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CHAPTER 19

The next day, the gang reached Juneja mansion to be greeted by Lalit, Gayatri, Balraj, and Teji. Meher had asked her parents to come to Juneja mansion that morning, so her and Preet could share the good news.

Prem hasn't mentioned the pool incident to Heer and so Heer never brought it up either. It was probably for the best to forget the whole thing anyways, Heer convinced herself. Nothing really happened between them...so there was nothing to talk about. Reminding herself that, Heer stepped out of the van and was greeted by her parents.

Balraj greeted both his daughters. When he hugged Heer, however, he held on a little tighter. It was definitely an adjustment not having Heer live in Mann house anymore...and he missed his eldest daughter.

Heer, understanding her father's emotions, held on to him as well. When Balraj pulled back, he studied Heer's face. She looked better...happier wasn't quite the term...but better. Heer looked more like herself then she had in the last month.

"How are you beta?" Balraj asked. This time, Heer genuinely smiled back, "I'm doing good papa." Heer replied. And it was the truth. She was going to be alright.

Balraj knew his daughter well and knew when she was speaking the truth. He smiled, feeling the tension from the last month lessen from his shoulders.

Once the bags were unloaded, the whole family settled into the dining room for some lunch. Preet caught Meher's eye and decided that now was the best time to make the announcement.

"Can I have everyone's attention?" Preet asked, politely. When he saw the four adults turn to look at him, he felt like a little kid and started getting nervous.

"Woh...ummm...I...Meher...Meher has an announcement!" Preet exclaimed, chickening out. Meher's jaw dropped at being thrown into the lion's den by her fianc.

"Uhhh..." Meher stammered, now seeing the four elders starting at her curiously.

Prem coughed into his hand, trying to mask his chuckle. "Prem...shhh..." Heer whispered, trying to hold the laughter in herself.

Prem bit his lip and turned his head so he was facing away from the elders, trying to stay calm and suppress his laughter.

"Arre koi kuch bataye gaa bhi!" Lalit exclaimed, annoyed that no one was speaking up.

Taking pity on Preet and Meher's pale faces, Heer spoke up, "Papa...Preet and Meher are engaged. He proposed when we were at the farmhouse." Heer announced.

There was complete silence around the dining table. The elders all exchanged looks. Preet gave Prem a desperate look and Prem slightly held up his hand, assuring him that everything will be alright.

Gayatri stood up and started walking away. "Arre...tum kaha chali?" Lalit asked his wife.

"Mithai lane..." Gayatri replied, "...mujhe meri doosri beti jo mill gayi" She said, smiling.

The tension in the air dissolved and the elders all broke out in laughter. "This is great news beta!" Balraj exclaimed and engulfed Meher in a hug, followed by Teji.

Just as excited, Lalit engulfed Preet in a hug as well, feeling extremely happy for his youngest son. When Gayatri came back with the sweets, they all sweetened each other's mouths at the good news. This moment was filled with so much excitement and happiness. The Manns and the Junejas truly were a family now...in every which way.

Heer stood to the side and observed her family. There was so much love there. After Manmeet left on their wedding day, things have been very somber between the Manns and the Junejas. This moment held pure joy and Heer wished that these two families always stayed like this.

When Heer felt a presence next to her, she turned to see Prem standing there, a smile on his handsome face. He was looking at the scene unfold before them as well.

"Aaj itne dino badh ghar mein kushi ka mahaul phir se hoga...hai naa?" Prem asked, still looking the elders exchange sweets with Preet and Meher, grinning at the scene.

Heer looked at Prem's profile, taken a little by surprise. He managed to say exactly what she was thinking. Heer then looked back at their family and smiled, nodding in agreement with Prem.

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A few days later, Gayatri asked Heer to come to her bed chambers. Heer knocked on the large wooden doors, and when she heard Gayatri's voice, she entered the large bedroom suite.

Gayatri smiled, seeing Heer walk in. Heer has been smiling more lately. She didn't know what magic Prem did...but Heer was finally going back to her old self. Heer talked more during their family meals, she laughed at Preet's antics, and helped Gayatri with the house duties as much as she could. It was wonderful to see. Gayatri had a feeling that even Heer didn't realize how beautifully she was making her place in the Juneja household.

"You called me Gayatri maa?" Heer asked, entering further into the room.

