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woww awosome update I hope prem Heer ko samjha le ke ash ke bato me aa kar wo gulty feel na kare :( waiting for the next part
Prem will try but Heer can be difficult sometimes.Originally posted by: tarannum6
woww awosome update I hope prem Heer ko samjha le ke ash ke bato me aa kar wo gulty feel na kare :( waiting for the next part
Prem and Heer will have to have honest converasation between them. They often let other person come between them.ch 2 page 3
wow kya dialogues hai!😲ðŸ˜ðŸ˜•
Ash and g3 are smart villains who could easily fool Premeer.
Heer could in defense easily tell her - it's after Prem told her about the incident she got to know. Also it's Prem who told her where it is and Heer unable to believe him went inside to look.
Sure Heer should have investigated the whole affair on her own independently w/o using anyone esp g3 - who is her enemy.
I like the fact g3 exposed - don't really care if Js have celebration or not. Let me see what and how PH would react - are they gona use their brain or be fooled by Ash again.
I will update tomorrow promise.Originally posted by: tarannum6
waiting please update next part soon
Life is still beautiful with you Prem Heer SS
Chapter 3
Heer felt like she was crushing inside. She was initially very happy after hearing that there was nothing happened between Prem and Ash six years ago.
However, she instantly started to feel guilty when she realized that she left Prem six years ago without any reasons. She nourished hate in her heart for her Prem for six years for no reasons. She hide the truth about Chahat from Prem for six years. She thought she did a sin by doing that. She also was fooled by others very easily and showed her lack of trust to Prem.
She felt she somehow failed in her duties as lovers and wife. She should not trust Gayetri so blindly after she forced Prem to leave Heer earlier. But no she behaved like a fool and went to her.
She even could not explain to herself why she hated Prem so much in that six years , might be Prem was right she thought Prem as god like figure who could not make any mistake and when she thought she saw Prem to do something wrong she overreacted.
Her never ending love for Prem turned into never ending hate overnight. For six years she punished Prem, she let Prem to suffer every night. She let Prem to see the hate she had for him after six years. Despite claiming to love him most in the world she failed to see pain, repent in those chocolate eyes of Prem.
Yes her relationship was bad with Prem but it still did not justify the way she kept their daughter away from her father. Prem was right when he told her at the end of the day father was still father to a child and it did not matter whether he was good or bad person. She let her selfish hatred to come between a father and daughter.
May be Ash was right she thought she did not have any moral right to give lecture to anyone about relationship. Ash's every words in Heer's opinion were reminding Heer about her failures in relationship. Yes, Ash was right she had a habit of trying to be mahan and sometimes she unintentionally hurt her relationship with Prem in doing that.
She should not forget that despite having other relationships her relationship with Prem should have got highest priority for her. How could she so easily believe anything against Prem. How she could believe that Sneha was Prem's daughter without any solid proofs when Sneha's facial feature did not match with Prem or Ash.
Heer was feeling like cursing herself for leaving Prem six years ago. She did not know how she would now face Prem. How she would be able to see those eyes of Prem without feeling guilty.
In Heer's opinion, Prem could have done so much better than she could. According to Heer another girl might be able to love Prem more, might be another girl in her face would have fight for her relationship more strongly than her. Might be another girl would not give so much pain to Prem.
She did not know what she would do now. In her opinion, she was guilty and unworthy of Prem's love. She did not have courage to ask forgiveness from Prem because according to her what she did was unforgivable. She knew in her heart that Prem would forgive her easily as he loved her so much. Nevertheless, Heer did not know whether she could forgive herself for her mistakes.
Without anyone, noticing Heer left the place.
Prem on the other hand felt so much relieved when he heard that, nothing happen between him and Ash. He could not believe his ears. Despite Prem forgave him , in his mind Prem still felt guilty for his supposed mistake in six years ago. He was greatful to Heer for forgiving him for that mistake and giving him second chance. His Heer had great heart as he did not know what he would do if he was in her place. He felt greatly relieved when he learned that, Sneha was not his child. He knew that even the dna test said that Sneha was his daughter Heer would have still accept him.
Heer had such a big heart and love for him. He sometimes thinks might be he did something good in his previous lives to get such a great lover and wife in the form of Heer. He was not able to forgive himself completely till today when he thought in past that; he gave himself to another woman in his drunk state.
He felt corrupted, impure, and unworthy of Heer's life. For six years he repent for the sin but in his mind it was still not enough and when he got forgiveness from Heer he got new inspiration to live. However, the scar of his action in six years ago remain in his heart may be not so intense like past, it was still there. However, today he felt overjoyed, finally, the scar in his heart was healing; finally, he could forgive himself completely. He did not give himself to another woman he thought. He only belongs to his Heer just as if his Heer belongs to him.
