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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mchopra

Loved it..

and holidays na ..so daily updates no weekley come on girl i will die in suspense otherwise..and i will leav a note saying Parminder From italy killed me..๐Ÿ˜›

hey Shreya๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— thanks for liking it๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†I know ki tum aise hi kahogi๐Ÿ˜ณ....don't worry will update and you will be happy and u'll not leave the note๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: blossom18

Hey Parm sorry d las one 2 comment๐Ÿ˜†I was off fo 2 days
Ok Its really amazing dat U hav strtd ur FF one month b4 kmh 2 start...
D Poem is really cute Parm
D plot n storyline amazing ur use of words n d description abt d whole thng is juz prfct girl........๐Ÿ‘
Great job n a gud FF
Well if u say d ending is not sad den we r relieved๐Ÿ˜†Ekta ki tarah twists daalne mein U Guys r no less๐Ÿ˜†
D suspense is killin us not lyk d fans writin in bloodletters fo Karan๐Ÿคฃ
Ok now enough of my lecture update soon

Congo on dis new FF๐Ÿฅณ

hey Aanchal๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— OMG....such a bbeautiful comment for my FF...thanks a lot...me feeling very well n glad
that you like the storyline.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†you are so funny...thanks again
will update soon๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: kmhfan4destiny

ya Parm i 2 am waiting 2 know wats gonna happen next!! ure updates always captivates us!! Hats off 2 u!!

๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณthanks Krithika๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: aartifarty

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OMG Parm ... its amazing ... i have never read an FF because i am too lazy to read it, but this was really good !! ... i love your literature ! .. its amazing ... Keep it up !!

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Aarti๐Ÿค—
thanks for the words...mean a ton๐Ÿ˜ณ
happy you liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
owwow!! Gal...hw do u manage 2 write so well...the vry 1st epi touched ma heart...wat a beautiful concept..neva heard befor...ouch! Arohi in coma!! Hmmm...
loved every bit of it...luv yo style..continue soon Parm...
Anya is indeed a beautiful name...

P.S:wil read your Edwella ff sumtym later..wen m free..๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: shibz

owwow!! Gal...hw do u manage 2 write so well...the vry 1st epi touched ma heart...wat a beautiful concept..neva heard befor...ouch! Arohi in coma!! Hmmm...
loved every bit of it...luv yo style..continue soon Parm...
Anya is indeed a beautiful name...

P.S:wil read your Edwella ff sumtym later..wen m free..๐Ÿ˜ณ

hey shibz๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— thanks a lot for the words..mean a lotEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
sure, no problems...good luck with papers๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

hey people

I've written the updates of the FF but before updating
as usual my
*Hugs&Blessing* for all those who appreciated my work
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Happy you like the plot and the storyline
NOTES:
WHEN a character spoke, I'll use his/her initials of name so few example
AP: arjun punj
AS: arohi sharma [I know that Arjuhi is married but I can't write AP even for her]
NM: natasha mittal
A: anya
ecc...๐Ÿ˜†
now here the updates
read
enjoy
and comment๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Tere bina

A trill came from the door. Arjun quickly slipped the amulet in the pages of the book and put it on the table. Go to the door and see a female figure.
Her black hair are tied in a queue. She wore a dress from pink and yellow colours to white.
He knew her. She's a nice looking person but with a great inner strength. Once they were together, but he knew that he had not feel anything that he felt towards Arohi.


NM: Hello Arjun!.
AP: Natasha?!
NM: Can I enter or should I stay out here?
AP: Oh yes. Come.
Arjun dodged to pass her. He was surprised, really surprised. Natasha has not visited her for four years. The incident had ruined many things. Now nobody had the courage to get too close to Arjun. No one felt able to support the situation.