"Yes beta...come in...have a seat." Gayatri said gesturing to the bed as she walked towards the joined sitting room.

Heer sat down and patiently waited for Gayatri to come back, curious as to why she was called. She then saw Gayatri walk back into the bedroom holding a thaali, the contents of it covered in a red velvet cloth.

"What is this?" Heer asked, curiously.

Gayatri sat down and placed the thaali between them, removing the velvet cloth to reveal different kinds of sweets, dried fruits, nuts, other snacks, decorated bangles, and a sari. Heer traced a finger over the delicate sari material.

"Yeh sab kya hai Gayatri maa?" Heer asked again, trying to figure out why she was receiving this.

"Kal karva chaut hai..." Gayatri said simply.

Heer blinked in surprise. Was Gayatri maa expecting her to fast for Prem tomorrow? Heer knew that karva chaut was an important day for married women...to pray for a long and healthy life for their husbands...but it was also no secret that Prem and her marriage wasn't like other marriages. They didn't share the same relationship other married couples shared.

Gayatri heard the questions and the hesitation in Heer's silence. Gayatri took the sari and placed on Heer's lap. "Yeh sargi hai..." Gayatri said, gently.

"Sargi?" Heer asked, confused as to what that is.

"Every mother-in-law gives sargi' to their daughter-in-law for karva chaut. Iss mein badaam hai...mithai...phal...kuch tohfe...aur saath saath...dher saara pyaar." Gayatri explained, her voice soothing.

When Heer stayed quiet, Gayatri continued, "Mein jaanti hoon...keh tumhara aur Prem ka rishta baaki logo ke tarah nahin hai...lekin karva chauth ek prathna hai...uss insaan ke liye...joh tumhare sabse kareeb hai."

Heer looked at Gayatri, though her voice was soft, her word held immense power. Was Prem the closest person to her right now? Heer remembered Prem hold her hand has he walked around the sacred fire, marrying her. She remembered his presence around her...never in her way...but always there...taking care of her. She remembered the moment he gave her the piano, somehow knowing that it was what she needed...to finally feel peace. And she started smiling again...all because of him. Heer swallowed, trying to keep the ball of tears down as she quietly listened.

Gayatri saw the emotions in Heer's eyes and tried to keep her own voice steady. "Prem aur tumhara rishta shayad pati patni ka naa ho...lekin tum dono ke beech aab dosti ka rishta ban gaya hai...ek aisa rishta...jo vishwas par tikka hai...uss dosti ke khatir...yeh vrath rak lo." Gayatri insisted gently.

Heer gave Gayatri a watery smile and wiped a tear that slipped from the corner of her eye. "Gayatri maa this isn't fair...you always give me gifts and then make me cry after." Heer said, trying to lighten the mood.

Gayatri laughed. Understanding exactly what Heer meant by that, Gayatri gently placed the thaali on Heer's waiting hands. As Heer walked out, Gayatri looked after her daughter-in-law's retreating back. She knew that Heer always did the right thing...and her faith in Heer wasn't broken tonight either.

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CHAPTER 20

The next morning, the Junajas rose early to prep for the karva chaut party taking place in the evening.

"Make sure the flowers are completely fresh." Gayatri instructed the gardener. She turned and started walking towards the kitchen.

Heer came out of the kitchen in that exact moment with a tray of laddoos. "Gayatri maa...I finished making these." Heer said, showing Gayatri the tray.

Gayatri looked down at the tray of laddoos, giving it an approving look. "Lekin maa...I wasn't able to taste it...see how it is..." Heer said, a little nervous. These laddoos will be served to the guests later, and due to her fasting, she was unable to taste the final product.

Understanding Heer's dilemma, Gayatria called out for Preet. "Preet!" Gayatri summoned. Preet entered the room, "Haan Mom...you called?" Preet asked, curious.

In that same moment, Prem entered the room as well, finished with his previous task and wanting to check in with Gayatri for any other jobs needing attention.

"Preet beta...try these laddoos. Heer wants to see if they taste ok." Gayatri instructed, pointing to the tray Heer was holding.

"Why can't Heer taste them herself?" Prem asked innocently, not putting two and two together.

Gayatri chuckled at her son's silly question. "Aaj Heer ka bhi vrath hai budhu...she can't eat or drink anything." Gayatri informed her son.