He was feeling super upset when he learned the truth about his stepmother. He no longer called this woman as his mother after learning and realizing how she poisoned his mind against Heer, how she encouraged Heer to leave him. How she prevented Heer to comeback in his life, and most importantly how she went to a woman like Ash and offered her financial and other helps in return of breaking his and Heer's marriage. He felt disgusted about the whole affair . However, he still felt with Heer in his side he could face the whole world.
He decided that, he would start a new chapter with his Heer and Chahat and his other family members except for Gayetri. He no longer considers that woman as his family.
However, Prem got himself so engaged in his thoughts after learning his innocence he did not concentrate on most of the Ash's insane mutterings. When he came out of his thought and heard last few parts of Ash's insane speech, he felt like punching Ash into her face for badmouthing about his Heer. He calmed himself and was about to tell Ash shut up, he noticed that Heer was not here.
Prem felt panicked, he too left the house after giving an angry look to Ash.
"See you in court Ms. Maan. Harman told Ash.
Prem was running quickly in search of Heer and soon he saw her sitting in bench in the nearby park.
"Tum pagol ho gayi ho Heer itne raat ko eha par baithe rahi ho, chalo ya se. Prem told Heer. Heer did not reply but accept Prem's hand to leave the park.
Prem got worried after seeing the silence from Heer. Soon Harman also found them.
"Harman tu ghar jha, ghar mein kisiko bhi Mrs. Gayetri Juneja ki saach ke bare mein nahi batana. Aur koi puche to batana court ke hearing se pahele mein kutch ekela pal biana chahata hu tei bhabhi ke saat. Prem told Harman.
"Bhaiya aap kaha rahenge? Harman asked.
" Hamare Ludhina ki hotel mein. Prem informed him.
After leaving of Harman, Heer tightly hugged Prem and started crying in Prem's chest.Prem started to touch her hair to calm herself down.
"Kya ha hein Heer mujhe batao. Prem told Heer.
"Prem mein.. Heer again started crying, she was feeling increasingly difficult to control her emotion as she was fighting the feeling of gultiness.
"Thick hein hum pahele hotel ke room pe jate hein phir baat karte hein. Prem told Heer and holding her by the wasit.
After reaching, the hotel both Prem and Heer went to presidential suit.
After that, both Prem and Heer were sitting on the large bed.
"Heer kya hua batao mujhe, kya tum Ash ke kohi hoi baat ko leke upset ho? Prem asked Heer.
"Prem, Ash jo bhi kohhi uss mein sacchayi hein , meine tumhe chay saal bina koi gunah ke saaja di, tumko chahat se door rakhi, tumse nafrat ki aur mein khud tumhara payar samaj nahi paya Geet ka sahara lagi, mein tumhe chorke jane ke liye tayar ti maa ki baat shunke. Meine asani se Ash ke baat pe aagayi tumhe galat samajhi. Main tumhare payaar ke layek nahi hu Prem. Kisi aur ladki tumse mujh se jyada payaar karti. Mein tumhare gunahgar ho. Heer hide her face with her palms after saying that and she was crying continuously.
Prem's heart broke after seeing the love of his life in that state. He again cursed Ash for her insane mutterings. Prem cupped her face and remove tears from her face.
"Jante ho Heer tumhare har ek aasu mujhe taklif deti hein. Heer tumhe pata hein insan ke zindegi bahut bara nahi hota hein. Humne pahele hamare zindegi ki anmol chay saal kho chooki hein, aab hume aaghe barna chaiye aapne atit ko bhula kar. Meri aur Ash ke bitch kutch nahi hua ye to tumhe aaj pata chali lekin tumne to pahele ye nahi jante the. Phir bhi tumne to decide kiya thi ki hamare zindegi dubara se sharu karne ki aapne sari pichle baat bhula ke.
Mein bhi aaj ye hi kahera hu Heer bhul jao purane bato ko, Uss atit ko yaad karne ka koi mayne nahi hein jo hume taklif deti hein. Hume bas aapne aaj aur aanewala kaal ke bare mein sochna chaiye.
Heer hamare bitch jo kutch galatfami hui uskeliye mein bhi to zimmadar ho. Meine aapne sautle maa ki baat sunkar tumse door ho gaya tha, unke tumhare kilaf har baat ko bina kutch janne aur samjhne koshish na karke andhe ke tarah yakeen kiya. Tumhare payar pe shaq kiya.
