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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Hi Fatima!!!!

Congratulations for the 3rd thread!!! It's party time. I wish you get many more threads like this and you keep on writing and writing and writing...

I hope you are doing great and fine and recovered fully. Though I am sure you are perfectly fine because the last 2 updates were the dhamaka updates of this FF.

You are just superb the level of intensity and the drama is just increasing with each passing update and that is actually making it all the more interesting. I have to admit that I was in love with Aadha Ishq and I thought that was the highest level of twist and turn one can read but then you gave jab we met which was a twist created by destiny in which the entire story from MEET meeting to falling in love to getting married and then meher getting kidnapped was made. But now this what should I tell.

This is like a hell lot twist and confusion. This story have everything and I don't know from where did you take inspiration but this story is like watching all kinds of Bollywood Movie in one go. You know what the amount of twist you have created in one story makers can make atleast ten movies out these 26 chapters of yours.

So coming to the last two updates let me try saying something about them even though I don't know what's happening lol...
After Daljeet's visit to the Maan the update started with preet having no clue about Meher's whereabouts and that very start confirmed my doubt that she have planned something big against them but still I was waiting for you to reveal it.

I was actually waiting for a time when Prem and preet would team up and try to do something for their business because I knew only they can do something and that's what exactly happened finally they did point out in the right direction and I am just waiting for the time when they actually find out everything and then things could start falling in place. For a change even Herman surprised me lol I know he was never a negative character but throughout the serial he had always been a spineless character for me but today he did stood by his brother not completely though but then he was not against him as well and was just trying to find a middle way for him and his father.

You know Fatima after watching the serial and reading your stories now I understand the character of preet so well that even though I cannot guess what twist you will bring but I can confidently say how preet will behave in a situation. That's the reason I knew that preet will never agree with Herman's idea of faking engagement and he did exactly the same and I was so happy. I knew how reluctantly he had agreed because he actually didn't have any choice given the circumstances that you have put him in lol.

When the party started and meher came there I knew something is wrong and when that idiot viren came along I understood what is wrong. Preet was so busy in trying to tell meher the truth that he did not had the time to look and think things through. So even kulraj met meher and as expected she liked her too.

So you actually thrower the bomb in this very update. Uff this daljeet when will she ever learn and mind her own business. She grabbed the opportunity of someone else's engagement and made meher and that jerk viren exchange ring and of that was not enough even ash made preet wear that stupid ring. I hated the hurt and shocked expression on preet's face. You know I seriously pity meher now in her attempt to do the right thing she is pushing everyone away from her and getting all alone. She is actually running away from those people who in real care for her be it Sam or Preet. I felt bad when Meher and Sam were arguing or rather meher was pushing her out of her life.

But the scene after that was epic and I can't thank you enough for giving us that scene which have kept my hopes still high. The way meher was talking to sam I had a feeling that she have completely given up and even if preet try she will not listen and that what exactly happened and when she got angrier I thought that preet is loosing this battle but then suddenly that kiss happened and out went meher's anger and her feelings came out with force. She knows she loves him and she can't resist him still she is fighting and I hope she give up this fight and give herself and preet a chance. I loved the last dialogue from preet that he doesn't care whose ring she is wearing but her heart belongs to him.

Fatima please give us some romantic moments without meher's denial because I was confused and I am still confused about them. I do see a ray of hope from preet's determination plus from the fact that now they are going to be alert with regards to the Rampals but still dying to see some sweet moments between them. Now I am seriously waiting how this story unfolds...



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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: monaghosh

SUPERB,COMPLETELY LOVED IT,PLZ UPDATE SOON


Thanks so much for appreciating Mona πŸ€—

Glad to see you back commenting on the Desh Forum again πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: AASUS

Happy Sunday πŸ€—


Hey Athisda πŸ€—

Ahem...madam ji...where's my feedback? 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hi Fatima!!!!

Congratulations for the 3rd thread!!! It's party time. I wish you get many more threads like this and you keep on writing and writing and writing...

Thank you Bhagyashree...you know honestly...with each story...I think this is going to be the last one...time for me to retire...so much things to do with work and family...and then I get another idea for a story...I still can't believe I'm writing a 3rd FF!...πŸ˜†


I hope you are doing great and fine and recovered fully. Though I am sure you are perfectly fine because the last 2 updates were the dhamaka updates of this FF.

Yes...I'm doing fine now...it took some time for the arm to heal...right arm...I'm right handed so I couldn't stop using it...but as long as I didn't lift anything with it...I was okay. Thanks for asking.