Prem's eyes shot to Heer, surprised. Heer lowered her gaze, feeling a little embarrassed. Preet, on the other hand, tried to hide his grin by biting his lip.

"Gayatri!" Lalit called out. Hearing her husband calling her, Gayatri turned to Preet, "Preet check to see if the laddoos are good to go...I'll be right back." With that said, Gayatri made her exit.

Prem kept staring at Heer, shocked at the news. He just assumed Heer wouldn't keep a karva chaut vrath because they didn't share the same relationship as a normal couple. It didn't make sense to him for Heer to fast for him. But the idea touched him...that she would do this for him.

Heer looked up and saw Prem still staring at her, his eyes holding unanswered questions. She felt a blush creep up her cheeks and looked down again, avoiding eye contact. Her heart beat was quickening and she tried her best to ignore it.

Preet bumped his shoulder with Prem's in a playful manner, a grin plastered on his face. Prem shook out of his trance and glared at his younger brother for teasing him.

Preet cleared his throat and approached Heer. He took a laddoo and bit into it, feeling the item dissolve in his mouth.

"It's good Heer di..." Preet complemented. "So...you really haven't eaten anything since last night?" Preet asked, wanting to add fuel to the very evident fire burning between Prem and Heer.

Heer looked up at Preet, pleading with her eyes to drop the subject. Preet continued to grin mischievously, "Should I start calling you Heer Bhabi now?" Preet teased further. Heer's jaw dropped a little at the title, not sure how to react. Bhabi...even though the term was said as a joke...there was something so sweet in the title.

Very conveniently, Lalit called Preet's name in that moment. Heer let out a breath of relief when Preet took another laddoo and walked away, letting the subject drop. As Preet passed Prem, he gave Prem a subtle wink which Heer missed, and left the room leaving Prem and Heer alone.

Avoiding eye contact with Prem, Heer started walking out herself. She passed Prem and was almost at the door when Prem's deep voice stopped her.

"Heer." Prem simply said. Her name sounding so different this time. It's like he breathed her name...and it sent shivers down her spine.

Heer didn't turn, but turned her head slightly indicating that she was listening.

"Tumne sach mein karva chaut ka vrath rakkha?" Prem asked.

Heer hesitated. She could lie...and end this subject here. "Haan..." Heer felt herself reply truthfully.

Prem felt his heart give one loud thump. "Kyon?" He asked, a little breathless at the revelation.

Heer didn't answer. She felt her cheeks starting to burn again and felt it best to leave. Prem watched Heer's retreating back. When the doors closed behind Heer, he kept staring at it. A stunning smile then split across his face. In that moment, he couldn't describe the joy he felt, so he continued to smile at the closed doors.

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Juneja mansion was filled with guests again. It was a common occurrence for the Junejas to throw parties. The mansion was always filled with dancing and laughter and today's celebration was for karva chaut.

Ladies dressed in pretty outfits filled the house. Some were sitting down and chit chatting. Some were putting on mehendi, some sang songs, or were doing various other things. Their husbands accompanied them and used this time to catch up with old buddies or make new friends. There was a couple more hours left for the moon to rise and the ladies did everything they could to keep busy and not think about their hunger.

Prem was dressed in a black pathani kurta with the sleeves rolled to the elbows, revealing his strong arms. He made sure guests were taken care of and gave a few instructions to the one of the servants.

"Prem!" Prem turned at the sound of his named and saw Ashlesha approach him. "Hey have you seen Heer?" Ashlesha asked. Prem looked around the room and noticed that, indeed, Heer was nowhere to be seen.

"I know she was getting dressed...she should be down any min..." Prem's response faded. He happened to look at the staircase and there she was.

Prem took a sharp intake of breath when Heer made her way down the staircase, dressed in a lace pink sari. Her hair fell in soft waves around her. She did something with her eyes...it made them look bigger...darker...deeper. The sari was...sexy...the lace revealed enough to make Prem's blood turn hot...but it left enough covered for the imagination as well. She looked...Prem couldn't find the right words...he was simply speechless.

"Wow Heer! You look stunning!" Ashlesha claimed as Heer walked down to them, completely obliviously to the effect she was having on Prem.

Heer smiled, "Thank you..." She said. Heer then turned to see Prem staring at her, and her nervousness returned. His eyes were always so expressive. It's like he was speaking a thousand words without really saying them to her.

