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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Hiii every1
I actually wanted to write one last os before taking a break but........😕
since i made up my mind that it's the last...ideas are jus flowing in n
i couldn't actually call it an os now...😆
if only i had time i would have made it a ff but for now it's a ss..😛
I'm naming it Bahara 😕 as the song inspired me to write....
Read this part till i shortlist topic for my seminar...kal tak hi deadline hai 😭




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Posted: 14 years ago
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BAHARA

PART-1

"Baat mat karo mujhse'. Mein ne kaha tha ek hafte pehle aana aur tum ab aarahi ho shaadi ke 4 din pehle'.. aaj bas koi bahaana nahin chalega'"

Teji started to rant upon seeing her best friend. She wasn't only her best friend but also her best enemy. Since college days, they used to fight like cat and dog and now even after years they still are the same. They won't leave even a single chance of pulling each other's legs.

"Teek hai.. mat kar'. Mein yahaan tere liye thodi na aayi hoon'."

She walked away pretending as if she's not bothered at all'. She walked into the house handing her bag to a servant and then greeted Daljeet who was smiling upon seeing the exchange between her bhabhi and her friend. She dared not to speak a word between them fearing she would become their target.

"Daljeet aise kadi kadi kya dekh rahi hai.... pooch isse' yeh aise akeli kaise chali aayi?? baaki log kahaan hai???"

Teji nudged Daljeet turning her face away. Poor Daljeet turned her face towards her expecting that she would answer.

"Oyi' tu aise kya dekh rahi hai mujhe??? Jaa na' teri beti ki shaadi hai'kitna saara kaam pada hai'. abhi tak kuch bhi nahi hua' Jinhe jawab chahiye woh khud pooch sakti hai' yahaan na koi ghoonga hai aur na koi behara' tu jaa'"

"Gayatri aunty!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

A girl shrieked from the top of the stairs and came down running. Without wasting a moment, she squashed Gayatri into a hug. Breaking the hug,

"Meher'. Meri bachi' kaisi hai tu?? Arre yeh kya kitni patli ho gayi hai' mujhe pata hai yahaan kuch logon ko gussa karne ke siva aur kuch aata nahin hai' ab mein aagayi hoon na.. tu fikar mat kar' mere tere saare pasand ke cheezein banaoungi'"

Gayatri lovingly patted her cheek.

"Haan.. haan' abhi sirf moti lag rahi hai' ab sumo banna baaki hai'."

Teji retorted angrily.

"Dekhiye na aunty.."

Meher complained to her aunt who loved her most among all.

"Beta' aksar aisa hota hai'jab log jalte hai kissi cheez se' tum fikar mat karo'"

Gayatri smilingly remarked while Meher pulled her tongue out and teased Teji.

"Jaane bhi do aunty' in dono ko na hume saatane ke siva kuch bhi nahin aata' hum bekar mein time waste kyun karein.. chaliye hum chalte hain' waise aapko pata hai' mein ne aapke liye kuch special gift laaya hai' chalo chalte hain'"

A boy came and held Teji by shoulder and giving her a side hug showed his tongue out to Meher and Gayatri.

"Preet'. Aagaya mera beta' chalo chalte hain' mere pass bhi tumhare liye surprise hai'" Teji and Preet left from there leaving a fuming Meher and Gayatri behind.

Teji took Preet to the dining table and placed a box in front of him. He opened it to see yummy besan ke ladoo and his mouth started watering. He gave a quick hug to his Teji aunty and started relishing them.

Meher sat on a chair fuming as she saw Preet enjoying. Gayatri joined them soon with something hid behind her back. She went to Meher and handed her gift. It was a box of chocolates and Meher hugged Gayatri sticking her tongue out at Preet.

"Tum dono bhi na' kabhi shaanti se nahin bait sakte' kaise bigad ke rakha hai dono ko'" Lalit and Balraj joined them when they saw their children being spoiled by their wives.

"Itna boora feel hone ki jaroorat nahin hai mere eid ke chaand'. Aap ka bhi waqt aagaya'" Preet smirked at an angry Lalit who was ready to chase Preet by now.

Preet ran away from there and so did Meher after him as she had a lot to know, leaving the elders on their own.

"Arre Teji.. ab bas di karo' gussa chodo na'"

Balraj looked at Teji with pleading eyes.

