Hello guys...thank you so much for your wonderful responses...here is the first part of my story...enjoy reading.
Premeer SS
Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai
Part 1
It was a beautiful day in Ambala, a small town of Punjab...we could see the men of the houses in green fields and the women carrying the pitchers on their waists...some young girls are being seen playing with the swings that were hanged on the fields.
A big house was shown...not much big by it's size...but by the heart of the people who lived in it.
"Teji...Teji...suna tune?" (Teji...Teji...have you heard???")
A voice was heard from the house...it was the voice of the owner of the house...Balraj Maan.
"Ji kyun chillah rahe hain...Kya baat Hai?" (Why are you shouting? What's the matter?)... came the reply of a woman who is his wife.
Balraj(excited) : Are baat hi itni khusi ki hai k tu Meri Meri tarha chillane lage gi (It is the matter of so much joy that you also start shouting like me).
Teji : Achcha thik hai..bataye to. (Ok ok...first tell me).
Balraj : Apna Lali aa raha hai. (Our Lali is coming).
Teji(excited) : Kya...aap sach bol rahe hain? (What...are you telling the truth?)
Balraj : Haan Haan bilkul sach...sach Teji...mujhe to yakeen nhi aa raha Hai k it saalon baad Lali apna wada pura karne yaha aa raha hai. (Yes yes...I am saying the truth only. Really Teji, I can't believe that Lali is coming here to fulfill his promise after so long year).
Teji(wiping the tears of happiness) : Main na kehti thi, humare Heer k liye uparwale ne sifr Prem ko banaya hai to unko to milna hi tha. Main babaji ka shukriya ada karke aati hu. (Didn't I tell that God has only made Prem for our Heer...I'll be back after thanking God).
Teji went to thank God for her daughter's happiness. Here Balraj was instructing Meher to clean the rooms where the Juneja's will stay.
Meher : Bauji, ab bas bhi kare na. Main thak gayi hu...aur bhuk bhi lagi hai bohut.(Bauji...plzzz stop for now...I am tired...and hungry also).
Balraj smiled and told..." Are beta wo log itne salon baad India aa rahe hai...main nahi chahta ke unke swagat mein koi bhi kami ho...waise Heer kaha Hain?" (Beta they are coming back to India after so many years...I don't want any problem in their welcome...BTW where's Heer?)
Meher : Heer didi chacha ji aur Chachi ji k ghar gayi hai...raat ko aayengi. (Heer didi has gone to uncle and aunt's house...she will be back in the night).
Balraj : Are aise kaise...beta wo log to shaam 5 baje Tak aa jayenge. Humein unko lene jana hai station.Tu jaldi usko phone karke wapas bula humein 3 baje nikalna hai. (How's that possible beta? They will reach here around 5 in the evening. We'll have to go and receive them from the station. Call her and tell her to come back early).
Meher : Okk.
Saying this she went to call Heer but unfortunately or fortunately Aslesha answered the phone.
Ashlesha : Hello.
Meher : Hello...Ash di...Heer di ko bulana Zara...baat krni Hai. (Ash di...call Heer didi...I want to talk to her).
Ashlesha : Hi Meher...kaisi Hai.
Meher : I am okk di...Heer didi ko bulao na...(Call Heer didi).
Ashlesha : Wo to kuch kaam kar rahi hai...mujhe bata...main bata dungi. (She is doing some work...tell me...i'll inform her).
Meher(excitedly) : Wo actually kya hai na Lali chachu aa rahe hain Canada se apni family ke saath. Prem jiju bhi aa rahe hain. (Wo actually Lali chachu is coming from Canada with his family. Prem jiju is also coming)...the last part she said in a whisper.
Aslesha(super excited) : Wow Meher... that's great news...but..
Meher : But what Ash di?
Ashlesha : Kyun na hum unko bataye hi na...I mean wo jab jayengi waha to khud hi unko dekh lenge; aur humein bhi do premeeon ko milane ka mauka mil jayega. Kya kehti Hai? (What if we don't tell her...I mean she herself will see him when she will reach there; and also we'll have the opportunity to unite to love birds).
Meher : Wah wah Ash di...you are awesome. Superb idea!!! Aaisa hi karenge (that's what we'll do).
Ash : Okk chal bye.
Meher : Bye...but bhulna mat...5 baje wo aa rahe hain. (Don't forget... they'll reach on 5).
Ash : Off course...ok bye.
Meher : Bye...(monologue)...now this will be fun...(smiled naughtily)
5 in the Evening
Ambala Station
The Maan family was eagerly waiting for the Juneja's to step out of the train.
"Oye Ballu...kaisa hai mere yaar", a loud cheerful voice was heard at the back of Balraj.
He turned and found his best friend cum brother Lalit Juneja was standing with a cheerful smile on his face. As soon as the face was registered in his mind both hug each other tightly. Gayatri also met Teji and hug each other. Lalit introduced his children to Balraj's family and vice versa.
Lalit : Are Ballu...apni Heer putter kaha hain? (Ballu where's our daughter Heer).
Balraj : Wo Balwant ke yaha gayi hai...aati hi hogi. Chal hum ghar chalte hain. (She has gone to Balwant's house...she must be on her way. Come let's leave for the home).
They were about to come out of the station when Lalit noticed that Prem and Preet were not with them.
Lalit : Gayatri ye Prem aur Preet kaha hain? (Gayatri...where is Prem and Preet?)
G3 : Yehi par to the...kahan gaye? (They were here only...now where have they gone).
She looked here and there and found two boys were laughing and walking towards them...she smiled and pointed at them...
G3 : There...
Everybody looked around and saw one of them was really a chatterbox. He was just speaking non-stop and the other one was a real shy type. He was just smiling at his talks. Both are equally handsome. They came near them and touched Balraj and Teji's feet as Lalit introduced them.
The one who is shy was none other than our Prem and obviously the chatterbox naughty one was Preet.
Balraj : God bless you both...okk now let's go.
They were heading towards the car but Prem's eyes were constantly looking for someone. He met Meher and by that he knew that she was not the one...the one whom his father had chosen for him to spend his entire life. He was off course not in love with her. I mean c'mon, his father had only told him one week ago so obviously not love but he wanted to meet that girl or at least see her once...but here... there's no sign of hers.
He sighed and got into the car.
Preet : PB...Kya soch rahe ho? (PB...what are you thinking?)
Prem(coming out of his trance) : No...no nothing.
Preet poked him at his stomach and gave a naughty smile. "I know..aap bhabhi ko dhund rahe ho na?" (You are searching for Bhabhi...right?)
Prem felt a bit embarrassed but he hide it and shook his head in disbelief."Preet"...Prem warned.
Preet smiled and put his earphone on...the rest of the journey went with silence.
The End.
Precap- Premeer first meeting
So here's the first part guyz...sorry there was no Premeer scene...from next part onwards there will start Premeer scenes and their journey towards love.
Do read this part and give your opinion...take care...bye.
Edited by Sunzz.Harshiti - 5 years ago
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