Ha Heer tum jab mujhe chor kar chale gayi thi mujhe bahut taklif hui lekin mein tumhara halat samaj sakti hu , ye bhi samaj sakti hu tumhe kitna takleff hui jab tumhe laga mein kisi aur aurkat ke saat. Ha Heer tumhare aakhon mein mere liye nafrat dek kar mujhe accha nahi laga lekin mein janta tha tumhare uss nafrat ki piche tab bhi mere liye payyar thi.
Ha Prem Juneja jo ek pita hein wo iss baat ko bhul nahi payega ki tum Chahat ko mujhse door rakhi, lekin Prem Juneja jo Heer Juneja ka aashiq hein wo tumhare mujbari, insecurity, hurt feelings ko samaj sakta hein . Aab mein to bas kush ho ki Chahat ko usse usska maa aur baap dono ka payar mil raha hein.
Ha mein tumse thoda upset hu ki tumne Mrs. Juneja ki ghatiya harkato bare mein mujhe nahi bataya. Lekin mein ye bhi samaj sakti hu ki tumne aisa kiya kyunki tum hamare pariwar ekata chati thi aur unko samman karti thi. Heer aab bas mein tumse sirf ek wada chathi hui ki jo bhi hogi uss ghar mein tum mujhe bataoge aur kisi bhi chease ko chupchap sahen nahi karoge.
Logone tumhare acchayi ka faida uthaya lekin iss liye tumhe khud ko doshi samaj ne koi jarurat nahi. Ye hamare zindegi ki ek seekh hain jo aage se humko aur bhi sabdhan kargega logo ke bare mein.
Tumne kaha kisi aur ladki mujhse tumse zyda payar kar sakti thi, iss jyda koi baat aur galat nahi ho sankti . Iss dunia mein koi bhi ladkee mujhe tumse jyda payaar nahi kar sakti hein,kyunki Heer Prem ka prateek hein aur Prem sabse zyda Heer mein samhaya hua hein. Bhagwan insan ko jodio mein bhej ti hein aur meri Jodi tum ho Heer. Tumne sirf mujhe hi nahi meri pariwar ko bhi dewanapan ki had tak payar ki, kitni kurbani di, kitni baar aapne aap ko dao pe lagayi.
Iss duniya mein kisi aur ladki mein tumhare jaise gun kaha. Heer tum ek baat acche tara se samaj lo Prem aur Heer ek hein aur hamari rishta sirf iss janam ki nahi balki har janam ki. Prem hugged Heer tightly after saying that.
After hearing that the way Prem was arguing on behalf of her she felt her heart got overwhelmed with love and respect for her husband. However, she still could not take away the feeling of guiltiness.
"Prem tum bahut acche ho aur bahut payar karte ho mujhe iss liye meri galtio ko najar andaj kar rahi ho itne asani se. Lekin Prem mein e tumhe bina kisi galti ki chay saal saja dei, lekin tum to mere galti hui hein ye bhi nahi mante ho. Heer told him in a low voice.
"Heer agar tumhe lagti hein tumse galti hui hein aur tumhe uska saja mujhse milna chaiye to tumhara saja ye hain kit um sare zindegi mere saat rahogi, sare zindegi tumse payaar karne dogi, har raat tumhare chahre dekne dogi sohone se pahele, har subha tumhare baal ko saat khel ne dogi job tum so rahe honge, sare zindegi mera kheyal rakhogi, mujhe datoge jab mein tie galat bandhunga, mere saat har saal honemoon jaoge. Prem told got himself emotional when he was talking with Heer.
"Prem ye tum mujhe saaja dera ho ya mujhe payar kar rahe ho. Heer smiled in her tears.
"Mere payar jhel na hi tumhare liye sabse bari saaja hein Heer. Prem told Heer.
"Agar saaja itna payara hein to mujhe pure zindegi ye saja manjoor hein. Heer hugged her husband tightly.
"Heer tum mere jine ka ehasas , mein tumhre bina adhura hu, aaj jab mein sunha mera aur Ash ke bitch kutch nahi hui, mein tumhe bata nahi paoonga mujhe kitna kushi hui. Tum mere zindegi ki paheli aur akhiri aurat ho, main sirf tumhari hu, Heer sirf tumhari. Prem told Heer in a loving voice.
"Mein janti hu Prem, kit um sirf meri ho, sirf meri jis tarah mein sirf tumhara hu. Heer told Heer.
"Humhare aatma ek hein, har musibat se ladke hamare payar aur bhi majboot hogaya hain. Kyunki hum jante hein shadiyo se chali aarhai hein duniya mein nafrate... Prem stopped his talking in mid way as Heer started to speak.
"Aur shadiyo tak rahegi dilo mein mohabbatein. Heer completed Prem's sentence.
Chapter end
Originally posted by: preciousrose26
It's such a lovely update I love it
Premeer scene were so lovely very well written.Waiting for next part.Pls update soon.
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