Fatima's Cozy Corner 3 - Final Update on Pg 114 :) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Chit15

Thanks for pm

Mazaa aagayi update padh ke

Preet & Meher were awesome.He is complete lover boy.He nevers leaves a chance to confess he loves Meher a lot & will always fight for his love.Adorable Preet.

Heer was great. First took class of Prem & then heart conversation with Preet was sweet.👍🏼

Waiting for next update.

"No!" gasped Heer.

"...on the hand," frowned Preet.

"Oh," sighed Heer."

What you made HB forgive within minutes 😲 He needs to realize the mistake u know,

As much as they are my fav duo I don't like what PB did. He's totally part and parcel of bauji's plan or Harman's. Agreeing to what they said is just as bad as planning it on ur own.

Making his lil bro as a toy is so not cool - Heer shouldn't have forgiven.

Anyhow I know these two will be miserable if they were separated oh well.

Ooh Ph scene started off really hilarious 😆 Prem got hit with a pillow woot

The reaction was totally fab👍🏼

The part about "his wife always choose awkward moment for convo reminded me of their swaag raat in show as she was v nervous. Same reaction of PH.

Interesting way to break the news to PB huh wow what do you know! New arrival - Preet's niece or nephew 😎 He's gona be ecstatic huh

So a happy moment for the Js in the middle of a soup they've landed themselves into - actually only Preet is affected by Js stupidity and Heer feels sorry. Besides that all the others involved in this mess. I don't think Veera or Kulraj cares who is their sis in law anyhow.

Prem running to tell everyone was funny too. And Heer's reply was fab. The whole scene was hilarious.

Oooh Preet hasn't figured out a way yet. I dunno wt he'll do either, Somehow I feel the 1st move will be from Rampals - or something happens on that multi couple date night they planned.hmm

So whatever Preet may be doing will be reaction to what Ramplas may do I think,

Or something related to business deal at the office, okie I just hv to wait for that.

You wrote loads of my fav scenes. Preet Prem convo was alright - not fond of it cz Prem wasn't all that nice to his bro.

HB Preet rocked in this update. Meher Preet at the beginning was equally good. As far as their scenes go.

Hilarious and close to reality and some bits of characteristics from show all complimented well.

Lob u for all the hard work you put in. Dunno how difficult or easy to write family scenes or PH scenes but you handled it pretty good. As I see other fans complimented you on PH part here. *pats Fatima's back*

🤗

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

As many of you must know by now, Sushant's next movie M.S. Dhoni: The Untold Story comes out on September 30th. 🥳

That's just 1 week form now!

To celebrate, I have made a Meet VM on my favorite song from the movie: Jab Tak.

Now keep in mind...my VM making skills are amateur at best, but do leave me feedback and let me know what you think. 😳

Thanks:

Click on the link below and enjoy 😛 :

*Special thanks to Maria and Athisda for making episodes and clips available from which I made the VM 🤗

Originally posted by: AASUS

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I started to read as soon as you posted and finished reading next day afternoon.😆

Wow Meher Preet convo is totally rocking.⭐️😲 That kinda surprised it's such a lengthy scene! 😆 I realized that after but while reading that was not noticeable and enjoyed that. There is lot of similarities of Meher & Preet in the show on this particular scene. It gave a deja vu of the show, You rock Fatima.⭐️

Thank you! 😃

Well that was exciting and we move on to umm chat with others - that was fun.

Haha Kuljeet and Viren are perfect pair.

Y'know I'm happy Meher's dad has no voice in this scene - well he's useless to everyone anyhow.

He is sort of a lame duck...I admit. 🤔

Wow Preet's got Viren's number huh y'know that kinda feels disgusting - the thought of this guy but hey Preet's um quite in control. In all honestly I wouldn't be able to save phone # of anyone who I totally dislike or feel disgusted about. Preet is different - he's focused on work in his hand which is to see Meher again & make her aware of her wrong decision.

He's acting mature in this - me totally cannot do this, I kinda appreciate Preet for this.

Well...he's doing whatever he can to get Meher away from Viren and that may include keeping Viren in front of his eyes whenever possible...😆

Oho Preet bumps onto HB

Woohoo PH 😎 Oho fight scene huh 😲 but this is a well deserved one.

Totally on Heer's side 😎

Wow the crazy overprotective motherly instinct 🤣 omg that cracked me up. I could imagine this fight.

Sigh Preet is so forgiving / understanding of his PB - no matter whichever way you put it - and in dramas that's exactly how things happen to get trp - whatever the Js did was purely dumb esp for not realising the strength of their enemy, The Rampals totally in control - it doesn't matter if Maya helped - they were smart enough to utilize an insider to get what they wanted where as the Js sucked 👎🏼

As far as the drama in this story goes - I enjoyed the complex situation Preet has been put into. We have to wait to see how he comes out of this maze or hurdles what not.

