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Posted: 14 years ago
first really so sorry for such a late reading..ok chill this is the 3rd time i read it once the say u sent...once when i updayed my ff and once today..but didnt comment i was like comment kar diya toh dooobara nahi aaongi aur agar aaj nahi kiya toh parm mujhe peetegi..hehe..
as uusal beautiful specially this

Aati thi sapno mein ek murat

Khayalon mein se bhi zaada koobsurat

Lipti hui anchal mein

Ghum ho jati thi ek pal mein

Dekhte hi use dil ki dhardkan tham gayi

Mujhe laga' mere armano ki manzil mil gayi

Shama banke uss ne andhero ko roshan kiya

Titlion ki tarah mere jeevan ko rango se bardiya

Rab ne jise mere liye banaye hai

Waqt ne jise mujhse milaye hai

Dil mein basi woh ek tasveer to tum

Mere kwabon ki tabeer ho tum

i mean these lines were just out of the world..gosh girl bacome a poet and a writer ur books will sell faster than HP..
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg omg πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ wat a ending parm...u left me speechless...yay arjuhi got toegther...they will always stay together cuz they r meant to be together forever....loved the ending and the awesomeee poems aww wish this never ended
and soo soo sorriee for the late reply 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
no words Parm...jus soo beautiful.......................... It ended on a best note...not jus happybut vry happy...awwee..not jus daughter but grand daughter as well...❀️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiyaa

Parm loved the ending. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ i really liked all the songs and shayari between Arjun's lines😊 perfect endingπŸ‘πŸΌ

hey ArshiπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— thankies a lot for the words...mean a lotSmile
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

first really so sorry for such a late reading..ok chill this is the 3rd time i read it once the say u sent...once when i updayed my ff and once today..but didnt comment i was like comment kar diya toh dooobara nahi aaongi aur agar aaj nahi kiya toh parm mujhe peetegi..hehe..

as uusal beautiful specially this

Aati thi sapno mein ek murat

Khayalon mein se bhi zaada koobsurat

Lipti hui anchal mein

Ghum ho jati thi ek pal mein

Dekhte hi use dil ki dhardkan tham gayi

Mujhe laga' mere armano ki manzil mil gayi

Shama banke uss ne andhero ko roshan kiya

Titlion ki tarah mere jeevan ko rango se bardiya

Rab ne jise mere liye banaye hai

Waqt ne jise mujhse milaye hai

Dil mein basi woh ek tasveer to tum

Mere kwabon ki tabeer ho tum

i mean these lines were just out of the world..gosh girl bacome a poet and a writer ur books will sell faster than HP..

Hey Miss ChopraπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
😳😳😳😳Omggg.....itne sare compliments mere liye....thankies a lot jaaniπŸ€—
mean a lot...Don't mind that u reply late I know u are busy with exams😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalii...xXx

omg omg omg πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ wat a ending parm...u left me speechless...yay arjuhi got toegther...they will always stay together cuz they r meant to be together forever....loved the ending and the awesomeee poems aww wish this never ended

and soo soo sorriee for the late reply 😳

hey AnjaliπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— Thnkis a ton dear..gald you liked the ending...I'm soo happyπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shibz

no words Parm...jus soo beautiful.......................... It ended on a best note...not jus happybut vry happy...awwee..not jus daughter but grand daughter as well...❀️

hey ShibzπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— thankies a lot dear..means a ton for me 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome story!!!! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Parm!! im new 2 ure FFs and ive jus got 2 say:
U ROK BUD!!!!! U DEFINITELY ROK!!
ure updates r reeeely awsum and sooooo touching tat ive truly bekom a deewani of them!!!! theyre sooooooo awsum and ure shayaris r reeeely v.nice!!
HATS OFF 2 U!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...thanks a lot dear..means a ton for meeee...Thankssss
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