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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

This part is about Shlok and Rach

Later that day

Rach is stuck on what to wear and her clothes are all over the room then Noori comes in and is shocked to see what state the room is in

Noori: uh rach come with me hun

Rach: where

Noori: chalo

Then rach follows Noori to her room and Noori opens her cupboard

Noori: lets see what would suit you

Then Noori takes out a blue skirt and red top

Noori: go and try this on

Rach: ok

Then Noori looks for some shoes for her to wear then Noori finds her black heel's

Noori: perfect

Then rach comes out

Noori: hun u look awesome here wear these heels

Then rach takes her slippers off and wears the heals

Rach: so how do I look

Noori: perfect leekan there is still something not right


Rach: what

Noori: this

Then Noori walks up to rach from behind and takes off her hair clip and Rach shakes her hair and smiles

Rach: thanks yaar

Anjali enters

Anjali: ooooo someone is looking good for someone

Rach: anj stop it

Anjali: I am jus kidding paagli

Rach: so u and kavya huh whats happened to yug

Anjali: shut up I am still wid yug anyways Noori and Shaurya look close

Noori: kya matlaab

Meanwhile at the Nanda's

Shlok has just got out of the shower and is about to get changed while getting changed Shaurya comes in

Shaurya: wow bro looking good rach will be impressed

Then shlok applies some aftershave and Shaurya coughs

Shaurya: not to much bro (he coughs)

Shlok: hey Kavya can I borrow your car please mine is too dirty

Kavya: sure the keys
are downstairs on the coffee table

Shlok: thanks bro

Shlok then makes his way downstairs and then nitya ses him and asks him where he is going all dressed up

Nitya: arre shlok where are u going all dressed up

Shlok: uh I am just going clubbing with some friends mama

Shaurya: jhootha (he coughs)

Shlok eyes widen when he looks at Shaurya

Shlok: um ok mama bye

Nitya: bye beta

Nitya begins to think

Nitya thinking: what is he hiding from me

Then shlok makes his way to the rach's apartment

15 mins later shlok reaches the apartment and rings the doorbell

Noori answers it

Noori: wow shlok looking hot come in

Shlok: thanks Noori

Then rach comes out of the bedroom and Shlok's eyes widen

Shlok: wow u look hot rach I mean u look beautiful

Rach: thanks shlok
shall we go

Shlok: yeh bye girls

Anjali and Noori: bye

Then shlok opens the car door for rach

Rach: thanks

Then they make their way to the restaurant and then shlok puts the radio on and the song bindas from Krishna cottage comes on

Bindas.....aahhaaa
Meri yeh masti mere yeh nakhre
pagal deewane hum bikhre bikhre
dartha hai kya mujhko tu chakre
aur main bholo tujhe kyaa

Bindas aahhaa bindas aahhaaa
Meethe zeher pe theeki nazar hum dono hai bindas
Bindas aahhaa bindas aahhaaa

Shlok and Rach arrive at Ram's Restaurant, the waiter offers to take Rach's jacket but Shlok refuses and does it himself, he then hands over his and Rach's jackets and ask for a table for two.
They both sit at the table

Waiter - would you like anything to drink sir?

Shlok - Rach what do you want to drink?

Rach - Ill take an orange juice

Shlok - nahin Rach yeh nahin chalega, (to the waiter) could you bring a bottle of champagne and two glasses please.

The waiter goes and comes back with the drinks. He is about to pour the drinks but Shlok says he will take care of it, Shlok is very nervous and when he hands Rach her drink, he accidently spills it on her clothes

Shlok - oh my god, Rach im so sorry!!! woh, main......

Rach - Shlok yeh tumne kya kiya!!!! yeh mere capre nahin, yeh Noori ke hai, shes going to kill me, uufffffff Shlok tum bhi na, wait here im going to the ladies room

Rach walks off in anger, Shlok is upset and begins to think

Shlok thinking - You idiot Shlok, itne nervous kyun ho tum, Rach kitni gusseh ho gayi agar voh chaali gayi tho.....nahin ill make sure she dont leave the rest of the night will be perfect

Rach comes back

Rach - kya soch rahe hai Shlok?

Shlok - kuch nahin, im so sorry Rach, main thoda sa nervous ho gaya tha, it wont happen again, forgive me?

Rach looks at Shlok as he pulls his cute face

Rach - teek hai main is bar tumhe maaf kardi, lekin agli bar dekhle na.....

The rest of the night goes off without a hitch, Shlok takes Rach home

Shlok - i had a great time.....voh main soch raha tha ke......

Rach - Shall we go out again this weekend? yehi poochna charahe the?

Shlok laughs - haan yehi poochna tha, ok ill see you at college tommorow

Shlok begins to walk to his car

Rach - Shlok rookoo

Shlok - kya hua??

Rach - mujhe goodnight kiss nahin doge??

