FF... continue!
I absolutely LOVE reading fan fics.... I usually to to KAA forum for FFs (I am
also writting one for it).. they have soo many!!! People are soo talented...
some of the FF are better than the acutal shows! ( HOw I wish Ekta, Sandip,
or whoever is the creative head of the shows, would take idea's from the
FF's)

Continue soon ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice!!!
Great job yaar!!!
Keep it going! Waiting for more!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is really gud! ๐Ÿ˜Š plz keep up the gud work ill be waiting for more...finally there will be something gud to respond to in this forum ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...gud job keep it up ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thx today i am going to my cousin house, so i will be writing it there ,
bye take care
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Posted: 17 years ago
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realli nice yaar cont soon

Sobia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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is it happiend in serial or its ur mind consept
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi ..i really love ur fan fic..but pls do continue.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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soz i couldn't rite becasue my cousin becasue i forgot my password so i couldn't logo in ๐Ÿ˜ญ

but thx a lot for all the comments

Edited by pink_09 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so i couldn't rite more i forgot my password so i couldn't logo in ๐Ÿ˜ญ but i am gonna continue now ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜›

At the breakfast table VJ was really upset with yuvraj but didn't say it because of Krishna, but announces that the whole family is going on holiday so 3 weeks to Goa, and staying in our house there everyone was so happy. VJ tells everyone to do there now cause they are leaving today.

But Aditya says he has to go for a business meeting to London so he can't come, VJ doesn't mind and says best of luck



Everyone is doing there packing, Krishna gets up to get something and passes yash and Tara's room, she sees them having romance she feels really sad and remembers Abhay. Everyone comes out and our sweet Krishna comes out wearing a salwar kameez like this with earrings like these once but blue and this necklace in round and blue

She is looking so gorgeous, everyone was staring at her specially yuvi. who drops his bag and then quickly picks it up. He is looking so handsome, cute and very, very hot in black hoodie and jeans. Tara is wearing a pink sari, yash is wearing top and jeans, his daughter is wearing a top and shorts, udhay is wearing a top, a jacket, and jeans, kabir is wearing a top and jeans and VJ what he usually wears. Yuvi really wants to take Krishna on his bike but he knows that it isn't happening cause yash bro is taking Tara Bhabhi, udhay and kabir and if papa's car he available Krishna is going to go with him, so he seeks out and punches the tires. everyone puts there stuff in yash's car. Everyone is going in the car .

expect for yuvi who's is going on his bike, but there is a little problem when the driver starts VJ car he finds out the tires are punches, so yash asks Krishna and papa to come with them.

Yash: papa, Krishna ya ha bate jaho

They come towards the car but find there only one person can sit

Krishna: papa aap ya hai bate te a main auto se a cha ho ge

Papa: Na beta, tum yuvi ke bike ma a chalo, ose ke saat

Krishna: papaโ€ฆ mainโ€ฆ woh

Papa: yuvi tum he koi aitraaz to Na ha

Yuvi: aitraaz โ€ฆ na (in his mind) aitraaz or mujhe, Na papa yeh to main chahta ta

Papa:thx beta

Yuvi: (in his head) well thanks tu mujhe God ka bolna chahiye he gave me such a good chance and made my plan successful

Krishna goes towards yuvi and sits behind him everyone drives of on the other hand yuvi is scaring Krishna by ridding the bike really fast so she can hold him from the back but Krishna is just screaming like hell.

Krishna: yuviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dhera calao

Yuvi: agar it na he daar laah raha hai to mujhe pecha see

pakar lo

Krishna: kya

Yuvi: come one Krishna, main dhera na calao ga

Krishna: mainโ€ฆ.

Krishna knew she didn't have a choose so she puts her arms around yuvi and holds him tight (they are still on the bike when Krishna says she is hungry)

Krishna: main ne kuch

Yuvi: I know, tum he bokha laagi ha, ha na

Krishna: ha

They go to this dhaba, sit down, Krishna asks wot he wants to eat he says he doesn't mind, so she order Gobi Aloo, roti, curry and rice. The food comes and yuvi makes a face and says there is so much oil

Yuvi: Krishna look at this, there is too much oil, I am not eating this

Krishna: yuviโ€ฆ(she breaks a roti piece dips it in Gobi Aloo and feeds yuvi and then mixes the curry rice and feeds him that to, yuvi just stares but when he tastes the curry he screams.

Yuvi: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, hot, hot, water

Krishna: lo (krishna gives him water and he calms down)

Then yuvi eats by himself and Krishna feeds Krishna one roti piece dripped in the curry. After they finish yuvi pays, they walk toward the bike, sit, and go after a little while the both feel thirsty and see a man selling coconut juice and luckily there were to left they quickly hurry but then someone comes before and takes one coconut juice. Yuvi takes the last coconut juice and pays and gives it to Krishna

Krishna: tum

Yuvi: Na, tum lo

Krishna knew yuvi was really thirsty so she asks the man for another straw and says to yuvi if he doesn't mind they can share. Yuvi agrees

Yuvi: (in his mind) thanks tu mujhe God ka bolna chahiye he gave me such a good chance again, laag raha ke god mujhe Kush hai

Yuvi and Krishna are just looking at each other after the juice finishes they get on the bike and go. They are nearly there on the Krishna it really tried and falls a sleep holding yuvi, they reach before everyone, and yuvi doesn't know Krishna is asleep.

Yuvi: Krishna, we are here, Krishnaโ€ฆ. Krishna

He turns around and finds she is asleep, he keeps staring at her, he didn't want to wake her up cause she looked so beautiful. Then he see she isn't comfortable so he picks her up opens the house door and lays her down on a sofa , but when he is about to get up he sees there chains are tangled, he un trangls them and sits near her looking at her, he was about to touch her forehead when he hears the door bell. He goes to open it and is shocked.

pink_09๐Ÿ˜›


Edited by pink_09 - 17 years ago
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