Hehe Heer's description about how she looked cracked me up.😆 Just throw in motherly instinct + over protective craziness 😆 that was more comical haha even though she's very angry.

Oye she squeezed ears 🤣 I remember their scenes esp with Prem when Preet interrupts their romance PH would squeeze his ears but Preet escapes.

HB made v good point about Media sneaking in - Preet should think about that when it's concerning Meher.

HB Preet chat was fun😎 my fav🤗 I lob❤️

She's asking about completion 😆 Preet's replies haha

Haha "... other ppl talk about weather but not our Viru ..." Thsi line cracked me up too🤣

This convo 😆 I gasped with HB too even though I knew the story..

"

"No!" gasped Heer.

"...on the hand," frowned Preet.

"Oh," sighed Heer."

I'm really enjoying writing Preet-HB scenes. I'm getting a lot of inspiration for the Kis Desh episodes I've been watching recently. Preet really stuck by her side and never doubted her during the whole Rishap Rampal marriage fiasco. 👍🏼

What you made HB forgive within minutes 😲 He needs to realize the mistake u know,

As much as they are my fav duo I don't like what PB did. He's totally part and parcel of bauji's plan or Harman's. Agreeing to what they said is just as bad as planning it on ur own.

Making his lil bro as a toy is so not cool - Heer shouldn't have forgiven.

Anyhow I know these two will be miserable if they were separated oh well.

I think anyone looking at the situation will realize that hindsight is 20/20...and Prem is truly sorry...so here Heer figures if Preet doesn't blame his PB then perhaps she shouldn't either. Anyway Preet is engaged not married. As long as Prem supports him now Heer will be okay.

Ooh Ph scene started off really hilarious 😆 Prem got hit with a pillow woot

The reaction was totally fab👍🏼

The part about "his wife always choose awkward moment for convo reminded me of their swaag raat in show as she was v nervous. Same reaction of PH.

Interesting way to break the news to PB huh wow what do you know! New arrival - Preet's niece or nephew 😎 He's gona be ecstatic huh

So a happy moment for the Js in the middle of a soup they've landed themselves into - actually only Preet is affected by Js stupidity and Heer feels sorry. Besides that all the others involved in this mess. I don't think Veera or Kulraj cares who is their sis in law anyhow.

Everyone cares...but no one really knows what to do right now.

Prem running to tell everyone was funny too. And Heer's reply was fab. The whole scene was hilarious.

This was actually inspired by a Meet scene 😆

Oooh Preet hasn't figured out a way yet. I dunno wt he'll do either, Somehow I feel the 1st move will be from Rampals - or something happens on that multi couple date night they planned.hmm

So whatever Preet may be doing will be reaction to what Ramplas may do I think,

Or something related to business deal at the office, okie I just hv to wait for that.

You wrote loads of my fav scenes. Preet Prem convo was alright - not fond of it cz Prem wasn't all that nice to his bro.

HB Preet rocked in this update. Meher Preet at the beginning was equally good. As far as their scenes go.

Hilarious and close to reality and some bits of characteristics from show all complimented well.

Lob u for all the hard work you put in. Dunno how difficult or easy to write family scenes or PH scenes but you handled it pretty good. As I see other fans complimented you on PH part here. *pats Fatima's back*

🤗

Originally posted by: AASUS

I did just now 😎 I mustered up d patience somehow.

Page 14 VM Jab tak hai Jaan - beautiful title.

Actually it's just Jab Tak 🤣

What I liked (with as lil as I know about vming)

It was great w/o any effect - looked natural as we watch on tv.⭐️

The scenes switched very smoothly and timing looked perfect according to the beats.

(Now I dunno lyrics so dunno about meaning and all that. I would thing you've matched with scenes./ expressions.)

Fav part or the eye catching - u may find it weird but it's how I am.

Meher stepping down wearing saree - camera shows her full length and Preet turns around to look and his reaction. It's his view of her head to toe. Thsi was indeed nice,

Next one was close up of wedding scene just after they finished ceremony.

Oh yes the beginning was mysterious Preet's head we see and he turns around,⭐️

The arrangement of all cute scenes are well done.

Lovely movie of Meet Fatima. You made me proud.🤗👏 Muwah

You're such a hard worker and admire this about you and for willing to learn things to get better.

To me you're already a wonderful VM maker. VM is great just without any effects too, Your creation is proof of that.

* * Share your creation(s) in Kis Desh creations gallery - not all fans visit forum. Those who go there will see your work. When you have something to share do post it there as well.

Originally posted by: AASUS

oh hehe 😆 wonder where I got rest of the words from. Is that some movie. I think it is. Sorry Fatima.

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

Thanks so much for taking the time out to read and comment Chitra. 🤗

Hey, did you check out the Meet VM on Pg 14?

Originally posted by: Chit15

Hey yes i watched the vm it was beautiful & seeing Meet after such long time😊

Sorry I forgot to mention it

The song & scenes were beautifully blended👏