Fatima's Cozy Corner 3 - Final Update on Pg 114 :) - Page 9

Chit15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Thanks for pm

Superb update full of jealousy and love

The idea from 3 idiots was perfect for Viren's character

Loved the update

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: monaghosh
LOVELY,LOVED IT🤗PLZ UPDATE SOON

Thanks a lot Mona.

Really appreciate you taking the time out to comment on the story. 🤗

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Cutediary
Cute & interesting update...u write so beautifully...keep it up👏
Preet Meher chooo chweet😊

Thank you so much Sana. 🤗

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: sherma
Great oart.although i love meher but very irritated on her nw.i really want being jealous,n out of jealously declaring her fr preet.thnks fr pm,do cntinue soon

Oh Meher is jealous alright 😆

But is it enough to make her confess?

Let's see.

Thanks for reading and commenting dear 🤗

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Chit15
Thanks for pm
Superb update full of jealousy and love
The idea from 3 idiots was perfect for Viren's character
Loved the update

Thanks a lot for reading Chitra.

Yeah...I wanted Viren to look like a complete overbearing idiot just like the character in 3 idiots..so I kind of modeled him like that in this FF.

This update was basically supposed to give us an insight of what Preet is up against in terms of competition for Meher.

Yeah...both Preet and Meher are jealous of Viren and Ash 😆

But Meher is still adamant about marrying Viren 😳

Let's see what happens. 😛

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Monaghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

GREAT PEACE OF WRITING🤗UPDATE SOON

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Nikhad003

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Fatimaaa <3 I am so sorry for being this late, actually was very busy for Eid. Here I am.

This part was so much fun. Hmm, Preet and Meher both are getting jealous and this Viren uff -.- Money, money money, how cheap he is to even claim money from Veera. Shit. Preet and Meher you both are with two cartoons. Both of you need to be with homo sapiens. Get along with each other soon please.

I love you my Meet Soul Sister. Totally loved the update. Hugs and Kisses❤️🤗

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AASUS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

🤗 Woohoo

I was reading this in parts and forgetting what was above and then rechecked. Me the goofy girl ever.

😆

Page 11

Do I feel sorry for Meher ? Naaah not one bit. 🥳 She walked herself into this.

This scene so reminds me of Kis Desh where Heer knowingly gets trapped by Rishab in Jaisalmer. She didn't know the extent to what he'll do but she knew it was bad.

Preet's thoughts on head so like girls do isn't it? Didn't know guys also do that. I mean he acts like jealous girl would do. Although some of them were funny. 😆

Viren is quite umm something. Ya so full of himself. i didn't he is in medical profession.

Poor Gaurav - the part about accounting was like oh oh.

Viren thinks too highly of Meher - there is no wealth involved as far as her family is concerned but he seem to think she has. Where did he get this idea from ? or was he just praising in front of other ppl how influential or wealthy her background is.

I know he's so showing off about lot of things but this bit I didn't quite get. May be it's meant to be mysterious for readers. Dunno..

Preet's reply to Bauji's business partners or whomever was cool.

PB knowing what happened wants to really introduce Preet to other business ppl there.😲 or was he trying to save him from that older crowd? That was puzzling. I mean PB knows this is a shock for Preet - getting engaged I mean.

Dance of Ash Preet was fab 😎

oh wow so the two unwanted ppl got messed by waiter huh. What if really that guy's job gone - as Viren could really do that. hmm

Preet dancing with Meher and taking her somewhere. I'm guessing he's gona kiss her again lol.

or just gona inquire why she did what she did. If he asks he would just repeat all the infor again.

Actually looking back - I did enjoy the young group chat and planning to have another meeting suggested by Nihal.

That was fun part and I liked.

lob u Fatima ⭐️

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sana.harshiti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Cute update fatima

beautifully write up👏

Preet Meher always so cute 😳

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Nikhad003
Fatimaaa <3 I am so sorry for being this late, actually was very busy for Eid. Here I am.

This part was so much fun. Hmm, Preet and Meher both are getting jealous and this Viren uff -.- Money, money money, how cheap he is to even claim money from Veera. Shit. Preet and Meher you both are with two cartoons. Both of you need to be with homo sapiens. Get along with each other soon please.

I love you my Meet Soul Sister. Totally loved the update. Hugs and Kisses❤️🤗

I hope you had a great Eid Nikhad.

Yes...Met are jealous and you used the perfect wod...they are both with cartoons and should get their act together. 😆

Viren is cheap...all he think about is money. Meher doesn't really know him and was herself shocked by his behavior. 😆

Thanks for reading 🤗

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