Shlok smiles and gives Rach a goodnight kiss and drives home feeling happy.
Edited by rachandeep - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
aaaaaaaaw 😳 its so cute. 😳, just luving it. 😛 wow its too good. u have to continue. waiting for the nest part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
omg omg rach and noori dats soooo goood keep it up luv ya hunz
xxxx 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
wow guys the fan fic is really getting gud!!!! keep it going 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
fanfic is really cute!!! can't stop smiling 😃 😃 😃 😛 great job 👏
plzzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Oh that's really good.
Plz write soon.
Can't wait for the next episode.
Write fast.
And good job,
keep going.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
me n noori bak with some more!!!!!!! 😉

Humko Tumse Pyar Hai – Continued

This part is about Noori and Shaurya

Meanwhile at college Noori and Rach are talking about the school dance competition

Rach: so Noori you excited about competition

Noori: half and half

Rach: kya matlaab

Noori: Ok one half is jumping for joy the other isn't because I have to dance with Shaurya

Rach: aw jaan it won't be that bad

Noori: are you serious he might not even turn up for rehearsals

Rach: aw jaan come on anyways yeh choro who is going to choose the songs

Noori and Shaurya: I am

Then Noori looks up and sees Shaurya with Shlok and rolls her eyes

Rach: hey Shlok um come sit

Shlok: thanks

Shlok sits by Rach and puts arm around her

Noori then walks off

Rach: Noori rooko tho uff yeh larki Na

Shaurya then Smirks

Rach: what are you smirking about you two have to agree on a song I mean sir is letting u use the gym tonight

Shaurya: really

Rach: ya didn't u know that

Shaurya then begins to have a big grin on his face

Shaurya: I do now

Rach: don't get any funny idea's Shaurya Noori will go mad if u do anything

Shlok: Rach is right bro I wouldn't do anything that will make Noori angry and Hurt

Shaurya: kya matlaab

Rach: I will tell u there was this guy auska naam rohit tha and he made Noori very happy she even used to wear shawler kameez before

Shaurya: yeh right

Rach: shut up and listen then one day her eyes witnessed him get shot

Shaurya: KYA and u shlok u knew bro and didn't tell me

Shlok: so you can put her down, that's why didn't tell u

Rach: that's why she is like this and that's why she started wearing skirts and flirts with boys to hide her pain she acts that she doesn't miss him leekan I know she does at times

Shaurya then walks off

Shaurya thinking: no wonder she is so stubborn

*Later that day*

Noori is sat on her bed and takes out photo and looks at it and begins to cry and has a flash back

*FLASH BACK*

Noori: uff the film is going to start soon where is he? then when I phone he says I am coming jaanu

Then someone covers Noori eyes

Guy: guess who

Noori: haila uff hoo tum bhi na rohit

Noori smiles

Rohit: sorry I am late jaan as you can see traffic

Noori: chalo teek hai forgiven abh chale film shooro hoora hai

Rohit: what are we going to watch?

Noori: mere jeevan saathi

Rohit: oo I see

Noori: chalo

Rohit: pehle ik kiss doo nah

Noori: rohit tum bhi nah chalo aankhe band karo

Rohit closes his eyes and Noori then kisses rohit on the cheek

Noori: abh khush

Rohit: baas cheek phir

Noori: chalo

Then Noori and rohit make their way into the cinema and hold hands

3 hrs later

Rohit: uff itne long thi film

Noori: I know chalo abh restrauant chale ( she says while smiling)

Rohit: haan chalo wait ik baath baathao

Noori: bolo

Rohit: tum ajj bohot sexy laag rey hoo

Noori smiles

Then theirs a gun shot

Rohit's eyes widen and touches his back and there is blood on his hand

Noori is shocked

Noori: ROHIT!!!

Rohit then collapses to the ground

Noori: nahi tum mujhe nahi chor sakte I love you

Rohit: I love you too

Then rohit closes his eyes

Noori: ROHIT !!!

*Back in time*

Noori: ROHIT !!!

Then the doorbell continuously rings

Noori answers it and its Shaurya

Noori: tum aur yaha

Shaurya: why did you leave college at lunch for?

Noori: wasn't feeling well

Shaurya: oh ok abh chale we need to go and rehearse

Noori: I will just get changed

Shaurya: teek hai I will wait for u in the car

10 mins later

Noori: chalo

Then They make their way to the Gym

10 mins later They reach the gym

Then Noori and Shaurya begin to argue to which songs are better to rehearse to and shlok and rach see this and look at each other and smile

Noori: no ok not dus bahane that's only a guy singing ok

Shaurya: oh what then huh

Noori: what about um koi mil gaya

Shaurya: no way

Noori: you are just useless do u know that

Shaurya: oh shut up

Then Rach and shlok sneak in without Noori and Shaurya realizing they put a cd on and take the remote control and go to the corner and play the song

Noori and Shaurya are quiet and begin to look at each other smile

Noori and Shaurya: perfect

Noori: abh a romantic number um

Shaurya: how about mujhse shaadi karoge

Noori: oh my god that's not romantic you ahhhh just forget it

Then Rach skips the track and plays another song but this time its romantic

Noori: this one is better

Shaurya: I agree

Then Shaurya grabs Noori close to him in the moment

Noori: what are you doing?

Shaurya: uh

Noori: I think should go

Shaurya: um yeh ok then

To be continued.......

Kya Shaurya aur Noori kay beech pyar hoga.....ya sirf dushmani
Edited by rachandeep - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
wow! nice hanger
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
di this is great!!!!!!
WOW!!!!!
dats soo cute
luv ya loadz
xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
wow this is really gr8!im really enjoying it cant wait for the next one!!
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