Heer felt herself blushing again as butterflies scattered in her stomach. Why was she feeling like this? It's like every time Prem looked at her like that...she felt like she was the only person in the room. What changed between them?

Their moment was interrupted when Teji called out to Heer. "Heer beta! Come here!" Giving Prem one final glance, Heer walked over to Teji, with Ashlesha following her. Teji was seated with Gayatri, Meher, and few other ladies putting on mehendi.

Heer took a seat next to Teji and a girl started to apply mehendi on Heer's hands. "Ache se laga na...Heer ki pehli karva chaut hai..." Teji said to the girl, proudly looking at Heer. Heer smiled at her mother and let the girl do her magic.

Heer, Meher, and Ashlesha were engrossed in a conversation when Prem and Preet approached the group of ladies.

Gayatri saw her two sons approaching and she automatically smiled. "All good?" Gayatri asked her sons.

"Yes mom...everything is running smoothly." Preet replied and sat next to Heer, admiring her mehendi.

Prem decided to take a seat next to Gayatri on the floor. He stole glances at Heer and carried on a conversation here and there with some other people sitting in the group. Prem saw Preet say something to Heer and Heer laughed. She then touched Preet's nose playfully, leaving a trace of mehendi on it.

The scene brought a smile to Prem's face. That's when he heard his mother say, "It's nice to see Heer laugh so openly." Gayatri said to Teji. Overwhelmed, Teji simply nodded, agreeing.

"Patha nahin...farmhouse mein kya hua tha ke Heer ki hassi laut ayi hai" Gayatri contemplated. Heer, Meher, and Ashlesha exchanged glances and started giggling.

Prem and Preet look away, embarrassed because they knew the girls were remembering their lizard incident.

"Mama...Heer didi ki hassi ek chipkali ke vajaa se laut ayi hai" Meher teased, causing Preet to cough nervously and Prem's eyes bulging out.

"Meher..." Prem said in a calm voice. Meher refrained from saying any more, never the one to go against her Prem bhaiya.

But Heer was a different story. "Yes Gayatri maa...did you know how dangerous lizards are? I mean they must be if some people are so scared of it." Heer said, teasingly, getting a playful twinkle in her eyes.

Prem raised his eyebrows. "Heer..." Prem said in a warning tone. Heer simple stuck out chin in a rebellious gesture, showing that she wasn't scared.

"Will someone tell us what actually happened?" Gayatri asked, not being able to take the suspense any longer.

"Nothing Gayatri maa...just...both of your sons are terrified of lizards." Heer replied casually.

Preet hid behind Meher, hiding his embarrassed face and Prem's jaw dropped at Heer as Teji and Gayatri busted out laughing.

"Heer!" Prem exclaimed, "Stop it! Or else..."

"Or else what?" Heer cut Prem off, " Waise toh college mein bara hero banthe ho...lekin chipkali seh itna darr? Gayatri maa I couldn't help but laugh!" Heer continued her story, completely ignoring Prem's warnings. Everyone around her was laughing but Preet and Prem.

He looked mortified as the ladies laughed at the story. "You are so dead!" Prem shrieked, jumping up from his seated position on the floor.

Realizing what Prem was about to do, Heer yelped and ran, with Prem in hot pursuit behind her.

Heer laughed as she dodged Prem's arms and ran up the stairs. "Heer!" Prem yelled after her. He reached out to grab her again and Heer managed to dodge him again. Heer didn't know where her feet were taking her, she just focused on out smarting Prem.

The two childhood friends found themselves in one of the balconies that wrapped around the Juneja mansion. It was already dark out and the only lights in this part of the house were the diyas burning. It was the just the two of them in this part of the house and Heer's laughter bounced off the dark walls.

"Heer! I'm going to kill you freckle face!" Prem yelled, tried to grab her again and again, she dodged him. His words, however, held no fire. He was grinning too, trying to get a hold of Heer.

"You have to catch me first chicken legs!" Heer retaliated, and ran around a chair avoiding Prem.

Prem anticipated this move and reached out to grab Heer's shoulder. He got her! Maybe it was the wrong timing...or he the way he grabbed her...he wasn't sure...but he grabbed onto Heer's pallu instead and it came flying off her shoulder exposing her front, only covered in the halter neck blouse.

