OS | Teri Ore -Last Part pg 25 up - Page 16 | Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

iheartChai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: -alisha-
that was such a cute ending...i just loved it...3babies omg...just like i wanted it to be in the serial...and totally adore the last part about having more with him...simply out of this world...😃

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Comments like these make me want to continue writing. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story 😊

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luvharshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

awesome ending ...loved it ...👏

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I'm really happy you enjoyed the OS. Believe me it was my pleasure to write this story.

And it was my pleasure reading the story😳❤️

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harshitideewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

awesomee👏 gracee lovelyy update

full of Premeer❤️ it was romanticc

great job👍🏼 andd please continue to writee more will be waiting for next

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midnight_blue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

perfect ending ...premeer happily ever after 😊
loved it..thank u Grace for this wonderful OS

will b waiting for another one.. hope very soon

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newt2007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Thanks Grace for this wonderful OS.👏👏👏

this is for you Grace. 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Prem is so loving. the way you have taken their love is amazing.

Liked the every bit of Prem and Heer conversation. Its so real and touchy.

Framing of Heer-Suraj bondage. then chahat-Suraj bondage so soft and tenderly written.

Wonderful Love story.

Waiting for your more OS on our Premeer.

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

new2007 pls update ur ff and oss

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Biya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

sorry for late reply.

this is very beautifull os.⭐️

i just luved the way u describe their relationship.

prem proposes heer was so sweet.

prem,heer,suraj,chahat and one more is coming.luved the cute little family.

now waiting for your next os.

thanks fr the pm.😊

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AASUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Hi Grace

came across this OS. wow got bit emotional on page 1 🤔

It's your trade mark to describe everything with so much detail and make it a visual treat.

It always seem like we just watched the show rather than reading off the net. You already know that , still I wanted to say, great job 👍🏼

All the update for the SS are v. nice.

I liked the way how Suraj and Heer's relationship developed through out the story.

They all cared v. much and supported each other.

Preet was v. cute and fun. Loved Meher.

Loved Disney trip. Enjoyed reading that part.

PH also v. nice.

Interesting take on how complete strangers with similar issues find a way to deal with the situation. Of course with the help of family everything turned out wonderful. Love happy ending, I'm a sucker for it. So this was a real treat for me 😛

Thank you for taking time to write for us.

Hope you'll be motivated to continue explore your writing.

Y'know I started to read your FF recently, still long way to go.

Once I'm done, I'll give feedback.

You made the story so much fun and enjoyable.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Oblivious
awesome ending ...loved it ...👏

Thank you for taking the time to comment 😃

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