I maybe the only person disappointed with today's episode.
Jhoota phenk ke mat mat maarna.. pehele suno
See...
Krishna again escapes Aryaman's doubts by saying something stupid and Mohan faints.
Some random scene with Ananya
Then Krishana asks Mohan's Forgiveness.. mohan does not accept them. He says she broke his trust today.
Next day.. Vrat talk. Aryaman don't want his mother to take any vrat. Krishna and Ananya take vrat.
Sid plots something by calling Prof. Anuradha to house.
Aryaman Stares at Krishna.
The problem is was the pacing.
They should have emphasized on Mohan and Krishna's pain a little more.
Krishna broke Mohan's TRUST!! This is a VERY BIG thing. This is huge.
Give them some time mop around. Make Krishna talk to her mother while looking at sky. Make her say that she hurt mohan for the first time. Make Mohan cry remembering Krishna leaving him alone with the Baba.
That was a big moment.. treat it as that.
And don't make Krishna forget all this next day itself.
Make her look sad... Uninterested in this whole vrat thing. Make her look worried or thoughtful while getting ready. Her mind should be filled with Mohan's pain.
That should have been natural
If it was me.. I would have cut the unnecessary Ananya scene and shifted the Sid plotting scene for the next episode. I would also have cut the vrat discussion by making Krishna just nod her head and go away.
Aryaman staring... looks good but still feels forced. But chodo.. I'll allow it for TRP.
But yaar.. Phirse Aryaman ko White diya??? baaki saare colours kaha gaye?? Iss bande ke paas kitne white shirts hai??
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