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Will chk when I finish making edits.
Thank you 🤗
By the way...I love the HerMaya wedding avis you're currently using 😆
Will chk when I finish making edits.
I just cn imagine preet drooling over meeher.but y viren.pls send him sumwhere.N pls make meher confess her love soon.it's kind of boring reading meher chrctr now . although loving preet n her antics .do cntinue soon..thnks fr pm
"Uh...actually Mr. Juneja, it's Viren," he corrected him.
"I thought Preet said your name was Viru," said Prem. He saw his younger brother chuckling in the background and realized his mischief. "...uh...never mind. I'm glad you both could make it tonight."
Viren's dialogues are superbly written. He is quite something - he does a good job making an impression he's an educated fool huh - like he got the facts but he presents it in a tasteless way for others to cringe over the info he is spilling out lol
(I'ts totally your talent getting the right kinda words to set the mood and we could visualize this scene too v clearly.⭐️) so proud of you. Simple thing but totally done in a fab and creative way. 👍🏼
oho Viru clearly offended Kul di 😕 loser
I did like Preet's stepping in for Meher - asking why she needs to change. He's quite in control through out this scene and interaction. Perfectly behaving as a host. 👍🏼
wow so Preet has informed his family the name of Meher's fiance is Viru 😆😆 PB and HB totally caught off guard huh 😆
wow good for Veera that she will continue studies - I don't actually know why her marriage is being rushed here ? 😕 I didn't pay attention probably when you explained about it. oh well.
oye Viru didn't want to spend money on Meher - I was surprised he didn't suggest that she work, save money and then apply for university there. Seeing the way he calculates everything and wanting to make good impression in front of "important ppl such as the Js family" I'd have thought he would propose something like that.
His reply definitely was shocking even to me 😲
Veera's proposal for picnic and Ash's reaction was amazing haha. Her fear for kids I get she really don't have patience.
Now me too curious about the farm house like Preet is. I am guessing you are likely have Meher realise she made a mistake and will admit it to Preet here cz somehow being in her mom's place trigger some kinda brain wave for her? Just guessing
Dinner table scene rocks 👏🥳 well sad Meher didn't know how to manage. Other than that it was a fun filled scene. ⭐️ When I read that she couldn't bend down to eat - I thought her dress was too tight or she's having trouble breathing and almost felt sad. Then realise that's not d case.
🤣 here I did read the blue writing - Meher thinks she could feed birds with the crumbs aww
Kitchen scene this was funny
"It's my house, I can go anywhere I like," Preet pointed out. He gave her a soft smile. ..."
Meher's reaction to expected baby's arrival is unexpected 😲 This is so out of character but looked cute. This gives a chance for Js to see she feels strong attachment towards them hai na. I think that was what you tried to show.
Tnkoo Fatima for masti filled update - totally lob all d characters showed but though kids were mute they made a silent presence here. 😆😆 wow sleep over eh - I bet they're excited!!
Originally posted by: Nikhad003
Awww Fatimaaa!
This update was so funny and lovely. Family scenes along with Gaurav-Sam ones were great.
Viren is just a cheap guy. Uff. Ashlesha being the useless and lifeless as always.
I can't wait to find out what Ash is upto. She is a mystery. I can guess maybe she is actually dating someone else from the phone coversation you wrote in one of your earlier update but I am not sure.
The last scene was surely inspired by Arhi. I can recall a scene like that of Arhi too. My mum was a big fan of that serial and as I was young I used to watch almost all the shows sitting with her. I know Arhi very well and actually I liked them too.
Love you my Meet soul sister. ❤️🤗
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woohoo so my kinda update 😎🥳 cz it's got loads of family scenes
Lob ya Fatima you're shweeet doll ❤️🤗
I really dunno if the reason for lack of participation in your story is the family scenes you add or not - if it's any comfort however little it may be for you - I appreciate this wholeheartedly.🤗I don't know what it is either ..I'm updating regularly...like every 2 weeks...maybe people have lost interest and moved on...or everyone is just busy...I can understand...I'm super busy too. Family scenes have to be there...it is a FF and in this one the family is going to be greatly affected by the decision Meet makes...I cannot avoid them...even if we would like lovey dovey Meet scenes...they can't be forced...my story has to have a certain flow and make sense to me.
