A very good story with premeer and their bundles of joy. See wanted threat worked 😎 🤣.So wanted a poster with GRACE written on it but didnt find it but for other FF s will surely sreach and post with name.
Thnk GOD ... Atlast u hv updated ... It was a really nice part & a nice story ... When r u going 2 update ur other ff & ss ????? specially AWMARW?? ... plz update soon .
Originally posted by: kiran_28
fantastic os grace
wel done👏
i really luved premeer's romantic scenes wen suddenly kulraj interrupted🤣
nd i luvd the way prem proposes heer😳
nd in the last the complete family scene was awesome
thnx 4 pm grace
Originally posted by: vrushika
Hello Grace di! finally we get to see an update.. u were gayab from here..
and we all were waiting for an update!! and finally here it is!
firstly wanna say thank u so much for updating..🤗
but i m sad also coz this os has come to an end.. and i have read the last part..
😭
this was really a great os.. one of my fav.. such a cute story filled with all emotions
i dint want this os to end lekin all good things come to an end!😭
lekin no problems! we are waiting for many more in future!
heheh okay talking about this part!!!!
it was so so good.. awesome as all the others! really really chuper duper cute!
i loved it.. as i have loved always!
was waiting for it from so many days and oly yesterday i went to sleep early. i have noticed whnever i sleep early u update that time. and whener i wait u dont.. heheh anyways back to update!
loved the way u described the first scene! everyone in family room and how premeer relationship had progressed!
loved suraj there.. he and his innocent thinking and talks!
i must have imagined to wht extent preet must have teased prem!
poor prem and kuldi is preet's crime partner!!!!
heheh suraj excited for bed coz of the bed time story??
hehehhe tat was so chweet!!!!
and awww prem also loves listening to stories?? that was cute..
and more cute was suraj telling his mumma his papa's fav story..
wht a cute little family!!!
i love these three!! prem heer and suraj!and suraj loves soft toys just like me.. hehe even i have bought a new one and call it rono!!! hehe my friends say it sounds like a dog's name!:P
prem is very naughty as always!!! hehehhehe looks like was just waiting for
the door to get shut!
hehe actuall;y i found it very cute the way he had said.. " its papa's turn for a bedtime story"
awww prem gave very good reasons as to y he deserves a bed time story:P:P:P
i loved premeer talks.. that was really chweet!!!!"They'll go away soon," he replied as he bent down trying to kiss her neck.
"Prem, you know that won't happen. They are at the door," Heer replied. "We have to answer it. What will they think?"
"That we are sleeping," Prem grumbled.
The loud knock continued but this time it was accompanied by a voice, "Bhaiii...let her go nah, just need to ask her something."
i loved this.. lolz.. it was funny!! poor prem there is always some one to disturb them!
heheh heer is smart she knows how to make it up to her husband... hehehe
preet is a very cute bro! does setting so that his bro and his bhabhi spends some time with each other! kya bhai hai!!!!
He let go of her hand and stuck his hand in his pocket pulling out her engagement ring. "I know when I gave this to you it represented something different. It was uniting two families together. We were doing it to make our parents happy. But now two years and three months have passed and things have changed. You're an amazing person Heer. They way you came into my family and took care of everybody: Bauji, Ma, Kulraj, Kiran, Ketan, Tanu, Preet, Suraj, and me..and I know it was tough. Neither one of us was really ready for this but you didn't complain you fulfilled your duty as the daughter-in-law of the house. You're the most selfless person I've ever known. I sometimes wished I had met you before and gotten to know you better." He gave a shy grin but continued talking, "You know there was a point in my life that I thought everything had just stopped. I was still alive yet not really living. I didn't think I could go out and smile again and appreciate things...the simply things like taking a walk, seeing the sun rise, eating a good meal at a restaurant. But over time you helped me not be afraid anymore. It was okay to step back out there...to share my feelings and appreciate things again. And this ring," holding it up higher, "means so much more now than it did before. This ring is my promise to you for the future. If you'll accept me I'll do everything to make sure you live a fulfilled and happy life."
"Prem," Heer replied as she hugged him. "Of course I do."
He pulled back a little to gaze into her hazel eyes and said, "I want to tell you something...and you don't have to say anything if you don't want to. No pressure." Heer looked at him with confusion unsure why he was talking like this all of a sudden. Prem took a deep breath and continued, "I know I haven't said this to you even though I have been feeling this for quite some time. I've probably expressed it in other ways but never verbally said it. And I probably should have said this sooner considering everything..." pausing in frustration, "sorry...I'm rambling...I should get to the point shouldn't I? I...I love you. I love you Heer." Prem watched with awe as her hazel eyes began to sparkle and then brim with tears.
"I love you too Prem," Heer replied with great emotion in her voice. She hugged him tightly again as she felt her heart beat happily with joy.
loved the way prem said it.. confessed it.. it was really nice.. heart touching and truely beautiful! i loved it di!!!!!...
awww premeer has got chahat in their life and another member adding to family.. chota prem and chota heer??
wow!!!! grace di it was truely awesome.. although i dint wanted it to end but ayways now that's it ended no probs..
it was truely a beautiful journey.. you showed it so nicely..
the story moved on very smoothly.. every emotion everty character was taken care of
how premeer's relationship developed.. everythng was so perfect!
hatts off to you!!! really awesome one.. hheheheh now update other stuff also.. and waiitng for another os.. hehehehhehehe
love ya didz.. enjoyed ur story! thank you for taking time to write such a beautiful story!!! muuha <3 keep smiling..
loads of love
vrushika!
Originally posted by: flowers4u
absolutly wounderful ...really loved it ...
Originally posted by: asherkhirad
First sorry for late reply , second THANK U FOR UPDATING and third wow what an update LOVE IT ,really love this OS it was awesume i like your all FF...u r an awesume writer and it was too that how the releation b/w premeer change the in end the three kids...that was too gud...so waiting hope so u also update your other FF too and write more OS... 👏👏⭐️
Originally posted by: HARSHITI12
loved the update...
Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
The family story time was really cute and sweet... lovely scene .. suraj is such a sweetheart... so now finally they ralized how much they love each other..and chahat is so cute.. loved how u ended the part..
Awesome OS...
its always a treat to read your works... hope more is coming soon...
thanks for the pm...
take care
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