Humko Tumse Pyar Hai PT27 Finale - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Wowwwww that is sooo creative! Babes you should definitely go ahead with it. Veryyy interesting. Love it and very different!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
awww sis dis iz well good
if u want i wud luv to help ya
gr8 stori keep up da good work
and carri on wiv it
luv ya sis
xxx 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Great story...good job

👏

hey i have an idea, why don't you try something like this:
Yug makes a hasty move on Anjali and Kavya sees--anjali is saying "Stop, stop", so kavya goes and saves her!!
Just something to give Anjali and Kavya a boost to get together.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
hey noori...awesome story...but like the others, plz get kavya and anjali together..maye do wut kavyanjalifan06 said r kill yug in some accident or sumthin n cuz anjali is in shock she gets married to kavya and she eventually starts liking him...i dunno....just a suggestion...gud luck 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
It's a really good start but I also
want Kavya and Anjali together.
I like Sharon's idea about
killing Yug. But please continue
the story. It's good.
Edited by Jasleen - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Shaurya, Shlok, Maya and Tina reach college and make their way to class

Girl 1: hey Shaurya looking hot

Shaurya: hey babe thanks see u later

Girl 2: hey Sexy Want come over mine tonight my parents are going to Mumbai

Shaurya: yeh sure why not we will go to the blue lounge club be ready by ten

Tina walks ahead

Maya: Tina rooko tho

Shlok: Shaurya tum bhi nah yaar

Shaurya: kya kiya Maine (trying to say totally innocently)

Shlok: chalo

Meanwhile Maya talks to Tina

Maya: kya howa tina jealous

Tina: what paagal hogaye hoo kya me jealous whatever

Maya: Tina

Then Tina sees Rohit ( the bad boy) staring and waving and walk up to him

Maya: Tina get back here now

Tina: hey Rohit

Rohit: hey Sweetie

Tina: wana go to the blue lounge tonight

Rohit: sure babe what time

Tina: 10 o clock

Then Rohit Grabs Tina close to him

Tina: rohit tum bhi nah (she giggles)

Maya: haila Shaurya and Shlok are coming oh no

Shlok: what the hell is Tina doing with Rohit?

Then Tina sees Shaurya and pretends to giggle at rohit's bad jokes

Tina: tum bhi nah rohit you are so funny

Shaurya walks up to Tina

Shaurya: chalo Tina

Grabs her arm

Tina: let go Shaurya

Then gets Shaurya's hand off her arm and gives a angry look and walks inside the classroom

Maya: Shaurya yeh tumne kya kiya Tina rooko tho

Meanwhile at university

Anjali and Kavya are in business class but Kavya is too busy looking at Anjali to concentrate

Professor Mehra: Kavya

Kavya busy looking at Anjali

Professor Mehra then walks up to Kavya

Professor Mehra: Kavya come to desk plz

Kavya: yes sir

Professor Mehra: ajj kaal tum studies main concentrate nahi karte please kavya if u want to pass concentrate

Kavya: sorry sir I will concentrate

Kavya makes his way to his seat

Anjali: kya howa Kavya

Kavya: kuch nahi bas sir was saying I should concentrate on my work
Anjali: Kavya tum bhi nah

Kavya smiles and continues to look at Anjali while she is scolding him and begins to day dream and in the day dream him and Anjali are sing and dance to my Dil goes mmmmmm

5 mins later

Anjali: kavya hello

Then she clicks her fingers

Kavya: sorry Anjali what

Anjali: that's very bad Kavya u weren't listening to me

Kavya holds his ears

Kavya: sorry Anjali

Anjali: it's ok

Then Yug enters

Anjali: hey jaan

Yug: hey sweetie

Kavya rolls his eyes

Yug: hey kavya you and my girlfriend alone hope u didn't get up to anything

Anjali: shut up yug tum bhi na sorry kavya ignore him

Kavya: its ok I will be back

Then Kavya is by the door and thinks

Kavya thinking: kaash tum mere hote Anjali phir tum bohot khush mere saath hoge


Meanwhile at College

Maya is playing Basketball with shlok

Shlok: hahahah look at me I am best I am going to win
Maya: oh yeh

Then Maya trips Shlok over and maya grabs the ball and kicks but it goes through the College window

Maya: oh shit I am in trouble

Shlok: maya tumne yeh kya kiya

Then the principle comes out and starts shouting at Maya

Principle: yeh tumne kya kiya Maya you have broken the glass window

Shlok: principle it was my fault not maya's

Principle: Shlok come to my office now

Shlok makes his way to the principle's office and maya walks off

Maya: oh well at least he blamed himself


To be continued

Luv ya

Luv Noori

Tell me what u think I need to know plzzzzzzzzz I need to know weather to continue or not????????????????
Edited by nooreenuk - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
cool gud going keep it up ! can you post the next one soon ! waiting !
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
Great! i can't wait for the next episode.

Thanks

Esti aunty

Edited by esti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
its was good noori, 😃
well done 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
noori!!!!! great, gud job..plz keep going 👏
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