I didn't see that title of ch. until now. I mean I read the update w/o looking first. 😆🤡
Lunch break I started to read and then when I came home I finished reading the full ch. 😎
The intro scene was great lob it. I also wanted to have those yummy things they made 😭
hehe totally cool how Veera got trapped in kitchen 👏🤪 I so love when she suffers 🤡 even if she is good in this scene - I could imagine the faces she would have made while putting on apron.
I tend to make her good in my stories...albeit a bit spoiled...😆
ooops I did skip Meher's thoughts - I just don't hv d patience 😕 but I read all her dialoges 😳You didn't miss much...😆...She was just mentally drooling over Preet.Viren Meher convo wow quite interesting!
Evening - from the part where Preet receiving friends so cool. This is one chapter I could read again just cz it's fun 😆🥳 total entertainment with loads of teasing and lot of characters involved too.
wow quite a contrast of what Meher brought - which we later find out as desert and Viren's choice of gift 😆
I didn't quite get Preet's reaction towards the dress part - Meher may have dressed differently than what he's used to seeing but his sis and rest of family I'm sure are totally modern seeing the high profile lifestyle the neighbourhood they live in. I am with Gaurav on this - Preet's over reacting about it.
Actually Preet doesn't mind Meher wearing the dress so much...he actually thought she looked great in it. What bothered him was that he didn't want Viren around her while she was wearing that dress. He's a little possessive about Meher..😆
This was too good Fatima 😆
Prem exchanged a smile with Kulraj. "But she'll be down shortly. I was just getting to know Viru."
"Uh...actually Mr. Juneja, it's Viren," he corrected him.
"I thought Preet said your name was Viru," said Prem. He saw his younger brother chuckling in the background and realized his mischief. "...uh...never mind. I'm glad you both could make it tonight."
Preet alternates between Viru and Chaddi as Viren's names...and Viren gets irritated because his name is Chadd not Chaddi, which means underwear 😆
Viren's dialogues are superbly written. He is quite something - he does a good job making an impression he's an educated fool huh - like he got the facts but he presents it in a tasteless way for others to cringe over the info he is spilling out lol
Bingo! That's exactly what he is...an educated fool...with no taste or tact. 🤔
(I'ts totally your talent getting the right kinda words to set the mood and we could visualize this scene too v clearly.⭐️) so proud of you. Simple thing but totally done in a fab and creative way. 👍🏼
Thank You 🤗
oho Viru clearly offended Kul di 😕 loser
I did like Preet's stepping in for Meher - asking why she needs to change. He's quite in control through out this scene and interaction. Perfectly behaving as a host. 👍🏼
wow so Preet has informed his family the name of Meher's fiance is Viru 😆😆 PB and HB totally caught off guard huh 😆wow good for Veera that she will continue studies - I don't actually know why her marriage is being rushed here ? 😕 I didn't pay attention probably when you explained about it. oh well.
oye Viru didn't want to spend money on Meher - I was surprised he didn't suggest that she work, save money and then apply for university there. Seeing the way he calculates everything and wanting to make good impression in front of "important ppl such as the Js family" I'd have thought he would propose something like that.
His reply definitely was shocking even to me 😲
Veera's proposal for picnic and Ash's reaction was amazing haha. Her fear for kids I get she really don't have patience.
Now me too curious about the farm house like Preet is. I am guessing you are likely have Meher realise she made a mistake and will admit it to Preet here cz somehow being in her mom's place trigger some kinda brain wave for her? Just guessing
Dinner table scene rocks 👏🥳 well sad Meher didn't know how to manage. Other than that it was a fun filled scene. ⭐️ When I read that she couldn't bend down to eat - I thought her dress was too tight or she's having trouble breathing and almost felt sad. Then realise that's not d case.
🤣 here I did read the blue writing - Meher thinks she could feed birds with the crumbs aww
Kitchen scene this was funny
"It's my house, I can go anywhere I like," Preet pointed out. He gave her a soft smile. ..."
Meher's reaction to expected baby's arrival is unexpected 😲 This is so out of character but looked cute. This gives a chance for Js to see she feels strong attachment towards them hai na. I think that was what you tried to show.
Yes! 😛
Tnkoo Fatima for masti filled update - totally lob all d characters showed but though kids were mute they made a silent presence here. 😆😆 wow sleep over eh - I bet they're excited!!
Thanks for reading Athisda, and for leaving me your precious feedback...it really means a lot. 🤗
The kids return in the next update
By the way...I got your PM...thanks for the creations 🤗
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