Heer gasped and turned in reflex, her arms automatically covering her front. Time stilled in that moment. The playful atmosphere stopped. The laughter that filled the air was gone.

The air shift around them. Heer closed her eyes, embarrassed at being so exposed. Her arms covered her front and she couldn't even pick up her fallen pallu due to her mehendi still being wet. She couldn't imagine what Prem was thinking at this moment...seeing her like this.

~ Yeh naram naram nasha hai, badhtajaaye...~

Heer felt it then. Prem approached her and stood behind her...so close that she felt the warmth of his body against her back. Heer's heart beat quickened...anticipating his move. But what he did surprised her.

~ Koi pyaar se ghungatiya deta udaaye...~

Prem reached around her and picked up her pallu. He then put it over her shoulder, his strong arms circled around her. Taking the pallu, Prem wrapped it around Heer, securing it and covering her exposed body.

~Ab baawra hua mann jag ho gaya hai roshan...~

He took her breath away...what he did was so extremely sweet...that he took her breath away. When Heer felt Prem take a step back, she turned to face him. She half expected Prem to pass some snide comment...look at her differently...say something vulgar to make light of the situation. But he remained quite. What Heer did notice, was that Prem stared into her eyes and didn't wonder down to her body. Not saying anything, Prem turned around and walked away.

The moon peaked out of the clouds and shone her light into the dark balcony. Heer stared after Prem. That simple gesture was worth more than a thousand words. In that moment...Prem gave her so much respect...and in that moment...she felt beautiful.

~Yeh nayee nayee suhaagan ho gayee hai teri jogan...~

When Heer faced Prem downstairs with the rest of the couples, she looked at his handsome face. She held up the mesh and looked up at the bright moon...and then stared at Prem through it.

Her heartbeat quickened just looking at him. What was this feeling? Why was he affecting her so?

When Prem reached for the water and held it to her lips, Heer sent a silent prayer to the Gods. She prayed for Prem. She didn't know what the future had in store for her or their marriage...but in that moment...she prayed for Prem's happiness. Heer then took a sip of the water and broke her fast. When she looked at Prem, she smiled at him, and that smile reached her eyes.

~Koi prem ki pujaarun mandir sajaaye...~

That night, after all the guests have left and the family retired to their own rooms, Heer stood in front of the vanity mirror and took off her bangles. She then worked on taking off her earrings.

Prem stood at the entrance of the room, leaning against the door frame admiring Heer. She was still wearing that sari. She removed one earring and worked on pulling off the other earring. Prem's fingers itched...what would Heer do if he removed that earring for her? Prem smirked at the idea.

Heer felt his presence before she saw him. She turned and saw Prem looking at her from the doorway. Prem pushed off the doorframe and entered their bedroom.

"Kya soch rahe ho?" Heer asked, trying to keep the atmosphere casual.

"Soch raha hoon..." Prem began, "...ke tumhare aur kya kya tevar dekhne ko milega." He said, his voice a little teasing.

Heer frowned, confused, "Kya matlab?" She asked.

Prem crossed his arms over his chest and looked Heer up and down. "Tumne aaj pehli baar sari pehni...yeh sari" Aditya said, indicating how sexy the lace looked on her slim form, "...aur tumne aaj vrath bhi rakha...mere liye..." Prem tilted his head in a flirty manner, "qtil karne ka irada hai kya?"

~Saiyyan...~

Heer felt her heart beat quicken. His voice was soft...husky...and his eyes held a naughty glint in them.

"Aisa kuch nahin hai..." Heer muttered, avoiding eye contact, "...Gayatri maa wanted me to fast...and this sari is a gift from her..." Heer explained.

Heer started to walk passed Prem and he held out his arm, blocking her path.

"Lekin tumne sach mein vrath rakha...aisa kyon?" Prem asked softly, "Kahin mujhe chaane toh nahin lagi tum?" He teased, a small smile on his lips.

Heer's eyes slightly widened and a blush crept up on her cheeks. "Kya...kya bol rahe ho tum? Aisa kuch nahin hain..." Heer stuttered, feeling her face burning up as she looked away.

Prem grinned at her reaction, "Tum sharmaati bhi ho? Yeh toh mein pehli baar dekh raha hoon..." Prem continued to tease, loving every bit of the effect he was having on Heer.