You are just superb the level of intensity and the drama is just increasing with each passing update and that is actually making it all the more interesting. I have to admit that I was in love with Aadha Ishq and I thought that was the highest level of twist and turn one can read but then you gave jab we met which was a twist created by destiny in which the entire story from MEET meeting to falling in love to getting married and then meher getting kidnapped was made. But now this what should I tell.

I don't think I could ever top Aadha Ishq...it's my favorite of all my writings...I wrote it at a time when my fandom for Meet was at its peak...and all my frustrations from other Meet writers having abandoned so many great writings just poured out in a well crafted story. Still, I try to make each subsequent story special and different in its own little way. 😳


This is like a hell lot twist and confusion. This story have everything and I don't know from where did you take inspiration but this story is like watching all kinds of Bollywood Movie in one go. You know what the amount of twist you have created in one story makers can make atleast ten movies out these 26 chapters of yours.

Really? πŸ˜† Well...I am filmy...🀣

Oh how I would love to have someone actually use one of my stories as a screen play And it would be a dream to see Sushant and Meher reprise heir roles

Where do the ideas come from? I don't know...you know I love Meet so much that each and every aspect of the characters and everything they went through, especially Preet is engraved in my mind. πŸ€“

To this day, when I watch or read something...I automatically imagine Meet in that situation...sometimes that is enough to spark and idea for a new story.

Once I do get an idea in my head...I just have to write it out otherwise it just keep on rolling around in my brain. The difficulty is actually finding the time to right. πŸ˜•


So coming to the last two updates let me try saying something about them even though I don't know what's happening lol...
After Daljeet's visit to the Maan the update started with preet having no clue about Meher's whereabouts and that very start confirmed my doubt that she have planned something big against them but still I was waiting for you to reveal it.

Ever since Daljeet found out about Preet being in love with Meher...we all knew this was coming.


I was actually waiting for a time when Prem and preet would team up and try to do something for their business because I knew only they can do something and that's what exactly happened finally they did point out in the right direction and I am just waiting for the time when they actually find out everything and then things could start falling in place. For a change even Herman surprised me lol I know he was never a negative character but throughout the serial he had always been a spineless character for me but today he did stood by his brother not completely though but then he was not against him as well and was just trying to find a middle way for him and his father.

The brothers are looking into things...but it will take some time...can't give too much away here, except that no one is an innocent...except for the characters you know are genuine...everyone is doing something for a reason. πŸ€”


You know Fatima after watching the serial and reading your stories now I understand the character of preet so well that even though I cannot guess what twist you will bring but I can confidently say how preet will behave in a situation. That's the reason I knew that preet will never agree with Herman's idea of faking engagement and he did exactly the same and I was so happy. I knew how reluctantly he had agreed because he actually didn't have any choice given the circumstances that you have put him in lol.

Yes...I didn't leave him with much choice did I? 😈


When the party started and meher came there I knew something is wrong and when that idiot viren came along I understood what is wrong. Preet was so busy in trying to tell meher the truth that he did not had the time to look and think things through. So even kulraj met meher and as expected she liked her too.

Yeah...Preet had no idea why Viren was there. Remember he had told Meher that if she came back to Delhi, he would assume she has accepted him. He was so happy to see her and wanted to explain to her that the announcement she would hear tonight would be just a temporary fix...but then she goes and gets engaged to Viren. 😲 Way to burst Preet's bubble.


So you actually thrower the bomb in this very update. Uff this daljeet when will she ever learn and mind her own business. She grabbed the opportunity of someone else's engagement and made meher and that jerk viren exchange ring and of that was not enough even ash made preet wear that stupid ring. I hated the hurt and shocked expression on preet's face. You know I seriously pity meher now in her attempt to do the right thing she is pushing everyone away from her and getting all alone. She is actually running away from those people who in real care for her be it Sam or Preet. I felt bad when Meher and Sam were arguing or rather meher was pushing her out of her life.

Meher is really caught between a rock and a hard place...no matter what she does...someone is going to be angry with her or hate her. 😭


But the scene after that was epic and I can't thank you enough for giving us that scene which have kept my hopes still high. The way meher was talking to sam I had a feeling that she have completely given up and even if preet try she will not listen and that what exactly happened and when she got angrier I thought that preet is loosing this battle but then suddenly that kiss happened and out went meher's anger and her feelings came out with force. She knows she loves him and she can't resist him still she is fighting and I hope she give up this fight and give herself and preet a chance. I loved the last dialogue from preet that he doesn't care whose ring she is wearing but her heart belongs to him.

Ah yes...kissing Meher is the only way Preet seems to be able to convince her that he knows she's lying about her feelings. And when he does kiss her...she can't help but respond...she is only human after all and there's a limit to how much she can deny the truth.