"Waise toh maaf kardeti lekin ab bilkul nahin' poochiye inse humare daamad ji hai kahaan???"

Teji asked frowning.

"Acha' jo hai unki toh koi kadar hi nahin hai' aur chinta ho rahi hai toh apne shehzaade ki'." Lalit pouted as if angry.

"Haan.. bilkul' daamad ki fikar ho rahi hai' lekin samdhiyon ka toh khayal hi nahin hai'" Gayatri joined Lalit in the game.

"Jab bta jaisa damaad ho toh pyaar toh barsana hi padega.."

Balraj winked at them.

"Abhi abhi toh business join kiya hai na' toh kaam mein ulja hua hai' raat tak aajayega'" Lalit answered their questions.

"Lagta hai bohut mehnat karwaayi jaa rahi hai'"

Teji questioned.

"Haan' bilkul.. aur kyun na karein'. Ab jaldi se bahu ko jo le jaana hai'"

Gayatri answered.

"Bas Teji' hum dono baad mein ladlenge' ab mujhse intezaar nahin ho raha' hai kahaan meri bahu???"

Gayatri was getting impatient.

Teji smiled and signaled her to turn and see.

Gayatri stood there with wide smile on her face mesmerized by her to-be- daughter-in-law. His son is definitely gonna have a tough time.

"Heer!!" Lalit squealed and Heer ran to him quick.

She was about to touch his feet when he pulled her into a bear hug and then followed by Gayatri.

She was Lalit's pet since childhood. He always longed to have a daughter but had two sons so his wish was partially fulfilled with the birth of Heer, his best friend's daughter.

Gayatri looked at her lovingly but she knew that Heer wasn't actually focusing on them and was trying to search through the crowd for someone, whom she could easily make out.

"Gayatri chalo ab chalte hain' ashlesha se toh bhi milna hai' warna kahegi shaadi uski hai lekin hum uska khayal hi nahin rakh rahe hain'"

Teji pulled Gayatri.

The men walked away smiling while Teji walked towards the stairs and Heer left behind who was still lost in her world. Gayatri stepped beside her and slowly whispered

"Usse bohut jaroori kaam aagaya'. Humare saath nahin aaya' raath ko aayega'"

That made Heer come out of her trance and she immediately turned a shade of red due to the smirk on Gayatri's face. Heer bit her lower lip and ran away from there. Gayatri stood there smiling for a second and then left as she heard Teji calling out for her.

She joined Teji who nudged her asking what happened upon noticing the goofy smile on her face which wasn't ready to leave.

"Mujhe lagta hai ki jald hi humara intezaar katam hone wala hai'. shayad dono khud hume aake baataye ki woh dono ek doosre se'."

Gayatri looked at Teji hopefully.

"Agar woh na bhi kahe na' kya tumhe lagta hai ki unke pass koi aur option hai?? Hum unhe ek karke hi rahenge na.."

She winks at Gayatri and then both of them hug laughing.

Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
How was it?? 😕
I'm surprised myself that i did write a whole part without Prem or Heer or Premeer ...🤣
but don worry the next coming parts will of prem, heer n premeer........😉
Sooner u comment the sooner will be the next one...😉
Edited by premeer4rever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Thats beautiful kavya
u should wrte on regular basis not aftr so much tym
but no PH
not fair
u btr upload next part very very soon
Ashlesha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awwww that was lovely kavs
cant wait for the next part
gayatri was so cuteeee in this one
n i liked the gayatri n teji friendship thing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
nice start
loved the G3 and Teji friendship
the introduction itself is nice. you wrote without our Prem. not bad but missed him.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
aww tnt was sooo sweet...lovely....lucd gay3 teji scenes....soo funnny...thanks for pm and continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: premeer4rever

How was it?? 😕
I'm surprised myself that i did write a whole part without Prem or Heer or Premeer ...🤣
but don worry the next coming parts will of prem, heer n premeer........😉
Sooner u comment the sooner will be the next one...😉




hey no premeer for that i have to kill u......................but waiting for next part...................and ur doing SS omg.......very gud kavs...........nice decision sisyyyy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
great part yaar 👍🏼......................
loved it..............
thanksss for pm dear.................
update soon now i can't wait...................

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