Natasha, meanwhile, was sitting on a chair and seemed to be tensed. Arjun noticed how she was playing with the fingers.
AP: I see you're engaged.
Natasha immediately looked at her hand, she felt embarrassed, but also felt guilty.
AP: I'm surprised I haven't got your invitation to the wedding. You don't want me, eh?
NM: The date isn't been fixed.
AP: How?
NM: Arjun, listen. I don't feel well getting married without Arohi, she's my best friend. How will I do without her? We thought together all the ritual...puja,sangeet, mendhi...everything.

Arjun didn't answer, he felt that the situation was very tense, he could not do anything. He was helpless to fate.
NM: Abhay is understanding. He has indulged as this was my desire, but we know what is reality. Arohi is ...
AP: Arohi is not dead!
Arjun shouted, struggling against the reality was harsh. But he couldn't give, he had stand firm for his daughter.
NM: You know perfectly well that I am the first that I would like Arohi were here with us right now, but doctors have said ..
AP: I don't care what the doctors say! And if you come here for this reason it is better that you go.
NM: Arjun!!! You know that I say this, only for your own good. If Arohi were here, she would like to see you happy. You left the tennis, and now you works with your father .. but what are you doing?

AP: I am trying to support my family. Do you think I could afford to be a tennis player in the world? I had to travel to tournaments, train myself for long time. It is not possible.
NM: Yes, instead. We are here, your friends. Why in these 4 years you have never asked for help?
AP: I can do alone. I'm okay. I do not need your sympathy.
F: It is not sympathy.
AP: What's that? After four years without you ever been here, while you kept in contact by telephone only once a year and now after four years you want to help? If this is not compassion, tell you what it is.
NM: Why don't you understand? It was not easy for us to bear all this!
AP: It was not easy? You speak to me that it wasn't easy for you? I grew up a daughter so far, in the same house where I lived with Arohi for a year, I have in front of my eyes the reincarnation of Arohi and you speak to me that it was not easy for you?
NM: Arjun, calm down.
AP: For me it was not easy! Not for you.


Arjun felt a heavy heart, he felt anger, frustration, fear, and a terrible sense of guilt.
For that incident they felt burdened by guilt that was mild or severe.

Natasha got up and walked towards the door.
With her back turned toward him, Natasha felt calmer and less tense. Perhaps now the situation was less difficult than before.
NM: Tomorrow will you go to meet her ?
AP: Yes
NM: and Anya?
AP: You know that's not a place for children. Especially for Anya.
NM: In fact. If you want I can stay with her and you can go to meet Arohi?

AP: No. There's no need. Tomorrow Anya will go to the school dance.
NM: Well, bye. Call me if you need help.

Arjun nodded, as she saw the profile of Natasha disappear.

He stood motionless for several minutes. It was almost in a meditative state. He was hating himself . His eyes rested on the book he had on the table, he didn't think even a moment, took him and threw it violently against the wall.
How often he imagined that Arohi was there, but everything was just the fruit of his imagination. It was not the reality.
To awake from his thoughts, there was the voice of a child.
A: Dad, are you here?
AP: Oh yes. Did I wake you?
A: Actually, yes.
AP: Sorry. Let's go back to bed.
A: No. No. Alone I'm not going back.
A: Okay, Anya. Come on.
Arjun took the little Anya and took her in her bed. He rolled up the blankets and sat down a bit with her.
A: Dad. Tell me a story.
AP: Oh, please. Another story of your infinite playlist no.
A: You're bad, Dad!
AP: Sorry it is in the DNA. So if I am bad, you are bad.
A: This not true. I'm very good. I look like the mom, right na?

AP: Yes, very much.
A: Daddy, tell me about the accident.
Anya looked at him with her determined eyes. It was not a request or a proposal, she wanted to know. Anya's gaze conveyed a sense of thrill. He knew those eyes, those were her eyes. He knew that to this gaze he could not say no. He must speak only the truth. A painful truth, a truth that could not be silenced as well.

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Edited by -Parm- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
So in the next update, you will know what happened.
take the tissue next time if u are sentimental lol
take care n enjoy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Hey Parm loved it.......aww made me cry๐Ÿ˜ญ
U wrote it beautifully๐Ÿ‘
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