Fatima please give us some romantic moments without meher's denial because I was confused and I am still confused about them. I do see a ray of hope from preet's determination plus from the fact that now they are going to be alert with regards to the Rampals but still dying to see some sweet moments between them. Now I am seriously waiting how this story unfolds...

Abhi to story climax tak bhi nahin ponchee πŸ˜† All I can say is that a lot of Meet scenes are coming up...will they be romantic or not...let's see...πŸ˜†


Thanks so much Bhagyashree for your feedback...I really look forward to it each and every time..

Thanks for appreciating everything and being a loyal reader...It's friends like you that keep me going. πŸ€—

But yaar...update pe like button to press kar do πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
hehe Fatima ur talking like Indian ladies πŸ˜† hehe

Happy Teacher's day - you set a great example in various ways in our forum. πŸ€— We learned a lot and I'm sure in future we will too.πŸ€— You're a blessing without a doubt. Muwah
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: AASUS

hehe Fatima ur talking like Indian ladies πŸ˜† hehe

Happy Teacher's day - you set a great example in various ways in our forum. πŸ€— We learned a lot and I'm sure in future we will too.πŸ€— You're a blessing without a doubt. Muwah


Thanks a lot Athisda. πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Congrates Fatima for 3rd thread πŸ‘
Meet are sooo cute & sweet love them too😳
first page look so yum and amzing keep rocking πŸ€—

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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

Congrates Fatima for 3rd thread πŸ‘

Meet are sooo cute & sweet love them too😳
first page look so yum and amzing keep rocking πŸ€—


Thanks for visiting Sana πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ch 25 pg 138
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4053402&TPN=138

The intelligent P. Didn't think someone is leaking infor huh😲 that sire surprises me.
Woah Preet is the helper.How cool. I love this scene,πŸ₯³ A good start for my reading.

Ooohhh Bauji walks in and he's being mean flat out to Preet and in front of PB.πŸ˜•

Oh my my 😲 Thsi is action packed scene almost and Preet is the target😲
Hey I lob Preet's reply. Yay Preet woot 😎

Omg 😲 Congo Fatima you proved us something! Harman is not dumb! He could speak!! Oho and that too to his dad?! Omg this is a shocker.πŸ˜†

Wow Harman is a copy of Bauji eh - his moral values totally down the drain. Though I know in real life almost all business ppl act this way. Very few honest ones out there.

Bauji is angry / frustrated / sad may be but I wonder if he would treat any of the other kids this way? πŸ˜• The one in the show would πŸ˜† I've seen many times but here in thsi story I wondered.

I had a suspicion is Maya working for Rampals ? She would do anything for money isn't it?! Is she the one giving out infor on J indistries deals? Bids ?

Wow HB brings happy news but wait Preet is contemplating to be engaged to Ash. Dunno if this is good news though.

Preet thinks he could explain to Meher about Harman's wild idea of cheating Rampals using Ash?😲 Then I'm not sure if he really knows Meher!😲

I give you a pat on back - you've made the story as twisted as possible for Preet to come out.πŸ˜† You've really put him inside some maze that he has to find a way out, it's really complicated. Wow sigh y aren't smart ppl like you working on tv industry ?

But then again no trp rating in forum I guess as opposed to old or middle age aunties' tuning on tv is what tv Chanel relies on - besides their fights with producer.

I'm enjoying the story so far simply cz of all the twists and turns characters have been put through.πŸ˜†

What a complicated endingπŸ˜• but it's of no use explaining to Meher. DJ chachi did something to Meher for sure.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Ch 26 pg 4

Oho fight brewing btw HB and PB πŸ˜† but she is right PB seemed to have turned his back on his lil bro. I don't agree with this sharade they put in to fool Rampals ...whether I like them or not.

You know I never predict much but I knew Meher's engagement would happen like this always. Especially since she seemed to have a war with Preet rather than think things with a straight head.
Preet's is a complete surprise - I mean it happened with his consent. I thought his engagement may happen but by some forceful trick by Bauji. Here it's a trick by Ranplas - no wonder they rule in business world - Junejas are too dumb for words right at this moment,
And all this happened right at their house πŸ˜†πŸ€£ l'd like to give DJ chachi and Rampal a trophie for winning this small fight and fooling entire J house!πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

Fatima you did a fab job writing this - wow how many spins in one sceneπŸ‘ you're my hero⭐️
Sam and Gaurav with preet and Meher's side was cool.
Wow no one saw them kissing 😲'I mean press reporters or guests.
Pre cap is interesting - but nt realky as I don't think Preet could make him tun as that guy has strong support. Meher will be tortured if that guy runs, Either way Meher will get hurt.
Let's see.


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