"Prem...tum pagal ho." Heer breathed out, trying to brush him off. She walked around Prem and made her way to the bathroom to change when Prem's voice called out to her again.

"Heer." Prem simply said.

Heer stopped, she didn't turn, but she was listening. She then felt Prem walk up to her and lean over so he could whisper in her ear. "Agar qtil karna ho...toh zara dheere se...dekhna...uff bhi nahin karunga..." Prem whispered into her ear. His voice soft...his words silky smooth...his breath hot on her skin.

Heer walked away without looking back. Had she looked back, she would have seen the wicked smile on Prem's handsome face. She simply walked into the bathroom and leaned against the now closed door...her hand over her racing heart.

~Saiyyan...~

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IMPORTANT NOTE: the balcony scene where Prem picks up Heer's pallu is a scene from the show 'Tere Liye". Harshad played a very similar scene in that show and the fanfic scene was inspired from the show, I of course added my own twist to it to match this fanfic. So all rights for the balcony scene goes to the writers of Tere Liye.

Lastly, "qtil agar karna ho, toh karna dheere se" is song lyrics to "Jitni Daafa" from Parmanu. So credits to that line goes to the lyricist of that song.

Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter! please leave comments and thank you for supporting!
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#53

Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Nice update enjoyed reading
Thanks for giving us lengthy update
Good progress in prem relationship
Want to see the tom and Jerry type of prem heer back
Really enjoyed reading it the most
Pls continue soon eagerly waiting

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thank you so much for reading!!!! it truly means alot! yes their relationship is for sure changing...stay tuned to see if the tom and jerry fights return or not 😉
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Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti

Wowww finally u posted and that too 4 chapters together👏👏 really felt bad for Heer,,,she has become a lifeless body😭😭 but love the way Prem was trying to make her smile😳 finally she talked something...this is the first step to the progress of their relationship...eagerly waiting for next chapters...plz post soon.



hahahaha i'm glad you enjoyed it! and yes...heer is hurting...but don't worry...prem hai na...😉 stay tuned for more! and thank you so much for reading this and commenting...truly means alot
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Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti

Very very nice update. Really happy for Heer as she not only smiled but also laughed wholeheartedly.

Awww Prem and Preet are scared of lizard😛 actually I am also scared of lizard or in general any of the reptiles😕

Poor Preet sab se maar khata hai😆

Continue soon... eagerly waiting

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i'm glad you liked it! i wanted to build up to heer slowing returning to her old self...so i'm happy that you liked that part where heer finally smiles and laughs. ew no one likes lizards...so i think you and i are on the same boat with that one
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Originally posted by: PRIME1

Waiting for PH progress but don't bring M soon.waiting for next. TY



stay tuned yaar! don't worry...prem and heer's romance is finally going to take off...stay tuned for more!
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Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti

Wowww dear it was beautiful...first two chapters together and then the mare's giving birth to the foal. The understanding between Premeer was so beautiful... truly meant for each other. And then the pool scene😳 (I am blushing) it was Soo intimate passionate yet romantic ...awsm update...post soon.

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im so happy you liked these parts! they were so fun to write! 😃 yes i wantes to show heer can also support prem when needed...its not all from prem's side...so i'm glad you liked that scene.

hahahaha i knew readers will enjoy the pool scene...prem shirtless period is enjoyable lol lol...thank you for being such a loyal readers!
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Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Nice update enjoyed reading pls continue soon eagerly waiting for next update
Prem heer r coming close
Like to know what happens next
Who's going to confess first
Pls continue soon

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yes! prem and heer are slowly starting to come closer! are you like the pace of the story? i like building a relationship instead of rushing things...so i hope the pace is alright with the readers. hmm you have to stay tuned to see who confesses first 😉 thank you for being a loyal reader and always commenting
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Nice update truly enjoyed reading pls continue soon
I was waiting for the update and u updated it
Every scene was written in a proper way
I always enjoy reading this story
Plsss
Continue soon
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Beautiful update dear...very very nice. Heer and Prem both felt some strong feelings towards each other but couldn't recognize. Hope they will get the answers soon.
The karva chauth was so amazingly written. Heer had fasted for Prem. And the balcony scene was a pure Bliss to read.

P.S.- I didn't watch Tere liye so I didn't know it. For me the scene was of PremEer written by you.

Thanks for the pm...update soon
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